I was glad a sequel was wrote. I just wish there'd been more in-depth transition from abuser to loving husband. It was done too quickly and smoothly. But still, I was glad for the happy ending. I have to say that Naraku was my favorite in this story. He was way OOC but I loved the personality that you gave him once he came to terms with his abusive nature and saw it for what it was. I applauded his decision to become a better person and slowly change his ways.

thank you

i luved this story it was good...Should write another story..Not a sequal..It was good..You did a wonderful job on this story..Keep up the goof work

Woot!!! I've been waiting for this for some time now! ^_^

-KB

a BEAUTIFUL ENDING FOR A BEAUTIFUL STORY!!!! YOU R SUCH AN AWESOME WRITER!!!! i look forward for u to update ur other stories, especially "Friends Or Lovers"

awesome chapter there! I hope to read the next one soon so i'll keep waiting ^-^

Ja Ne!!

WOW u r stil the best writer on the net i love your storys nice :)

Omg I can just see Naraku's face after hearing that his wife is pregnant! lmao!! His face will be white and his eyes so wide they look like saucers, lol omg that would be funny. Okay well it's a same there is only 3 chapters left I hope to read them all soon!! ^-^

Ja Ne!!!

Yeah their 'project' was a success LOL. Can't wait for the last three chapters I love the story and hope to see more soon.

it was alright

sorry for not updating for a while nice chapters and i hope to read the next chapter soon to find out what sess is gonna do about the darkness that has returned!!

Ja Ne!!

Woah. Nice chapter. I was missing your writing! I'm glad you updated. I wasn't able to review earlier because I was away in V.A for my sister's wedding. But I'm back and now I'm saying that was great!

-River

YEAH!!! I love updates, it seemed like forever. Cant wait for more chapters!!!!

ja

wow I'm so glad that Sessh is finally caring. I actually know what you had Kagome going through with the beating and all because one of my boyfriends did that to me. But thankfully my recent boy friend beat the shit out of him. LOL. I still don't know if I should trust Sesshou but I love the story.

Dun Dun Dun DUN!!!!!

OMG!!! dont pay NO mind ta what ??? says....if they cant enjoy a good read than they DONT need ta be on this site OR post ANYTHING ELS!!!

This story is just sick... The person tha wrote it needs some serious help.

This story is just sick... The person tha wrote it needs some serious help.

thank you!!!!!!!!! you have NO idea how long i have been waiting 4 a update!!!

No! That was mean! I wanted to read more. That was a great chapter though! ^_^

-River

it is good so far
keep up the good work

It been a while since you wrote on this story. I like the direction the story is going no. I just could not imagine an abusive Sess. I do think even though he is changing his ways I don't think he should lose his edge. He Sess and he still needs that attitude that he has. I like the story, I always have and I look forward to reading more.

Ok one question:
does Sesshy still wanna kill her?
LUV YOUR STORY PLEASE ANSWER MY QUESTION.

Someone needs to fucking kill Sesshomaru.

THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!!!....i SOOOO need another chapy....we all thought u 4 got bout us!!!!

RAWR!!!!

There should have been a LEMON! **wink wink** anyway... UPDATE!!!

Irihi-chan

I am so glad that you started writing on this story again. I was really missing reading this story. It was another good chapter and I really hope everything works out for the best for our favorite couple. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

I really love this fanfic! I'm still wondering what is going happen next!

any more any time soon??

what tha hell is goin on???? somethin aint right. i know he is SO planing somethin!!!! but......i love it!!!!

OOOOHHHHHHH!!!! i thought she might be pregnate. what a let down

Nice.

It would be better if Rin was pregant though. Adds more drama. UPDATE SOON!!!

Moonlight Goddess

I like your update but confused as to why Sess is acting all nicey, nicey. One minute he wants to kill Kagome and now he is all attentive and concerned about her wellfare. What's up with that? Something is not right here...please let us know what changed him all of a sudden?

Great chapter...update soon.

It is good to see you back writing on this story. I glad to see the couple taking a turn for the better but I hope I do not get disappointed if Sess resorts back to his old ways. I just pray that he as not as bad as he used to be! ") Until next chapter.

Love it!
But- what happened to the whole
'Sesshomaru evil' thing, and how he was going to make kagome pay?
Still, great story! Update soon!

I really enjoy your story. For a while there I really thought that Sesshomaru wasn't going to change and that he was going to kill Kagome on this trip...and he still just might because this is your story and it will go how you wish it too. But I am glad that he is starting to change. Even though I have read it I still don't see what happened to cause this change to take place. Care to give me some hints? Chap. 17 said that he was finally going to kill her.

I really enjoy your story. For a while there I really thought that Sesshomaru wasn't going to change and that he was going to kill Kagome on this trip...and he still just might because this is your story and it will go how you wish it too. But I am glad that he is starting to change. Even though I have read it I still don't see what happened to cause this change to take place. Care to give me some hints? Chap. 17 said that he was finally going to kill her.

NOOOOO da story was get goood ( not that it wasn't good just better) PLEASE update soon

I have to say, when my friend told me about this fanfic i was like, "Sess?? abusive???" but then i started reading and i was hooked. i could not stop reading!!!! please update soon! AWESOME JOB!!! KUDOS TO YOU!!!!!!

OMG! That was AMAZING! I just finished all the chapters! I love it! You have to update soon!

~Kat

wow awesome! -just read all the chapters- hope u update soon ^^

OMGGG THIS MUST BE A TRICK!!! *gaspness*

Just had a thought, I wonder if Kagome has something up her sleeves? She was talking about possibly being killed on this trip, and did alot of prep work dealing with kids and stuff and what were in the envelopes that Inuyasha mailed?well I guess we will see what is up. Still liked Rin being kicked to the curb, heehee. Well we'll see when you update.

i have to say that i am a little scared by how sess is acting. however, i hope that it works out for them. i love this story, b /c it keeps it on my toes.

Awwww. They're back together.......almost.....lol!!! Update soon! Peace.

alright...im dying to know! what has caused his change of heart!? or is he lying so she trusts him? she should play hard to get. lol. Keep up the awesome job.

WOW thats i got to say
keep writing you are doing such a good job on this

So is sesshoumaru going to be a good person now, or is he stilling planning her death, and is hiding it?

Let me guess his being nice to her is all a plot, so when he does kill her he won't be a suspect. Why did she say no more Kagura? (Was that suppose to be no more Rin?) I know it is not my place to say this because it is your story and I have already mentioned this but can you please give them a happy ending. I know he has been an asshole and she should make him suffer but I mean she seems to really still be in love with her, he say's he still is (which I really want to believe). Well anyways great chapter, can't wait for the next one!!!

WOW! That was a really a 180 for both parties. It seems like you can go either way from here.

Cant wait for the next chapter!

Ja Ne

Yeah.. I hope it isn't like the last time on the honeymoon.. Everything was good at first but then bam everything went bad..
I like happy endings.. maybe Sesshomaru has seen the light.. Iam glad that she is pregnant with his baby and not Inuyasha's..
Maybe this will help them..
Well anyways hurry with next chapter.. Is this story coming to an end soon or do you have lots more instore for them...
Plz hurry and update..
Take Care
Mari

Okay, I love that you turned your story around but I have a feeling that you are setting us up. I hope note because I really want Sess to see the error of his ways and work things out. I like the fact that out of darkness there can come light. I hope we are seeing the light and darkness will not fall once again. Until next chapter.

Well, hopefully its not a trick from Sess to break her even more. But I was glad to hear that Kags didn't sleep with Inuyasha( I didn't think she would esp since from what she was saying I didn't believe she loved him). Hopefully things get better and better. Loved how he sent Rin packing. Keeping fingers crossed that things get better. Can't wait for next update.

tired of running is the best fanfic i have ever red in my intire life! you realy have caputered the evil side sesshomaru very well. i have told everone of my friends to read that fic. if you have any more fic`s i`ll be happy to read them

tired of running is the best fanfic i have ever red in my intire life! you realy have caputered the evil side sesshomaru very well. i have told everone of my friends to read that fic. if you have any more fic`s i`ll be happy to read them

Yay i loved it! now update haha... so, what's up? Hey do u have a myspace? here is my url www.myspace.com/icebaby104

Im begging you for a happy ending!! Sess just needs a big ass whooping or something! Maybe he could hurt her so bad on the trip that there's a slim chance she'll live and he realizes he loves her or something! I dunno....but there has to be a happy ending! lol

Another good chapter, I can't wait to see how it ends.

Not feeling this story. I posted a review I don't see it. Any pain and hurt where's the healing. Sorry, I just don't like this story. Not flaming, just my feeling. I read for some enjoyment and this isn't it.

I really hope this story will show some healing for both Kagome and Sesshomaru. I have loved you other story, this one not much. Not flame, but I'm going to stop reading here. Normally, I don't read the last chapter, but I think I'm wait till you end this to see if I want to keep reading. Again, I'm a fan of your other story, just don't get the need for pain and hurt without healing.

Poor Kagome. Update soon! Peace.

Wow, shes out, im so happy. Did i tell you? When i was reading the first story i was screaming "Kagome come on show some bone." She was alot like me you know? And hten when she did i saw what happen and iwas screaming "no kagome dont argue!!" Lol you took me through some VERY difficult times!!
Any way Im lovin the new chapter...im both terrified and anxcious to see what will happen!!!!

PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ *gets on knees* up date soon!!!!

Are they ever gonna get back together or what...this story is good..it got to be so to the point of reality i had to take a break..it made me sweat cry and wana scream..ive never read something so real, its like...horrible but icant sotop reading! You my friend are either the best aurthor ever or the most demented...either way i love you!

I have to agree with a few of the other reviewers...I like this story because it's tacking a tough subject line a spousal abuse but it seems to get more depressing as I read on. I'm not flaming you and this is your story but I get more depressed everytime I read your updates. Of course, I can always stop reading it but you're to good of a writer. I'm hooked and I'm hoping that this has a happy ending where Sess & Kags make up & Sess realizes the love that she has for him before it's too late...of course he MUST SUFFER FIRST. evil grin>

I DONT LIKE RIN
I DONT LIKE HER
WELL
SHE DID HELO AKIO
SOO SHE MIGHT NOT BE COMPLETELY EVIL
WELL UP DATE SOON
YOUR RIGHT THAT WASN'T TO LONG

I really dislike Sesshoumaru and please tell me you will make him suffer, I wish they could get back together but what ever you decide! Great story, please just make him suffer!
A Loyal Reader,
REDWOLF

I think this went a little to fast. You need to put more detail but other then that it was great!

Sesshomaru is an ass.

This chapter is really good! Update soon! Peace.

I CANNOT BELIEVE YU ENDED IT LIKE THAT
IM SO VERY ANGRY AT YOU
LIKE BEYOND THAT
GRRRRRR

ooh your story is so good can u please send the "nowhere to run" story so i can read it please thanx

This is a sweet story or fanfic!! It had so many twists I LOVE IT!!!

Uh. Yeah, I kinda have to agree with Localsamurai. It's good you're tackling a subject like this. Same time, it's a bit tedious. Every chapter is just filled with escalating pain and torment for Kagome and as a reader, it gets to be an agonizing experience.

I don't know. I'm just kind of a frustrated reader. I really like this story. Same time the sheer levels of awfulness Kagome has to go through is sometimes too hard to read. It's really more my problem than yours, I think but I wouldn't be a responsible reader if I didn't say anything.

Hello,

I just realized I have read this and not sent a review or rating. I AM SORRY! I rated all your other stories and have read them like a million times. I really love your style of writing and that you finish your stories (it is frustrating to read a story and the author gives up). I just wanted to let you know that I am reading your stories and always love when I login and see a new chapter. You are very talanted please keep writing for all us hopless sesshy/kag pairing lovers!! : )

Ja Ne

awww...thanks for the shout out!

great chapter! wow...two updates in one day!! i would LOVE to do that...then people wouldn't yell at me so much...o well...thats life i suppose..

great chapter...wow...Hiten and Naraku have big mouths!

and i am SO proud of Koharu! way to stand up girly!!

have u noticed how Naraku and Hiten changed places? Ya Naraku is all nice, like Hiten was in the first one, and now Hiten is all evil....ooo...

i really kinda hope Kagome and Sesshoumaru get back together..call me crazy!!

and OMG Aiko is such a little bitch! and she's only three!

Jeez!!

o well...great chapter...loving the story more with each update...

update again please when you can!!

C ya!

Merry Christmas!

-Ashley

Ooo Great Job!
I Love This Story So Much!
You Are Totally One Of My Favourite Authors!! I Follow This Story RELIGIOULY!!
I Even Read It's Prequel....Like 10 Times...I'm Not Even Lying...Dead Serious Over Here!!

Please Update As Soon As You Can!

This Story Is Amazing!!

Even Though Some People Might Not Like The Abusive Sesshoumaru, I Adore It! It Is Completely Different From How Other's Depict Him!

Keep Up The Great Work And Merry Christmas!!

*glomps and gives Kags21 lots of cookie!!*

-Ashley

HURRY up and post the rest of it!!!! i read the 1st story and all 11 chapters in one day now post b4 i have 2 leave 2 go back 2 my job.

I see no way now of this ending good! lol....I still say something serious needs to happen to fluffy to get his ass in line

Poor Naraku, though I think him and Kagaime have more chemistry together than her and Sesshoumaru. Hmm I don't know why but I think they would be better together o.o; That's a first hahaha. I feel bad, Sesshoumaru is such an asshole. Well duh xD

Update soon! ^_^

I havve read all the chapters leading to this one and I have to say that even though I find this story very dark I can't stop myself from reading and wanting more. I was hoping that Sess would change his way but I think you really hit on the nail when it comes to abusive relationships. You are a very good writer or shall I say storyteller.

I hate Aiko!!! How can she be so goody toward sessh cant she see how he treated her mother. Insolent child.

great chapter update soon

where is this going personally if sesshomaru or and man for that matter put his hands on me i'd castrate or completly circumcise himwhile hee was asleep kagome should fight back and kicks good looking bicth ass just like she did alean in no where to run. and any man that hit a woman is a bitch fictional chararcter or not I love sess t death but you turned him into a monster! but can't stop reading it even if i tried. and believe me i've tried. good work i guess

why are you dragging out the horrible relationship? not flaming, merely curious.

love it as always...Hey,but what hapened to onigumo, is he in this fic?does he have a wife.sry too many questions.. anyways great job.!!

love it as always...Hey,but what hapened to onigumo, is he in this fic?does he have a wife.sry too many questions.. anyways great job.!!

the only way i see sesshomaru coming around to being nice and loving is if something horrible happens to him...and i mean horrible,sad to say! but i love this fic!

I like this story but I can't help but wonder if Kagome and Sesshoumaru will ever work things out. Is this going to have a happy ending or will Kagome keep getting tortured? It's getting kinda dreary.

What a jackass. Poor Kagome he could have killed her. And it may just be me but if he was cutting her stomace coudent he have lik killed the baby he might have created.

Why does he keep hitting her after he said her new punishement would be givving him blow jobs?

and whats this! Kagome is thinking of Naraku. Dont tell me naraku cheats on Alean ith kagome and kagome visaversa with sessho! wow this is getting so interesting.

Anyway this was an awsome chap!!! Update soon
muax

What a jackass. Poor Kagome he could have killed her. And it may just be me but if he was cutting her stomace coudent he have lik killed the baby he might have created.

Why does he keep hitting her after he said her new punishement would be givving him blow jobs?


Anyway this was an awsome chap!!! Update soon
muax

OMG!
Kagome is so dead!
again...totally loving the wife-beating Sesshoumaru...
i porbably shouldn't...but i am!
please update as soon as possible!
Ja Ne!

I like this one. what is next?

I love this story alot! but could you please use more details? this story could be perfect then! keep up the great work

u kno wat u should do...



u should totally make kagome run away and make him regret it.


MAKE sessho REGRET wat he did.




make the story kinda sad...but has a happy ending.


thnx. plz update soon

OMG u haven't updated in soo long!
great chapters! i loved it!
stupid Sesshoumaru...grr....SO MEAN!
please update again as soon as u can! Ja Ne!

OoOoOoOoOo he still has a frickin' stick stuck up in his ass why is he still a mean nasty i mean hello goodbye ice prince geez i hate this sesshou

i love this story :) its better than the first cause it hasn't got much abuse... update soon K? i think that this will get interesting in the next few chapters... you could flash between their holiday to the kids back home... i wonder how many children they'll have in the end... maybe 12 or she could have a record of children like 65 or live for a really long time... and still have a record of children cause they get miss the little pitter patter of feet... :) i tend to ramble on about things.. also you could bring up the little bit of evil he put in her... or he could (dare i say) cheat on her Update this story soon k???

i love your stories..and especially No where to run....but man if you dont drive me crazy everytime Sessho does his beatings....boy boy id leave his ass for a good three weeks then see whos the bitch loll! BUT YA I LOVE THIS STORY SO FAR!!! its awesome...!

~Azari~

sorry just had to make one more point and i'm out of your hair... the tile both in prequel and sequel... kag doesn't isn't running anywhere... she just stays put.. of course she cries, screams, yell but in the end all sessh has to do to get her to submit was by seducing her and she flops like a dead fish... because if kag is doing any running she not doing a go job.... point of running to get away from a certain person or thing... oh well... sorry again i'm done... this is the last you will hear from me....

i'm sorry... no matter how many time i get back this fic... it's just really sad... a woman being abuse and asking for more.... kag in this fic is just too pathetic... when will there be a middle ground between those two.... she gets hit and all sessh has to do is say sorry or kiss her or have sex with her and she pretends everything is ok... man that just blow.... sorry for being such a bitch but this takes the cake... i gues i come back to read is because i was hoping that kag leaves or she just kicks sessh, naraku, hiten's asses or something.... oh well... don't mind me....just had to get it off my chest... i guess it's best i stop read this fic... well, good luck to ya anyways.... happy writing....

Yah.. Iam glad you made a second story with this.. I hope that things really work out for them.. they are such a great couple... I loved the story for far.. Can't wait for more..
Great writing agian.. Keep it up.. And plz hurry and up date..
mari

Yah.. Iam glad you made a second story with this.. I hope that things really work out for them.. they are such a great couple... I loved the story for far.. Can't wait for more..
Great writing agian.. Keep it up.. And plz hurry and up date..
mari