*points to chap 77*
woah.
that's gotta be the best/worst cliffie I've ever seen =D
Milana DesPana- Fri 15 Jun 2007
0o0 WOW this is the best fanfic I have ever read great loemons niccccce fight sceens and an amazing ending
nIcOlE- Fri 18 May 2007
i salute you for being against lemon and smutss or is it only for those who you don't like?
29 Soft Kisses- Mon 14 May 2007
Oh wow, two days to read 79 chapters.
ANd I must say it was worth it. Although I did notice some errors but not many...just some spelling and pretense errors.....
I can only imagine the work and effort you put into this.
ohiowriter- Mon 14 May 2007
I thought you said that the door to his room only opened for the lord and his lady, but Rin and Jaken could get in there, too. How?
katie- Sun 13 May 2007
OMG!!! THIS WAS SUCH A GREAT FIC THAT I READ THE ENTIRE DAMN THING IN ONE DAY!!! I COULDN'T STOP!! IT WAS AWESOME!! GREAT JOB AND I HOPE TO SEE ANOTHER FIC OF YOURS UP SOON!!! KEEP UP THE WORK...AND AGAIN WOW!!
Chibikawaiichan- Sat 12 May 2007
waaah, how beautifull! X3
Silvermist- Fri 04 May 2007
~~NOT a flame!!!~~
This story is giving my brain a good workout. word usage or what i suspect to be a rather futsy spellchecker substituting words that while making no sense at all to the sentances, can be with the right amount of twisting, turned into a reasonable semblance of the intended word.
I'm enjoying this fic, quiet alot acctually. It is more a matter of puzzling out the intent at 6am. Down with insomnia!
Good work,
The taleweaver
alandrias- Sat 24 Mar 2007
this was an awsome story... i love it so much well done
shaanjin- Fri 23 Mar 2007
I really like the storyline. It may have been already used, but it is not overused and you have a very fine way of developing the plot.
Oh, by the way. It isn't really a flame, only a hint how to improve the overall quality of your story, because no story can be wholly perfect, we can only try to get near it: I would advise you to ask a BETA reader (or best two, because four eyes see more) to go over your fic and correct the spelling or tipping mistakes. There are quite a few. Your grammar is good.
If you wanted me to, I would gladly comply.
shaanjin
This was a great fic i loveed it until the very end thanks fo sharing it with us
Senka- Fri 05 Jan 2007
^^ thank you for posting the missing chapters!!!!! O! i am so excited to read!!!!
Luna- Thu 04 Jan 2007
i hope it doesn't end like that because it says complete in the discription. i love it so far but i really hope it doesn't end that way
kie- Sun 31 Dec 2006
Your story is very good but I wonder if you know that it's under "completed." I was quite surprised when I realized that I was at the end of the last chapter and that the story wasn't finished.
Could you e-mail me when your story is done? I don't get to use the computer for fun much and I'd like to set aside some time to finish it.
Oh .. and HURRY WITH IT PLEASE!!!
(tokelauteine4evaz@yahoo.com)
I love your fanfic. I read it all on some other fic site...animespiral i believe... and it was amazing. but sadly I have forgotten how it ended since it was like three years ago. I will await your next updates! Ja ne!
britt- Sat 16 Dec 2006
please! please. please. finish the stoorryy. It's SO good.
kat- Fri 15 Dec 2006
omg!!! evil cliff hanger update soon please??? sessho has groveling to do!
Senka- Sat 11 Nov 2006
please please please update the rest of this, i know theres ten and then some chapters left *if i can remember correctly* please!!! i use to have this fic but then it went byebye! and i would love to read it again, please! i know im not the only one! if u can just update it in one chapter, copy and paste. please!!! *puppy eyes*
Katsumi- Wed 11 Oct 2006
I like this story so far! Keep up the good work. Though there are a few...spelling and grammatical errors it is, over all, quite good.
lovesbooks16- Sat 07 Oct 2006
I was enjoying your story and then came upon the last chapter posted. It didn't seem to be finished. I think I have read your story before and enjoyed it so much that I had to read it again. Is there another website that contains the full story? I would really enjoy reading it fully again. Thank you for sharing your wonderful talent.
Stacie- Mon 18 Sep 2006
WHY IS THIS IN THE FUCKING COMPLETE SECTION?!!! UPDATE!! I HAVE WAITED FOREVER FOR YOU TO FUCKING UPDATE!!!! DO IT NOW!!!
please and thank you!
Jessica- Wed 13 Sep 2006
I love this story and I can not wait to read the rest of it please let me know when you have the next chapter up. Thank You.
lovesbooks16- Sun 20 Aug 2006
i was wondering if there was any more chapters to this story. It seemed to be cut off but I remember reading the whole thing. I was so enjoying it. Let me know if I'm mistaken please. Thanks.
Xiomara- Sat 05 Aug 2006
Wow!!!!
Geez, louise!!!!
Your story is awsome... ^_^ you have any idea how many stories i have read? ....*suspence* many okay.... lol.
Well i was just letting you know how awsome your story really is!
I would love you sooo much if you e-mail everyt time you post a new chapter.... *begs* please, pretty please, with sugar on top... ^_^
I would gladly appriciate it!!!
*|Xiommy|*
wait... what happens next? please update, cause you can't just leave the story like that. PLEASE!!!!!!!
Marjorie- Tue 25 Jul 2006
AHHH OMG THAT'S NOT COMPLETE!!!! Pleaz update! This story is really awesome and there's NO WAY u can finish it like this!
Mit SS- Wed 19 Jul 2006
AHHH!!!! plz UPDATE!!!!!
i love aur sory but i despise
unfinished ones.....
Ezriee- Fri 14 Jul 2006
I just wanted to stop and say that i absolutely love this fic. I read it before in the past and had to reread it. :) I just wanted to let you know that that i think the site lost the last few chaps of this story because I could have SWORN that this fic had already been completely...much to my dispare because I wanted it to keep going *pouts*. I would be a very happy lil ezzy if you were to repost them if you got the chance to. Again, awesome fic and I look forward to reading more of your fics.
Ezri-Candy
stacie- Wed 12 Jul 2006
YOU CALL THAT COMPLETE!! WHAT THE CRAP! FINISH IT!
genevieve- Sat 08 Jul 2006
PLEASE UPDATE IM BEGGING YOU! I love this story! PLEASE =)
Dark Topaz- Thu 06 Jul 2006
this doesn't seem complete
sssc- Mon 19 Jun 2006
awww u just left the story are you going to update it?
10/10!!!
Kylee- Sat 17 Jun 2006
I was just wondering if this fic is actually finished....it says it is but i read it and either my computer isn't workin right or something cuz i could not get the whole thing....so i was just wondering about that... otherwise i really like the fic and would like to read the end!! lol
Dee- Thu 15 Jun 2006
I am sooo loving this story. I cannot wait until you finish it. Please hurry with the next chapters. Waiting impatiently.
Dee- Thu 15 Jun 2006
I am sooo loving this story. I cannot wait until you finish it. Please hurry with the next chapters. Waiting impatiently.
Karu Moonlight Shadow- Tue 13 Jun 2006
hi it is an awsome story but the status says complete and i was wondering if it was or not because it leaves a cliff hanger on and if it is complete are you amking a sequel and if you not that sucks but if it isn't complete please update asap! i really like this story! and you mite wanna change your status! Thanks!
~Sesshoumaru Crazy~
thehotty- Wed 07 Jun 2006
Oh! MORE!!!!! Please send more! I really like it!
p.oed reviewer- Tue 30 May 2006
omfg i have been reading this story 4ever and by gah its not even finished!!!! pissed...beyond belief...evil writter
p.oed reviewer- Tue 30 May 2006
omfg i have been reading this story 4ever and by gah its not even finished!!!! pissed...beyond belief...evil writter
p.oed reviewer- Tue 30 May 2006
omfg i have been reading this story 4ever and by gah its not even finished!!!! pissed...beyond belief...evil writter
p.oed reviewer- Tue 30 May 2006
omfg i have been reading this story 4ever and by gah its not even finished!!!! pissed...beyond belief...evil writter
p.oed reviewer- Tue 30 May 2006
omfg i have been reading this story 4ever and by gah its not even finished!!!! pissed...beyond belief...evil writter
p.oed reviewer- Tue 30 May 2006
omfg i have been reading this story 4ever and by gah its not even finished!!!! pissed...beyond belief...evil writter
Hey, I LOVE your story! Do you finish is and then not up lode the rest? I really wanna know what happens. If you've finished it please let me know I really enjoy reading it. You’re a very talented writer.
~desdemona
Sess' Sakura- Thu 18 May 2006
I just wanted you to know that I love this story. You did a great job with it.
Sakura
Cochrann- Tue 16 May 2006
you have your story listed as complete, when it definitely is not complete! so plase correct that it's really infuriating. Otherwise it's a great story and I absolutely love it and hope you finish it, surely it will only take a few more chapters to complete - at least that's how I see it.
Hailey- Wed 10 May 2006
hi i was wondering if you can send me the link to your story.. "At what price" when it is done! I can't believe that you wrote over 70 pages but it was mostly half a page compared to others so i guess i understand...lol!
Thanks!
btw the story is pretty good...hope you wrote more..if you did can you send me links to completed stories
Thanks again!
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