I really like this story(whoops!). I think the emotions were potrayed pretty well in relevance to the passage of time. I also like the concept of seshoumarou being, well, not rich. Most writers assume that after so long, he would have had time to amass his fortune, it's rather refreshing actually and it emphasizes his 'devil take it' attitude and the tragedy of being one of the few demons left.
Megan- Tue 30 May 2006
I really like this chapter. I think the emotions were potrayed pretty well in relevance to the passage of time. I also like the concept of seshoumarou being, well, not rich. Most writers assume that after so long, he would have had time to amass his fortune, it's rather refreshing actually and it emphasizes his 'devil take it' attitude and the tragedy of being one of the few demons left.
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