OMG i was like crying at the last to chapter still crying lol,its so sad but know good,please keep writing.
Sharilynn

WAIT! Ok., so i loved the story..but to be honest, too much was left unsaid. It never really explained how her father died...or how she did it. It also just kinda threw rin out the window....she wasn't really even a big part or concern in the later chapters. It never said why she had to go through pain to get her powers...it was just kinda there. I did love the story idea...and the romace between sesshy and kags....but there's just so much in-between that needed to be there...but wasn't. It was worth reading though.,..and i enjoyed it. You did a good job...just those are some things to improve on maybe. Sorry if this sounded more like a flame than a normal review. -FF

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?