yo!
actually, i like the sesshoumaru that you've created. Other stories i've read had him not using conjunctions, talking pale, and having no emotions ever ever ever! So, plainly, i like the sense of realty you put in story. Despite a few grammatical errors, this is turning into a fine fan fiction. :)
you HAVE to email me once you get the next chapter in. (i dont come to this site every damn day.)

loveyaloveya!
you're doing great
xoxo,
taylerr smiles

Ur story is really good. Plz continue soon.

please continue, this is a really good fic.

PAMS(Please add more soon)