please please please please please please continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Great fic that portrays Sesshomaru's state of mind during the battle with what Sara. Also it sticks to reality and becomes one with the episode. The way it is written leads us to believe that those were the actual toughs of Sesshomaru in the episode.
Great one shot that shows a great potential to become a longer story.
In my opinion the fic has all that is needed to be a full story, and should become one.

Not bad. Very interesting perspective. BTW, the line " Tetsaiga, just once lead me your power." The name of the sword is actually spelled, either Tetsusaiga, or Tessaiga. Also, this sentence would make more sense if you used the word 'lend', rather than 'lead'. It is not possible to 'lead me your power'. It is, however, possible to 'lend me your power'.

I think you should definitely continue this. It's a brilliant twist on extant material, has great potential for indepth character development, and your flowing style is quite enthralling. Do keep it up!!

I liked this....it was alittle ont he short side, but it was well done...it gave a very Sesshomaru-like insight from an entirely different perspective than what was portrayed in the episodes....BRAVO...and yes, I think you should continue.