not bad update soon. i believe you should make the chapters longer. it would make them feel much more whole and complete.

cool beans...the story is becoming more interesting... good chapter... until next time

Promising, but it can't be "complete"!
Schöne Grüße

Keep going this cant be all. I like th is already

cool beans... this is different compared to other fics I have read. I have never come across one that uses The Prince of Persia... very interesting indeed... anyway please continue to write on this... until next time

I like it so far. I've never seen Prince of Persia before, but now I suppose I'll have to in order to figure out what's going on. Anyway, is Sesshoumaru a demon in this fic?

Keep up the god work.

Crescent

Oh, if you can, e-mail me or inform me when you update. Thanks.