i was getting so into your story but i was greatly dissapointed to find out that chapter 13 is not there and is infact a copy of chapter 12.

if you could could you either direct me to a link or send me a copy of the chapter.

thankyou very much,
Victoria

i was getting so into your story but i was greatly dissapointed to find out that chapter 13 is not there and is infact a copy of chapter 12.

if you could could you either direct me to a link or send me a copy of the chapter.

thankyou very much,
Victoria

Out of any fanfic I've read this would be the best one yet! And "Bipolor Tangerine" I was laughing so hard at 4:30 in the morning I woke up my mom,sister,and dad! Great job! Asequel would be sooooo cool! ^__^

Wow I just finished this story. This was intense and quite sad much of the time; but you really wrote it well. If there is a sequel I would be interested in reading it to find out how Sesshomaru and Kagome and the rest of the gang end up really dealing with the aftermath of all of this. Who knows maybe I new evil will come into being. Also I don't think anything was mentioned anymore about Miroku's wind tunnel. Please keep up the good work!

I loved this story! It was excellent please keep up the good work n could u please make a sequel.

right now i am at chapie 14 what happened it the same as12. but bye the way i like how the plot is going. sometimes it really leaves my thinking(which i never do) lol. anyways so far so good. and what happens to fluffy and kags?

right now i am at chapie 14 what happened it the same as12. but bye the way i like how the plot is going. sometimes it really leaves my thinking(which i never do) lol. anyways so far so good. and what happens to fluffy and kags?

Sesshoumaru doesn't visit Kagome for more than a year (I think you calculate the period wrong, because Sess traveled after Kagome's coma, 4 months after the accident) and Kagome's brother doesn't know that Sess was not there, he is surprised that the demon doesn't answer his call (chap 28)! Non sense!

love it and i would like to see what happens to kagome and sesshomaru since there are other evils out there that want it and can make a good sequil...

In one chapter Kagome doesn't have a car. In the other, she is driving her own car.

Is or isn't Inuyasha's mother dead?

Is or isnt' Sango's brother dead?

People knows that Sesshoumaru is demon, but Inuyasha uses a spell to hide that he is a hanyou... It doesn't make any sense.

One chapter Kagome shows her miko's powers to Inuyasha. On the other chapter she explains that she lost her powers...

Chapters 12 and 13 are the same. It seems that we lost the meeting between Rin and Kagome.

You have a good plot and the history has potential, but you need to fix the incoherences to improve your ff!!!

I was just going to say if you knew you skipped chapter thirteen?

kuma's the name the game i play is sequel or die? wanna play lol update with the sequel ace ap

overall, great fic.
however, you confused me with sesshomaru and inuyasha's parents. in a chapter you say that inuyasha's mom is dead, then when kagome goes over for her training session with inuyasha, his mom is alive to greet them. with the dad, you wrote how sess and inu were raised by the money left by the dad giving the impression that he was dead too... it just confused me. but i would like to see a sequel!!

GAH! I really am so sorry! I re-read the part of this chapter talking about her powers and realized i had somehow missed the sentance saying she still had some. I'm so soory. That was my mistake. Please forgive your humble reader. GAH! I just sounded like Jaken! Excuse me while i go jump off a bridge.

Alright! I love your story so far. I only have a few problems with it. I"m a very honest reviewer, so please don't ake what i say as insults....they are just meant to be opinions. Alright. So you said in chapter 8 that Kagome didn't have a car, but in chapter 7 you wrote that she rode home in here car after she left Inu. And then she had shown Inu her powers at lunch, but then it says that she lost them right after she got raped. I am just really confused. I just thought you might want to know and all that stuff. idk. I do really enjoy your story though. It is very well writted, even if the diary style gets to me some times. lol. i like the way you put it though. so yeah. kick ass job!

UPDATE PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE. I l,ove it.

Please update soon. Luv the story

Nice story! But, the chapters don't seem to go anywhere much. And can you please tone down the being "retarded" or being someone with "ADHD"? There are many people out there who are mentally challenged, and would not appreciate the stigmatism directed at their mental condition. I actually read on their ADHD and other mental conditions, and I know what might happen if they get this negative feedback. They feel abnormal, angry, and depressed, which may eentually lead to suicide. I also have a close friend who worked with these people and I share the same sympathy towards them.

I hope you don't take this the wrong way.

Akiko-san