Who cares what a teachers says, they always say what they wish never what they mean.

Your writing is good, sometimes when your made to write a story for a grade it never ever comes out the way you want it to, I should know.

I dreamed up a whole short story but when my teacher said to write one when I was back in my freshmen year I couldn't write for days. The day before the rough draft was due I had thrown together a story that made no sense.

I mean since when can people disappear and reappear or when can objects fly? I had to stop from laughing when my teacher said I needed to see the guidance counsler.

I never went of course, but I did laugh when he saw what a friend of mine wrote, me and her got together and made one the sumer before, let me tell you keeping short stories on hand comes in handy... especially if they are fourty pages long!

The teacher near killed us both with his outragious speach about short stories being short. Well I say fourty pages is short, most novels come in 200 to 700+ pages.

Fights went on for a while but we won in the end and all before the period bell rung to dismiss us, lol. Let's just say he never pushed my buttons ever again, sadly that story was a good one, the 40 pager.

To freaky for a 'normal' person to understand. Wait a minute normal doesn't exist! lol.

Oh well, sorry to bore you with that tale, I just can relate to most people I read from and you are a person I can relate to and become a good internet buddy with!

I hope to read your next update when you post it or some sort of reply, lol!

Ja Ne!

U DIDN'T UPDATE IT SINCE THEN??????

dont stop!!!...this is a hella good story!!...more chapters please!!!

I love your writeings mine on the other had sucks my bf is writeing you too

Dude your writing is like sooooo awesome and stuff u had me and my BF laughing and being SURPISE ^_^ LOL soo yeah this is really good stuff

please UPDATE ASAP!!!! UPDATE UPDATE please!!!! great story, keep it up!! ^_^

you must write more, whos the guy that raped kag was inu?

Is the person who rape Kagome Inuyasha??? ANYWAY, UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPADTE UPDATE UPDATE UPADTE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!

Tuyet Menh

write more on here or fan fiction

That was a awesome fanfic! You need to write more! well please?

Awesome story!!!!!!!! I can't wait for you to update the next chappie!!! XD

This is a good story, but you should really use spell check. And Kagome's last name is Higurashi. Not Hiragashi. Take it as a flame, constructive criticism, a review, I don't care anymore what people think of my comments.

i love this story can you write more and longer chapters please? keep up the great work

This is a great FF!! UPDATE PLEASE!!!

This story is great! I hope you update soon! In my opinion, it'd be funny if you sorta put in the story of how Inuyasha sorta falls for Kagome too, and both Sesshomaru and Inuyasha try to get her. In anyway though, great story!

Hey i would love to know what's going to happen to them i really like your story

hey i like your story it seems good!

hi-

like the fanfic. It was kind of funny when Sesshomaru thought 'He wanted to fuck the guts out of her (kagome)' It was kind of funny.

update soon-

Silk_worm

i liked it update soon

hey keep writing it's really a good story so keep up the great work.