Wow, awesome, amazing, are just some of the words I think of after reading this fanfic. I can't wait to read the sequel. You did a great job! 3

They should make a movie out of this :)

just to let you know, the first time that Inuyasha transformed into a full-youkai was when they were attacked by Goshinki, the mind reading demon, the time with the spider youkai was when sesshomaru came to see if it was true or not that he could turn into a full-youkai. just to let you know, i'm not criticizing you or anything

It was a beautiful story. Possibly a second part....lol....

Wow this story is so good! I am really glad there is a sequel to it and I look forward to it being just as well written. This is one of those stories that always stands away from most others. Keep up the good writing!

alrite i'm going to say what i need to say first and then i'll go into further explanations afterwards. that was a very good fanfic but some parts seemed to drag on forever and i'll be honest and say i skimmed over some parts. alright, now with that done i can continue. i think the whole concept of your story was bloody brilliant! now that is creativity and a half! brava!!! the only problem is that you seemed to drag on certain things like their emotons and thoughts, and although that is necesary it woud be nice if you could have put more dialogue and such to get to the point. as well, i'm very fond of keeping sesshoumaru's character the same to a degree, but seriously, i think kagome should have totally gone to the well or at least fought him a bit more so that he would have to out right fight for her to stay, i think he needed to do it. i'm starting to sound like they're real people but i don't care i'm being honest. i think that kagome should have totally put him in his place and told him exactly how she feels and then at least attempted to go back into the well and sesshoumaru have to fight for her to stay and admit his feelings instead of this "you are mine" biznass and her being won over by his kisses. phew, now that i've vented that im all good. sorry if it feels like i'm bashing you b/c i sorta am but not really b/c i really did thoroughly enjoy your fanfic, i thouht it was brilliantly written and totally original. by jove this is a long review, but no matter, brava and thumbs up, it was truly fantastic!

awesome story although it took me a while to read it... do you have a sequal out by any chance? I'm going to look under your profile just to see but great job

I'm breathless and i have no critique for you.
I must say this rarely (if ever) happens to me...
If you are still around and posting, finish up the sequel.
Great story!

OMG!!!! I absolutly Loved your story! VERY few stories have brought tears to my eyes and yours did! It is one of the best stories I have read in a very long time!

o.o omg this is so creepy >.>...x-x

"Kagome screamed the command at Inuyasha and in the blink of an eye they were all coughing and waving the dust out of the air and their eyes. When the dust cleared they all looked down at the grown."

In your first chapter you mispelled ground in the paragraph copied above. :)

that was amazing! your story was so emotional! it was full of hard demanding choices & didn't shy away from reality ( everything wasn't sugar-coated). and then there was th human philosiphy part (i think that's what you call it), how people (or demons) react and how their reactions afect those around them. how you can read & communicate someone other than talking. it showed how when you're in love you lose contro and how over-whelming it can be, over-whelming but powerful. how one emotion can lead or transform into another, how dangerous anger can be, how power corrupts, how with great power comes great responsibility, how courage is something to be admired, how knowledge/wisdon is poower, these and many more. your story was truly moving, holding many life lessons. it made me feel like i was standing right there watching the plot unfold, hearing, sensing, smelling and seeing everything happen . oh, and i loved the riddles and mysteries, always leaving me wanting to know more, and then it's like a light goes on in your head when you listen to kagome putting everything together. you also learn about respect & bottling up emotions. it kinda reminded me of this quote i heard " the walls we build keep out the sadness, but they also keep out the joy", not that sesshomaru seemed sad before, but i guess that's cause he never really had many emotions to begin with til he met kagome. it also showed how important soeone can be to you, so important you're willing to give up your very life for them, to let them go knowing it'll hurt you but they'll be happy. your story was amazing, the plot & everything else incorerated in it, i'm sure there's a million things i'm not mentioning, and half of those things i don't think i could put into words so just know your story has touched me & you are an extrodinary writer with a gift that should be shared with the world.
one SATISFIED reviewer,
michy

wow! that was great. i must say u did well duches. and ur batas did a wonderful job. i look forward to the sequal. dont make me wait too long please. laters guys till next time.

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YAY! she is back. *sighs* now i cant kill u....oh well kags is back and sessho is not lonely anymore ^_^ laterz guys mika luvs u !

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WENDY!grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr! HOW COULD U? U KILLED HER. U FRIGGIN KILLED HER.*breathes in a long slow breath* ok calm down mika......*sighs* u know what wendy?!* smiles brightly* i want ur blood ^_^ im gonna hunt u down and enjoy a wonderful blood bath courtesy, U! *does happy dance* MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! you and duches better fix this or.......booh! i'll be right on ur tail ahhhhhahahahaha! *sighs* this is my fair warning. mika loves u ^_^ hehehe DONT CROSS ME! okay buh-bye now

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um....dont mean to be mean or anything but i jiust noticed this um.....first u said that inu would talk about his father freelyatleast what he knew of his father and when it kame to his okaa-san and his aniki he would freeze up and jump in a tree or something so as not to talk about it. but now in this chapter it says that he talked about his mother freely and when it came to his dad and bro he would go silent. i dont get it. maybe its like a mistake on your part or if its not i am extreamly confused. well i just thought i should let u know. this is a wonderful fic in any case so dont feel anyhow k! mika loves you^_^ laterz!

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I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?

OMFG how could u kill Kagome???>:( i should so hunt u down and possibily KILL YOU how could u kill KAGOME

Loved it really loved the story though it needs more