I love it, but i wish you would update, i would hate to have read all that and be left in the dust.

You have an eloquent style that is just free enough to not be tedious. Kudos. :D

So far, this story is looking awesome. I like the twists you've taken, having Sesshoumaru be the hated family member instead of Inuyasha, and including Sango. I happen to -like- Sango. n_n

If you still need a beta reader, I have way too much time on my hands and am a self-proclaimed grammar guru and member of the punctuation police. xD

Amazing beginning, with a well-developed and enthralling twist on the complex relationship of the Inu no Taisho, Sesshoumaru, Inuyasha, and their respective mothers. I can't wait to read more of this!

Definately interested in seeing how your story turns out. I am looking forward to your next update.
~Brittany

HOLY CRAP IS THIS GOOD! Whoever rated this down, you suck. Seriously. This fic is awesome and deserves perfect tens!