| I'm so sad you haven't updated in such a long time which leads me to believe that you won't be finishing this story. In any case, its a great story and I hope you do plan to finish it one day.
| Hey.......wow.....like not been updated since like 2006.....that's a long time....and I understand if you don't want to write anymore...but this was the first ever fanfiction I read and I would love to see how it ends....
fel- Tue 11 Mar 2008
you're story is great~ &i love it.
& i would like to be on your update list (: all the best in your writing
fel- Tue 11 Mar 2008
you're story is great~ &i love it.
& i would like to be on your update list (: all the best in your writing
Noacat- Mon 10 Mar 2008
Dude. What a place to leave it -- an eternal cliff! WAH!
This story is wonderful. I almost forgot about it but in going through my favorites, I found it again.
Update when you can.
i love this story!
its soooo goood!!
can you please!
write some more!
XOXOXO
elizabeth e hogan- Sat 17 Nov 2007
| please hurry up and update
Insanity- Fri 17 Aug 2007
| It's been approximately one year and three months, counting, since you've updated. I thank you for the lesson in patience, but I think I will literally go insane if I don't find the conclusion to this story.
| So the big question is.... when are you going to update? Are the kids taking up a lot of your time? If so completely understand that. Just, can you like leave us a little note telling us why you've been gone for so long. I so love this story and I thought I left a review the first time I read this story sometime last year, but when I was roaming through the reviews I didn't see it. So I'm making sure to leave one now. Please please, pretty please come back and review.
Kim- Tue 31 Jul 2007
| lov it. Can't wait for what happens next.
| WOW!!! I've just finished reading everything that you've read so far and I cant wait for the next chap... I'm on pins and needles here. Please end my agony and hurry up alittle please!?! I'm so excited. Let me know when u post a new chap! My email is Bookworm7313@aol.com...thanks!
| I just found this story and enjoyed it so much but the cliff hanger ending is killing me! Please come back and finish it. Pretty please with sugar on top!
Arisa-kun- Thu 12 Jul 2007
| -tears up and makes puppydog pout- please update soon......please -starts to cry-
becca- Sat 07 Jul 2007
| omg omg omg i love this story to death i was in suspense the whole time you must get another chapter up soon! i kno it must be hard but omg i have to kno how it ends!! ahhh
Napua- Wed 02 May 2007
| Hello again. I am wondering if you will be updating this story soon. It's been almost a year and I'm dying here. Don't leave me in a cliffy. Anywayz I hope that you are in the best of health and continue to write this story. I hope that the update will come soon. Thank you.
| thats so not cool. i just found this fic and got hooked and then when its gets to the juicy part there's no button for the next chapter...do you think it got lost? We must find it posthaste!~ i shall offer you my services in finding the lost button o.o
lilmoe31- Sat 17 Mar 2007
| What the Hell?!! Are you going to update soon are what?!! We have been waiting for quite sometime now and you are just sitting back laughing at us. Tell us something, let us know what the hell is up. Cause we need an update, you tease. Sorry bout that. Just rantting on a bit. I just love your ff so much and is in serious need of an update. Let your fans know what is up though.
Metis- Thu 15 Mar 2007
| If you're alive, update once. If dead, update twice. If in limbo, I'M COMING AFTER YOU!! PLEASE update this wonderful story!
killingperfection- Thu 15 Mar 2007
| i need more!!
Metis- Sun 04 Mar 2007
| I'm nearing the 'huddle in the corner and whimper while rocking back and forth' stage. I feel like I'm in limbo. I'm nearing the 'growl and bite unfortunate passersby' stage! ;) UPY DAYTY PLEASY!!!
Ayame- Wed 28 Feb 2007
| Great fic. But are you going to add more? I'm dieing to know the ending!
sweet- Fri 16 Feb 2007
| MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE
sweet- Fri 16 Feb 2007
| MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE
sweet- Fri 16 Feb 2007
| MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE
sweet- Fri 16 Feb 2007
| MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE
sweet- Fri 16 Feb 2007
| MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE
sweet- Fri 16 Feb 2007
| MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE
sweet- Fri 16 Feb 2007
| MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE
lilmoe31- Wed 14 Feb 2007
| OMG, This is a great FF, please update soon. Can't wait until the next chapter.
avulocard21- Mon 12 Feb 2007
| I love this story, please update soon i really want to know what happens with the confrontation.......
ashimi- Fri 02 Feb 2007
| I LOVE THIS FIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i cant wait to see what happens next. could u please e-mial me when u upload the next chapter please?
Metis- Wed 17 Jan 2007
| (whines pitifully) I can't take it! The suspense! The angst! Time! AHHHHHH!!! PLEASE UP DATE!
Jonni Mitchell- Wed 27 Dec 2006
| Please e-mail when you update! I love your story so much! I found it yesterday and have been reading it ever since. I love it and I can't wait for you to update!
Ashley- Wed 27 Dec 2006
| Plese send me and e-mail when you next update, I hope it is soon.
Napua- Wed 13 Dec 2006
| OK Please update soon. I am like dying here to find out what happens next. Please let me know when you update via email. Thank you.
Metis- Wed 29 Nov 2006
| *sad puppy eyes* more?
michelle jantzen- Sat 25 Nov 2006
| hello i loved ur storys and i would like to know what is going to happen plz let me know when u r going to contenure with it ty keep up with the good work
avulocard21- Sat 11 Nov 2006
| I love this story so much, it's so amazing, the only thing is i really would like it if you updated sooner, i am dying from the anticipation.....please email me when you update
shweta- Sat 04 Nov 2006
| i really love the stories u ve written so far and i wz wondering wen u were goin 2 update When Two Paths Entwine . i really love that story i would love to know what happens :) plz update soon.
shweta- Sat 04 Nov 2006
| i really love the stories u ve written so far and i wz wondering wen u were goin 2 update When Two Paths Entwine . i really love that story i would love to know what happens :) plz update soon.
Cuddles 4 Sesshomaru- Thu 02 Nov 2006
| LOVE THIS STORY but its been like 4ever since u updated...... BUT take however long you need to update..... i haven't in months
Metis- Thu 12 Oct 2006
| Mercy! Please! I've waited so long to see what happens next. Please update (I've sent a ton of reviews before but, sadly, didn't realize that the email address was necessary to get through. Such is the price for laziness. (sigh)). This is too good a story to leave in limbo! Onegai!
orchid- Wed 11 Oct 2006
| all i have to say is please update update update update.... need to know what will happen now that sessh finds out that he has a son... please don't keep us waiting long... thank you
jessica- Sat 23 Sep 2006
one word, AWSOME you have to continue im just dying to know how kagomes going to react!! please tell me if your going to continue!
thanks :)
silverfox29- Thu 14 Sep 2006
| please update soon
jessica- Sat 09 Sep 2006
wow..so i just sat down and read your story and i am in awe. it is simply breathtaking. you capture so many emotions into the characters...
if its not too much trouble could you email me as soon as you update? much oblidged.
jessica- Sat 09 Sep 2006
wow..so i just sat down and read your story and i am in awe. it is simply breathtaking. you capture so many emotions into the characters...
if its not too much trouble could you email me as soon as you update? much oblidged.
helikesitheymikey!- Mon 28 Aug 2006
So...is Kagome pregnant again??
AND WHAT IS THIS PLAN THAT'S TAKING FOREVER TO WORK!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
And are they yokai, hanyou, and miko in this story but they're just hidden for some reason?
Is Ryu sick because of whatever was at the ball that was effecting Kagome?
What's the deal with the necklace?
I wonder if Kagome can manuver it so that she and Ryu are in contact with it at the same time so it can cure the spell or whatever on both of them.
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Megan Consoer- Sat 19 Aug 2006
| I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
Teirlana Draco- Mon 31 Jul 2006
| I love this story I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter. please e-mail me when you update
happilyinsane13- Thu 27 Jul 2006
| woah. i mean...just...fantastic. i read the entire thing today. i just couldn't stop. it's so enticing, and so well written. eveeryone's in character too. This chapter was perfection. i honestly cried when Sesshy met his son and held him for the first time. although i won't be surprised if he explodes at Kagome. i guess i can understand her fear, but fear controlled her. she was thinking of her fears and hurt instead of Ryu's, Sesshy's, and Inuyasha's. *sigh* That's what happens when a seed of doubt is planted. aka Yura. Whats Sesshy's dream? The whole other Naraku sub-plot keeps me going to. Your keeping me on the edge here!!! I LOVE this story, PLEASE Update soon and tell me when you do!!!
kally- Sat 22 Jul 2006
| wow. I was...wow. I actually thought Sess would have found out first. wow. anyway back to the fic.
Kohana- Sat 22 Jul 2006
| That was so good. I love it! please update soon, I wanna know whats going to happen=)
anime135123- Fri 21 Jul 2006
| When are you gonna update!? I wanna find out what happens!
anime135123- Fri 21 Jul 2006
| When are you gonna update!? I wanna find out what happens!
anime135123- Fri 14 Jul 2006
| when are you going to update!? i have to find out what happens! i love this story
Man that was crazy! So crazy that I loved it and I want more. Please e-mail me when you come out with chapter 14.
UPDATE SOON! PLEASE!- Sat 24 Jun 2006
| PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
Brianna- Thu 15 Jun 2006
dangit! ha ha, barbara!! *grrs* you ended it on a cliffie!! nooo!!! hee hee, nah, that was a really good chapter. I loved how you described Sesshy's reaction when he sees his son. Just how i imagined! you are such a good writer! good luck with the next one!
-Bri ^_^
I really can't wait for the next chapter. Normally I download a bunch of stories for entertainment and take them home, usually forgetting to review if I liked them, but I liked yours so much I had to flag it to remind me to do it later, or now. I absolutely LOVE this story and can't wait to see what happens. Keep up the good work!
KT
niru- Wed 07 Jun 2006
wow barbara,your the queen of suspense
loved the chapter.Cant believe sessh in father mode.Reminds me of the sxeries of him and Rin.
Yup anxiously awaiting your next chapter..do update soon...love your story
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!- Tue 06 Jun 2006
| DUH! DUH! dUH! DUH! OMG! i cant wait to see what happens to kags and sess! will he forgive her!?! OMG, you have to update ASAP! PLEASE! i cant take the suspense!
Teresa- Sun 04 Jun 2006
| Oh Man! Could this get anymore complicated? I'm loving this so far. The emotional scene between father and son made my heart swell. You Go Girl! I love it when my emotions are stimulated. Looking forward to the next installments. Love & Peace!
Peace maker- Fri 02 Jun 2006
| That is good so far i can't remember if i already sent you a review so i will do it again.please update.
Marquel- Thu 01 Jun 2006
Hey Babs! I am glad to see you are still around, I was beginning to wonder if you had abandoned all of us (us being your loyal fans). Now.. I have a bone to pick with you... you make us wait all these months for a new chapter then leave us with a cliffie! ARGH... now that that is out of my system, it was a wonderful chapter, though I truly wished that Kagome could have been present when the Sesshoumaru and Ryu met... or better yet that she had told him before the meeting but I know you like tormenting our poor souls with nervousness and fear ... no hard feeilings of course. Well I am off, glad to have ya back.
-Marquel
Ari- Tue 30 May 2006
OMG! Im so glad you updated, I had your story link/title stored in a database (I positively adore this story) I lost and I was so sad. But I found your story again and Im so happy!.
I cant believe Its finally come to this! Sesshoumaru knows, Kagome doesnt know what to do. I cant wait for you to update.
Ari
anime135123- Tue 30 May 2006
| Yeah! You updated! Update again!
Megan Consoer- Tue 30 May 2006
| I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
blackrosewitch- Tue 30 May 2006
| mad i have never read a better storie in this fic with out any speeling errors. god dam your story made me cry i loved it and i am hopping you'll write that next chapter real soon.
Forgotten Lake- Tue 30 May 2006
Opens mouth...closes. Opens again, makes a strangled noise, and then mouth snaps shut again.
You are evil. Pure evil. What an evil, evil, evil cliffhanger. You...just...ergh.
I'm not sure if I can give an unbiased review right now, if you couldn't tell. You wrote a great chapter and handled everything well (especially giving readers a mental scene of Sesshoumaru playing cars with his son, so cute!!!) but you handled everything too well. I was all tense, all excited, ready for one of the biggest climaxes in the entire story, then wham.
All right, I admit it, I've written cliffhangers as well. I guess that makes me a hypocrite now. Anyways, I REALLY enjoyed your chapter as usual (more than, actually) and wish you luck on the next one!
~Forgotten Lake
swtdrm01- Tue 30 May 2006
| I love the story. When will you put up the next chapter or two. I can't wait to read the rest.
yoshiko k.- Mon 29 May 2006
| OMFG, you have to update soon...please, please, please?!
This is a great story.. cant wait for the next chapter.. Hurry and update soon.. I like the storyline so far and your writing skills are great..
Just hurry plz....
Mari
Alone- Mon 29 May 2006
After reading as many fanfics as I have, it is hard to find ones that still keep your eyes glued to the screen and anticipating the next chapter, but this story does just that!
I LOVE ANGST!!! It will be the death of me but I love it. More chapters!!!
Kara- Fri 19 May 2006
| That was good. I loved your fanfic. Please update soon. ^-^
Zhare- Wed 17 May 2006
Let me just say that you are evil for leaving it there; you need to update soon. I just started reading your fics a few weeks ago and I absolutely love them. When I first started reading When Two Paths Collide I was just looking for a one shot, but I loved it so much that I couldn't wait to read the sequel.
Please email me when you update; I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Oh, and a warning: if you don't update soon I might just have to track you down, tie you to a chair, and make you update.
Have a nice day. :)
Brandi- Wed 10 May 2006
| please update soon... I love this story, and it's really hard not to be able to read the next chapter... please!!!
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