Oh i really loved this story, only thing you left out was the reason Inuyasha did not aid his brother in the battle for his land. Kagome mentioned Sesshomaru should talk to him and hear his reason, but that never happend. I would really like to know because it keeps me from feeling it is complete, throught the story that is what i wanted to know the most. Unless i somehow missed it, which is plausible.
sexyrebal- Fri 10 Aug 2007
so luv the story it's was reallly good and so luv the lemons in it to i hope u make a another but the story was realllly good iyou're a really good writer
ioana- Thu 21 Jun 2007
hey....just wanted to tell you that i enjoy reading all of your fanfics....they are really great and i will be reading more of it in the future....the lemons are super nice and i do not mind the number,,,,they are truly great....keep up the good work
ioana- Thu 21 Jun 2007
hey....just wanted to tell you that i enjoy reading all of your fanfics....they are really great and i will be reading more of it in the future....the lemons are super nice and i do not mind the number,,,,they are truly great....keep up the good work
stacie gustafson- Tue 23 Jan 2007
Fantastic! but i feel like you could add more chapters..not a very concluding ending...
I really loved this one as well but now that I've finished I realized that I have nothing else to read anymore oh well it was too great of a story to pass up.
xXTsuki73Xx- Sun 19 Nov 2006
To Rinseternalsoul,
I would just like to say that "A Sister's Gift" was the most beautiful, well writen, fan fic that I've ever read. Good luck to you and your future stories! I know that they will be a sucess!
-Tsuki
Raven- Sat 04 Nov 2006
Sesshomarus mother isn't dead. She is alive and well. She appears in Volume 48 of the manga.
omg... I love this fic!!! excellent!!
I must say that it just kinda stopped though... I still like though!!
Tana-san- Tue 10 Oct 2006
Your work is truly in the top of the GREATEST WRITERS OF ALL TIME. I truly wonder if I've read all of your stories. I know that with each and every one you NEVER disappoint me and the lemons are always the best. Do you know Jane Drew's work? Her Frozen Monnlight was the first fic my 19 yr old daughter introduced me to and then I got totally addicted to fanfics. I truly love InuYasha and Rurouni Kenshin. But anyway... Keep on going Rin Girl. Maybe you can drop me a line to let me know where you have all your stories listed and make me a very happy hentai woman. My daughter says these stories have turned me into a sex monkey and her poor dad has to put up with me. She's the one who got me into these stories in the first place and because of writing and shall we say "creative" talent such as yours, my husband isn't complaining. Love what you write. Another happy and loyal fan!
Time for my review. Here is my constructive critisism. I left a previous review in hopes that you would correct the kiss problem in chapter 16. I didn't understand it.
A beta would be helpful since there were some mistakes, but nothing too bad. The worse thing I saw was not stopping quotations where they needed to be stopped and began again. For instance. "I told him, she said in a soft voice, that it was alright." You need to put quotations before she and after voice, otherwise it sounds like that person said the entire thing.
I will congratulate you on the lemons though. The last one was the only one that didn't take me over the edge! And to be completely honest, very very few lemons have even come close to that.
Ever since Resmiranda wrote 'Tales from the House of the Moon', the title for the castle has been overdone far too much, but I also know that this fic was written a while ago and could have been one of the firsts to use the name, so I won't hold it against you.
This fic was well written and easy to follow. You are one of my beta's favorite authors and now I see why. Very nice. I hope you keep up the excellent work.
I have not had any complaints about this fic until now. You wrote that Sesshomaru pulled Kagome into an embrace and was nuzzling her neck, but in the next paragraph said that the kiss ended. It didn't make any sense and I just figured that you went back to rewrite that part and forgot to delete some of it. I hope you clear up this minor error. It's a wonderful fic otherwise.
That was an amazing story. I absolutly loved it. You are a wonderful writer.
Tsuki Doriimaa- Wed 12 Jul 2006
As with the other two fics I've read from you... BRAVO! I've absolutely loved it.. yet again. ^___^ Especially the way you wrote Kagome and Sesshomaru, Kikyo and Inuyasha. I can't honestly say that I've read another story where they all got along, worked together - they're always fighting about something. So this was a very pleasent change, and I dearly like it. ^__^ You write wonderfully, I'm glad that you post what you write for readers like me to enjoy them. Their awesome to read! ^_~ So thanks!
Oh yes; I don't want to dig up old wounds and you said not to send e-mails, but I'd like to extend my sorrows (can't think of the word I want, sorry) for the loss of your father. Its very nice you dedicated this story to him, I know he's proud of you. ::smiles and waves:: Take care hun! Bless be in all you do. JA!
Lady Kirara- Mon 10 Jul 2006
Wow. When I read the first chapter of this story, I absolutely fell in love with it. It is deff. one of the best I've ever read. ^_^ I liked it so much, that I went through and read the rest of your stories to see if they were as good. And I wasn't disappointed. :P You should deff. think about putting this story up on FF.net. Keep writing. I can't wait to see what you come up with next!!
~Lady Kirara
Lady Kirara- Mon 10 Jul 2006
Wow. When I read the first chapter of this story, I absolutely fell in love with it. It is deff. one of the best I've ever read. ^_^ I liked it so much, that I went through and read the rest of your stories to see if they were as good. And I wasn't disappointed. :P You should deff. think about putting this story up on FF.net. Keep writing. I can't wait to see what you come up with next!!
~Lady Kirara
chaoswingdragon- Fri 26 May 2006
Wow!! When I fist saw your story and nopticed it was 53 chapters I was like 'I dont know if i'll be able to finish this!!' I was going to review earlier but I just got sucked right into the story. It's a good thing I'd already brought my chocolate chips over with me to snack on!! I can't say well enough how much I loved your tale. Well, I guess I could gush more but im off to check out what other interesting little tidbits crawled out of your mind. With love, Chaos.
Megan Consoer- Wed 24 May 2006
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
Megan Consoer- Wed 24 May 2006
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
Jade Namida- Tue 09 May 2006
I'm on my third go of this fic, so there's no need for me to tell you that I thoroughly enjoy it, lol.
Brandi- Mon 08 May 2006
I love ur writing, im shocked to say the least that u wrote soo much. at frist, when i began reading, i thought this story was doomed. but u did it!! u pulled it off, i gotta hand it to u. you managed to keep sessy submissive, yet still sessy. it was werid, BUT AWESOME all the same! i wouldnt change a thing. and as for it being to smutty (if there is such a thing) I WOULD TELL WHOEVER SAID THAT TO DIE!!! although, im a very opininated kind of person like that. i really loved ur writing and i recommend u keep up the GREAT work and write more. oh and dont listen to the assholes out there...only listen to the nice comments.
again great job!!!
P.S. i will be adding this story to my favorites.
Lazzieh Bones- Mon 08 May 2006
WOW you're so good. . . keep up the good work
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