Reviews for Growing with Change by White Inu Youkai
Meara- Sun 15 Jul 2007
This is a nice story; well thought out and executed. There is one problem, however. There is a woeful lack of punctuation. This is a good story and the lack it makes the tale harder to read. Remember - commas, periods and even exclation points are your friends.
Seriously, a beta reader would sove this problem. Learning to use it properly is simply a matter of practice.
I look forward to reading more!
Meara
Seriously, a beta reader would sove this problem. Learning to use it properly is simply a matter of practice.
I look forward to reading more!
Meara
elvira- Sun 15 Jul 2007
wow...this is awsome!!...please more chapters!!
Arryelle- Sun 15 Jul 2007
Toooo cute I hope you update soon this fic is awesome a little confusing at times but still great!
Arry
Arry
Megan Consoer- Fri 08 Jun 2007
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
Eva D,McMillan- Thu 12 Oct 2006
All I can say is your good.Pleas tell me your going to rite the next chapter soon.O and keep up the great work.Eva
vivian- Fri 15 Sep 2006
Please write more!
Rachel Haag- Tue 20 Jun 2006
I really love your story and can't wait to read more. please wright more I'd like to see how it ends. I also like that you made Kagome a silver fox demon it really suits her. And having Shippo have miko powers very cool.
Keep doing what you'r doing I love it. Can't wait to read more.
Keep doing what you'r doing I love it. Can't wait to read more.
Rachel Haag- Tue 20 Jun 2006
I really love your story and can't wait to read more. please wright more I'd like to see how it ends. I also like that you made Kagome a silver fox demon it really suits her. And having Shippo have miko powers very cool.
Keep doing what you'r doing I love it. Can't wait to read more.
Keep doing what you'r doing I love it. Can't wait to read more.
Rachel Haag- Tue 20 Jun 2006
I really love your story and can't wait to read more. please wright more I'd like to see how it ends. I also like that you made Kagome a silver fox demon it really suits her. And having Shippo have miko powers very cool.
Keep doing what you'r doing I love it. Can't wait to read more.
Keep doing what you'r doing I love it. Can't wait to read more.
Amy- Mon 22 May 2006
ohhh nice chapter!!! update asap
IXthy- Sat 20 May 2006
Hey,
I'm not really one to review, so this might lack most of the things an author is looking for - constructive criticism, helpful advice, mindless praise, etc - but I wanted to say that I found the idea behind this little fanfic to be quite interesting and the text, except for a few, minor, grammar and spelling mistakes, fairly well-written. I'm looking forward to seeing how you choose to develop the story.
Good luck and loads of inspiration.
IXthy.
I'm not really one to review, so this might lack most of the things an author is looking for - constructive criticism, helpful advice, mindless praise, etc - but I wanted to say that I found the idea behind this little fanfic to be quite interesting and the text, except for a few, minor, grammar and spelling mistakes, fairly well-written. I'm looking forward to seeing how you choose to develop the story.
Good luck and loads of inspiration.
IXthy.