Reviews for Flowers Of The Night by InutaiyoukaiNichne
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michelle- Wed 20 Dec 2006
however, it is really hard to read because you don't leave spaces between paragraphs or dialogues...i really hope you will take note of this when posting your next chapter...i do like the fact that you write long chapters though...
also, i am concerned that at times, some parts of the story are incoherent...some sentences are too long and gets confusing and capital letters are present when there shouldn't be...please take note of this also when you update...
hope this review is of help to you^^
i feel that if you correct aforementioned mistakes, your story would turn out better...
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