i really like your story so far so please i'm begging you please make more FANG is one of the best stories i'v read just wanted to let you know!! :)

please update ur not gonna leave it like dat r u

Wow LOve it!!! Please try to update sooooooooooooooooonnn!! Pretty please I'd really appreciate it!

please review and whatch ur spelling you might want to go back and reread it some and find ur errors.

twas really good, can't wait to read the next chapter1

This story might be good, and the plotline well thought out, but it is sorely hurt by your poor grammar and spelling. Even your reviewers have suggested that you get someone to proof your story (get a beta), or at least run a spell check on it. Just correcting your summary so that it makes sense would help, because it would make more people inclined to WANT to check out your work.

As long as it remains as is, with all of the misspelled words and incomplete sentences, most people will turn away from it because they will see it as very poorly written.

Even your first line in the prologue needs serious help:

' “Wolves’ young once use to be a killer of man. The story I’m going to tell you is great with wisdom of my great grandfather caring for a fared creature know to man when young.” And old wise man say as he stared to write in an old journal, '

"Wolves, young ones, used to be a killer of men. The story that I am going to tell you, is filled with the great wisdom of my great, great grandfather, who cared for one of the most feared creatures known to man, when he was still young," an old wise man said as he started to write in his journal.

Your story is awesome!!! Please, please update soon! -Thanks!

I'm very much in LOVE with your story!!! ^_^
I like the characters and the trama so far, and can't wait to see what'll happen next ;D
Hope see you soon
Ja nE

I really like your story, but you really need to go back and reread and edit it. I can guarentee you that more people will read and enjoy it, and your ratings will go up, drastically.

wow. this story is pretty good. i never wondered what would happen if Kagome was a wolf. something new and exciting....i can't wait to read what happens. Kagome and Sesshomaru need to meet too...update soon!! 33

LOVE IT!!! Please, update soon!

it's really good keep up the good chapter making and you'll have a great story in no time

I truely loved IT!!!! Update soon!!! ;)

LOVE IT!!! GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!

2 words: LUV IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

PLEASE UPDATE VERY SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

good chapter! please update soon!!

Juhu I´m so happy for this new Chapter ^^ Please keep up the good work and update soon ^^

please continue. it is very good and i like the Lion King 2 movie as well so don't get to embaressed or shy when you say it in front of like 300000000 or around there that you watch it.

wow i like it but u the same one on it when u get done reading it start right up again i just want to tell u that.

Tanya131, you really konw how to make story's, but I would like to see your next upload, so please continue
. - See ya

You really have to get yourself a beta reader or a program with spell check. I know you're just a kid, same time...spelling matters a lot and though your stories seem interesting, the bad spelling is really off-putting.

(i'm finished the prologue it's a little longer) this is a different virgin (version) of (top dog) Saperated (this should be separated) from her family at a young age the young pup runs into a human village. not know (knowing) what she really is, and after running in to wolfs (wolves) she leaves the village for who she is. running (Running) into a pural (pure) white wolf she follows him into the life she's ment for will sparks fly?. (rating may go up) Pleace (Please) send reviews

You'll note the corrections in parentheses. They even have listings for beta readers here. I really, really suggest you get one...STAT.

i like ur story so far. but from wat i read ur stold some lines from Lion King 2. U should rewrite or say that those lines dont belong 2 u b4 u get in troble. well, i hope u write soon i really do like 2 see were ur goin w/ tis story. Wish u luck.
AoiKitsune

Jo I Love it ^^ Please update soon ^^

It's a pretty good story so far... Very interesting. However, you might want to get a beta. Anyways, keep up the great work. I look forward to the next chapter.
~moosegirl13

this story is hot so far continue on with it

.....COOL