It told him he’d soon act without his usual amount of cool control and distance and could possibly go as far as to kiss a human. In public. With no intention of killing any witnesses afterwards.

i love this line .. very sesshoumaru-esque.

You should really work on another story. It was really good. I enjoyed reading it and it kept my intress. A hard thing to do with a person with ADD. Keep up the good work!
~Meg~

This is one of the best fanfictions regarding InuYasha, Kagome and Sesshomaru that I have ever read...and I have read plenty! The plot was creative and originial, the pace believable and the characters true to form! The writing was outstanding in use of grammar, as well! Wonderful! I do hope that more writing is planned for in your future!

Thank you so very, very much for writing this amazing story!! I love how in character you kept everyone, and thank you especially for the happy ending!! I really hope you decide to write more Sess/Kago fics soon!!

Awesome. Truely awesome story. Original, funny, touching, heartwarming, brilliant characterizations- AWESOME! I love KagSess stories, but so often they go from hate to love in the blink of an eye. This was so believable. You have a great style. I can't wait to go and see what else you're written and indulge myself! BRAVA!

I truly like this story and I totally fell over laughing at the swim scene with Kagome and Rin. Sesshoumaru is always so controlled and having a child in one's life does make you do things you wouldn't otherwise. His breaking out of character just for Rin' amusement alone would have been precious but to turn those actions on Kagome were priceless. I like your writing style and the flow of the story. I hope to see more works of yours soon. If you do other anime fanfic let me know ok? I'm a Rurouni Kenshin fan as well as InuYasha {I/K-M-S-S/K-I/S} my personal fav is Sess/Kags, so if you do more, I'll be waiting. God Bless and stay safe.

I just sat down and read this all the way through.. and whilst my body will pay for it.. I must say, it was well worth it.

I was in search of a good Sess/Kag fic. (without all of the cliches, a good plot, good characterizations, canon universe..) and as per usual ran a search for something complete here at a Single Spark..

The point of the above ramble.. I didn't know what to expect after reading the summary, but, I know now.. it was a good decision.

The things I enjoyed most about the story were all of the little things.. the inner thoughts & musings, descriptives, speaking without words.. It captured the dynamics of the characters, between the characters and painted a lovely and vivid picture in my mind.

Wonderfully written story and I do hope that you will write another.

this story istotally awesomei love it

Oh my I love your characterization of Sesshoumaru!! ^__^

Very accurate and beautiful.

Excellent story! I love every word of it!

This is now my favorite story.
You are very talented and this story is amazing!
Continue writing!

That was good ^^ I loved the different storyline! I also loved how you kept it in character :3 You definately earned that 10 rating.

-RSF