Sicilia- Mon 11 Feb 2008
Okay pup, when will you update?

Sicilia- Mon 11 Feb 2008
Okay pup, when will you update?

tami- Wed 02 Jan 2008
are you going to make a new capter?this story is really good

tami- Wed 02 Jan 2008
are you going to make a new capter?this story is really good

Crystal- Sun 30 Dec 2007
OMG. that was amazing!! I havent read anything as good as that ever in my entire life!! You MUST MUST MUST write more!! I'm dying to know what happens!!! hurry up, those of us that love this mushy gushy romancy stuff are pissing our pants to know what happens. WE CANT WAIT FOREVER!!!!

Shadows_Of_A_Sin- Tue 25 Dec 2007
Hi when are you going to update this is the best story ever we need an update

Catofhope- Sat 03 Nov 2007
WOOOOOT u updated please keep the chappys rolling this story has had me hooked since it started.

whiteinu1- Thu 18 Oct 2007
Keep going ^_^

Shadows_Of_A_Sin- Wed 03 Oct 2007
Are you ever going to update? I'm not mad at all. I'm just anxoius to get to see the new chapter

Shadows_Of_A_Sin- Wed 03 Oct 2007
Are you ever going to update? I'm not mad at all. I'm just anxoius to get to see the new chapter

FluffyFox- Fri 31 Aug 2007
That was soo cool! I love yah! I can't wait to read more...

Ja!

Maru-KunKun- Mon 27 Aug 2007
Sorry I didn't get to this when it first came out. I had summerschool, and I only just realized you had updated when I checked my list of fanfics that I was reading. Anyway, I just wanted to say that I'm looking forward to your next chapter, and I ask that you do update soon...sooner then before if I remember correctly (If I don't then disregard that statement...).
Anyway, I am looking forward to how Kagome is going to react to finding Sesshomaru in that state, and after her realization...

Update soon. Ja-ne.

OhBrother- Sun 12 Aug 2007
OMG!! please please please please please please please PLEASE!! you HAVE to update SOON! i can't wait any longer. it looks as if this story is coming to an end and so want to know what happens! poor Sesshomaru! if he had only LISTENED to Kagome he would KNOW! so update soon! i can't stand the suspence!
-OhBrother

OhBrother- Wed 01 Aug 2007
please update soon! i really can't wait to see what happens next!

jessica- Tue 31 Jul 2007
u have 2 finish...this story is awsome...i hope her feeling arn't hurt...please hurry! ! ! !! ! !! ! !! ! ! ! ! !

jessica- Tue 31 Jul 2007
u have 2 finish...this story is awsome...i hope her feeling arn't hurt...please hurry! ! ! !! ! !! ! !! ! ! ! ! !

jessica- Tue 31 Jul 2007
u have 2 finish...this story is awsome...i hope her feeling arn't hurt...please hurry! ! ! !! ! !! ! !! ! ! ! ! !

jessica- Tue 31 Jul 2007
u have 2 finish...this story is awsome...i hope her feeling arn't hurt...please hurry! ! ! !! ! !! ! !! ! ! ! ! !

jessica- Tue 31 Jul 2007
u have 2 finish...this story is awsome...i hope her feeling arn't hurt...please hurry! ! ! !! ! !! ! !! ! ! ! ! !

Entity of Sorrows- Mon 30 Jul 2007
I feel dumb for not sending this earlier. The song Look After You by the fray is perfect. Here are the lyrics and they are gorgeous.

If I don't say this now I will surely break
As I'm leaving the one I want to take
Forgive the urgency but hurry up and wait
My heart has started to separate

Oh, oh,
Be my baby
Ohhhhh
Oh, oh
Be my baby
I'll look after you

that's just the first verse. And like I said I effin love this awesome, one of a kind story. Keep it up girl.

--EOS

Telesha- Tue 24 Jul 2007
Can you like hurry up and finish writing already what is up with the big cliff hanger um email me when the rest is up hurry hurry

Telesha- Tue 24 Jul 2007
Can you like hurry up and finish writing already what is up with the big cliff hanger um email me when the rest is up hurry hurry

Cloey- Tue 24 Jul 2007
I just found this story and I really like it so please update soon Ja ne

Kuro Kaosu- Wed 18 Jul 2007
OMG!! ur the first person I've added to my fav author list o.O *glomps

Kuro Kaosu- Wed 18 Jul 2007
Update PLEEAAASEEEE for the love of pocky UPDATE!!!!!
i love this story please update
please please plleeeaaassseeeee its the only fanfic I've read in about a year thats moved me to tears plleeaasssee update

Kanazawa- Mon 16 Jul 2007
beautiful! absolutely beautiful!! I can't wait for the next chapter!! I hope you have time to update soon.

Your way with words is breath-taking!

~Kanazawa

Entity of Sorrows- Mon 16 Jul 2007
this is one of my poems i wrote and it won an international poetry award on poetry.com. i want you to c if you want to use it.

Untitled
I look at me
Plain is all eyes can see
Then he comes
Perfect as can be

He is like the moon
And I am the sun
My fire to his ice
And the pain has just begun
But he doesn't know
And he doesn't see
So why me?

So here I am, standing at your door
Wondering why I'm here
Out here in the rain reaching for your touch, your love
And wanting more
I choke a sob and turn away
I realize I can't stay
And I just can't see
Why me?

do u like or no? please tell me, i love this fic so much. Ja-ne!

Sicilia- Sat 14 Jul 2007
please update soon this was great, don't make me wait months again ok :) great story

Sicilia- Sat 14 Jul 2007
please update soon this was great, don't make me wait months again ok :) great story

Sicilia- Sat 14 Jul 2007
please update soon this was great, don't make me wait months again ok :) great story

Danny- Fri 13 Jul 2007
LOVE THIS!! PLEASE write more chapters soon!!!

Rin125- Fri 13 Jul 2007
Your story is fantastic!! Aside from the occasional spelling mistakes.. You're incredibly creative and emotive, your writing just flows so well!! I love it!!

Update soon!!!

Solaira- Fri 13 Jul 2007
I LOVE this story. It is great to see this romantic side of Sesshomaru. The idea of Kags finding his journal was inspirational. You are a wonderful writer and I look forward to reading more of this magnificent story.

BeautifulDeception- Fri 13 Jul 2007
OMG I Love This Story! It Is Beyond Good! I Realli Cant Wait To See Whats Going To Happen Next!

whiteinu1- Thu 12 Jul 2007
U finally updated!! I'm so glad u did ^_^. And keep updating, I love your fanfiction ^_^

whiteinu1- Thu 12 Jul 2007
U finally updated!! I'm so glad u did ^_^. And keep updating, I love your fanfiction ^_^

midnight- Thu 12 Jul 2007
great amazing about time please finnish the next chapter soon and get it out i do not care if it is bearly legable. thanx soo much 4 posting another poster its great.

Giannix- Thu 12 Jul 2007
I love the romantic sesshy!! but the last episode you posted made me cry!!! update soon please

demoneyes- Thu 12 Jul 2007
you have to keep going with this this is one of the only storys i look for everyday on here lol ~^^~ mewoof

mysticcameo- Thu 12 Jul 2007
I love the story but it is hard to follow because of the long breaks between the chapters. Keep writing

Define-Naughty- Thu 12 Jul 2007
NO! You have to update! U had me crying now update soon..

Angel- Thu 12 Jul 2007
YES! this is great!

Kaityn- Thu 12 Jul 2007
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz review!!!!!!!!

inumaru_rapture- Thu 12 Jul 2007
You need to update! omg this is a good story.. some spelling errors, but i like it a lot.

Kat- Thu 12 Jul 2007
OMG!! you're story just keeps getting better and better I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!

whiteinu1- Mon 09 Jul 2007
please update T_T

Jade_Fox- Sat 23 Jun 2007
Love the fic. Pls Pls Pls write the next chapter soon. Ive read a fic with Kagome's diary being found. This one though is more entertaining.

Shadows_Of_A_Sin- Sat 02 Jun 2007
Your not stupid, but please do Update---I'm growing desperate

Raceen_Ecstasy- Mon 28 May 2007
I need more of this story,it was so good!!

brealene- Sun 29 Apr 2007
ok i cant wait till u update!!! this is such a great story ! i lovers it soooo much!!!! till then great luck!!!! smiles brealene

Alandrias- Wed 18 Apr 2007
you... need.... to... UPDATE >. like NOW!

Shadows_Of_A_Sin- Fri 13 Apr 2007
update soon!!!!!!!!! please, and I don't hate you or think you are stupid, but please update soon!!!!!!!!!!

silver dragon demon- Thu 05 Apr 2007
I like the second story.plz start it.

silver dragon demon- Thu 05 Apr 2007
I like the second story.plz start it.

silver dragon demon- Thu 05 Apr 2007
I like the second story.plz start it.

silver dragon demon- Thu 05 Apr 2007
I like the second story.plz start it.

silver dragon demon- Thu 05 Apr 2007
I like the second story.plz start it.

silver dragon demon- Thu 05 Apr 2007
I like the second story.plz start it.

silver dragon demon- Thu 05 Apr 2007
I like the second story.plz start it.

silver dragon demon- Thu 05 Apr 2007
I like the second story.plz start it.

silver dragon demon- Thu 05 Apr 2007
I like the second story.plz start it.

silver dragon demon- Thu 05 Apr 2007
I like the second story.plz start it.

silver dragon demon- Thu 05 Apr 2007
I like the second story.plz start it.

silver dragon demon- Thu 05 Apr 2007
I like the second story.plz start it.

silver dragon demon- Thu 05 Apr 2007
I like the second story.plz start it.

silver dragon demon- Thu 05 Apr 2007
I like the second story.plz start it.

silver dragon demon- Thu 05 Apr 2007
I like the second story.plz start it.

silver dragon demon- Thu 05 Apr 2007
I like the second story.plz start it.

silver dragon demon- Thu 05 Apr 2007
I like the second story.plz start it.

silver dragon demon- Thu 05 Apr 2007
I like the second story.plz start it.

silver dragon demon- Thu 05 Apr 2007
I like the second story.plz start it.

silver dragon demon- Thu 05 Apr 2007
I like the second story.plz start it.

silver dragon demon- Thu 05 Apr 2007
I like the second story.plz start it.

Sicilia- Sun 25 Mar 2007
When will you update???

sessxkag- Sun 11 Mar 2007
update soon

WhiteDragon Demon- Sat 10 Mar 2007
It's so sad I love it!!!!!! Plez update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

WhiteDragon Demon- Sat 10 Mar 2007
It's so sad I love it!!!!!! Plez update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

WhiteDragon Demon- Sat 10 Mar 2007
It's so sad I love it!!!!!! Plez update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

WhiteDragon Demon- Sat 10 Mar 2007
It's so sad I love it!!!!!! Plez update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

WhiteDragon Demon- Sat 10 Mar 2007
It's so sad I love it!!!!!! Plez update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

WhiteDragon Demon- Sat 10 Mar 2007
It's so sad I love it!!!!!! Plez update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

WhiteDragon Demon- Sat 10 Mar 2007
It's so sad I love it!!!!!! Plez update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

WhiteDragon Demon- Sat 10 Mar 2007
It's so sad I love it!!!!!! Plez update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

WhiteDragon Demon- Sat 10 Mar 2007
It's so sad I love it!!!!!! Plez update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

WhiteDragon Demon- Sat 10 Mar 2007
It's so sad I love it!!!!!! Plez update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

WhiteDragon Demon- Sat 10 Mar 2007
It's so sad I love it!!!!!! Plez update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

WhiteDragon Demon- Sat 10 Mar 2007
It's so sad I love it!!!!!! Plez update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

BlackNeko Demon- Sat 10 Mar 2007
It's so sad I love it!!!!!! Plez update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

BlackNeko Demon- Sat 10 Mar 2007
It's so sad I love it!!!!!! Plez update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

BlackNeko Demon- Sat 10 Mar 2007
It's so sad I love it!!!!!! Plez update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

BlackNeko Demon- Sat 10 Mar 2007
It's so sad I love it!!!!!! Plez update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

BlackNeko Demon- Sat 10 Mar 2007
It's so sad I love it!!!!!! Plez update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

BlackNeko Demon- Sat 10 Mar 2007
It's so sad I love it!!!!!! Plez update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

BlackNeko Demon- Sat 10 Mar 2007
It's so sad I love it!!!!!! Plez update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

BlackNeko Demon- Sat 10 Mar 2007
It's so sad I love it!!!!!! Plez update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

BlackNeko Demon- Sat 10 Mar 2007
It's so sad I love it!!!!!! Plez update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

BlackNeko Demon- Sat 10 Mar 2007
It's so sad I love it!!!!!! Plez update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

BlackNeko Demon- Sat 10 Mar 2007
It's so sad I love it!!!!!! Plez update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

BlackNeko Demon- Sat 10 Mar 2007
It's so sad I love it!!!!!! Plez update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

BlackNeko Demon- Sat 10 Mar 2007
It's so sad I love it!!!!!! Plez update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

BlackNeko Demon- Sat 10 Mar 2007
It's so sad I love it!!!!!! Plez update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

SilverInu Demon- Sat 10 Mar 2007
It's so sad I love it!!!!!! Plez update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

SilverInu Demon- Sat 10 Mar 2007
It's so sad I love it!!!!!! Plez update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

SilverInu Demon- Sat 10 Mar 2007
It's so sad I love it!!!!!! Plez update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

SilverInu Demon- Sat 10 Mar 2007
It's so sad I love it!!!!!! Plez update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

SilverInu Demon- Sat 10 Mar 2007
It's so sad I love it!!!!!! Plez update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

SilverInu Demon- Sat 10 Mar 2007
It's so sad I love it!!!!!! Plez update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

SilverInu Demon- Sat 10 Mar 2007
It's so sad I love it!!!!!! Plez update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

SilverInu Demon- Sat 10 Mar 2007
It's so sad I love it!!!!!! Plez update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

SilverInu Demon- Sat 10 Mar 2007
It's so sad I love it!!!!!! Plez update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

SilverInu Demon- Sat 10 Mar 2007
It's so sad I love it!!!!!! Plez update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

SilverInu Demon- Sat 10 Mar 2007
It's so sad I love it!!!!!! Plez update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

SilverInu Demon- Sat 10 Mar 2007
It's so sad I love it!!!!!! Plez update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

SilverInu Demon- Sat 10 Mar 2007
It's so sad I love it!!!!!! Plez update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Slm_candle- Thu 08 Mar 2007
YAY you gunna update YAY.

Nishi- Thu 08 Mar 2007
I really like how the story is going so far!!! Plus I also really like the ideas you have for stories. I'll be looking forward to reading more of your works.

Fallen Angel- Wed 07 Mar 2007
i love it! please udate soon!

Sicilia- Mon 05 Mar 2007
come on you need to , have to, must update. Sorry if I sound demanding, but this is one of the best stories ever and now I keep checking to see if you have updated

Sicilia- Mon 05 Mar 2007
come on you need to , have to, must update. Sorry if I sound demanding, but this is one of the best stories ever and now I keep checking to see if you have updated

Dark eyes- Sun 25 Feb 2007
love it udate soon!

I'm Nova- Fri 23 Feb 2007
I love this with all my soul. it's simply wonderful! I envy Kagome so much. Update asap. Oh, and I'm really ignorant: your japanese title is translated in the subtitle or means something else?

I'm Nova- Fri 23 Feb 2007
I love this with all my soul. it's simply wonderful! I envy Kagome so much. Update asap. Oh, and I'm really ignorant: your japanese title is translated in the subtitle or means something else?

joe- Wed 21 Feb 2007
i loved it i cried plez oh plez don't let it end a sad ending i love this story so plez udate soon!

The Black Crow- Wed 14 Feb 2007
Oh Gods... you made me cry. T.T
Thsi story is so very much beautiful!!!!
Isn't there a way to find the "genetically possible by murphy's theory" blue flower of seven petals!!!?????!!!!
Gods! Anyway, I can't wait for the BIG talk between our two favourite stubborn people ;D
Hope see you soon ^_^
Ja nE

Kat- Wed 14 Feb 2007
hey OMG i love your fic you so have to update soon it is really good i'm dieing to know whathappens

FluffyFox- Fri 02 Feb 2007
Is this going to end happy? I just had to ask that, I mean...I really, really, really want to know! Arg!

You just cut it off at the most inopertune moments!

Just update soon and thanks again for this fan fic!

Ja Ne!

Faby- Mon 22 Jan 2007
Ahha..WHY!!!???? U make cry, U great son of a gun, and to add more to my cry babyness I put on Mario : "Let My Breath" It was beatiful man. Okay I have stopped
.... it like Kozu(fuck:sorry about use'in this word) it was wonderful and U better not laugh about it okay!!
*x* so aaaaaaaahhhhha ...... ka
well peace and please finish this story about more than 100 PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!! :)
Your awaiting reader,
Faby

dark anbu- Mon 22 Jan 2007
NOOOO!!!!PLEZZ!! CONTINUE!!! I LOVED IT:D i always love the stories were kagome finds a journal or something that admits sesshomarus love or interest in her that she was not supossed to find!^^

angela- Mon 22 Jan 2007
I choos 1 and this fanfic RULZ!
Angela

angela- Mon 22 Jan 2007
I choos 1 and this fanfic RULZ!
Angela

nostalgic-maiden- Mon 22 Jan 2007
hey, nice story you have here =) i love how you put that little intro in every chapter, very nice.

black moon inu- Mon 22 Jan 2007
I cried I'm sorry but I cried its so sad though there were a few parts that were funny like when kagome was saying that sesshoumaru was a virgin, and when inu was chased by sango for ruining a moment. Post soon. oh and you should write Kagome in the wonderland it sounds good.

Critic_At_Work- Mon 22 Jan 2007
I think you should know that you called everyone 'gays' in the first chapter. It's around when Kagome is going to bathe and she gets mad at everyone. No better way to insult gays by using anime to do it!

Kanela- Sun 21 Jan 2007
I am soooo going to hunt you down if you make Sesshoumaru miserable...again. Was it not enough his childhood? And Kagome!! Let him know she loves him!!! NOW!

Ahemm...yeah, update soon please.

-Kanz

JEn- Sun 21 Jan 2007
SO GOOD!!! UPDATE SOON!!

reina- Sun 21 Jan 2007
arrrrrggggggggg!!!!!!! your story is sooooooooo captivating, and i'm so frustrated right now!!! i wanna see what happens!! =[

it's a great story, even though you have a lot of typos (which i'll forgive, because i know that it's hard to catch your own mistakes... believe me, i've tried... >_)

update as soon as artistically possible! =]

Catofhope- Sun 21 Jan 2007
ooo please update soon

slave2maru- Sun 21 Jan 2007
i must say, i just recently found your story but i am definitely hooked. hope you update soon.

Sicilia- Sun 21 Jan 2007
MY HEART SKEPT A BEAT WHEN I SAW YOU HAD UPDATED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 and I want a kiss between Kagome and Sesshomaru in the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!! please please!!!!!!

Sicilia- Sun 21 Jan 2007
MY HEART SKEPT A BEAT WHEN I SAW YOU HAD UPDATED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 and I want a kiss between Kagome and Sesshomaru in the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!! please please!!!!!!

ariel- Sun 21 Jan 2007
hey,
i really love this story, so please hurry up and write the rest,
bye- ariel

Kogasangel2- Sun 21 Jan 2007
Awesome story, I hope you update soon

althea- Sun 21 Jan 2007
im gonna beat u bloody if u don't update soon!!! how could u end it there. !!!!! bears set for pelting if you don't update !!!!!

Sesshy's angel18- Sun 21 Jan 2007
This was good and glad that you updated.Update soon.

FluffyFox- Sun 14 Jan 2007
Damn you!! How dare you leave it there? Why do you have to be soo crewl?

T.T

Sorry...but that is sooo evil, but I will bear with it! Hmph!

Please update this soon, I might just go insane if you don't!

Ja!

FrzCherryblossom- Thu 04 Jan 2007
I really like this story! I think that the way you portray Sesshomaru is the way he would act if that really happened... I think. And I love how you didn't make Kikyo evil. I did notice a few spelling errors someplaces, but it's hardly noticable... And for the looooong one shot, I vote for #2, Kagome in Wonderland! Looks fun.

heather- Fri 29 Dec 2006
Hey

Great anyway i like the one shot idea but anyway PLEASE update really soon I love this fic and the wait is killing me

sesshys_girl06- Fri 29 Dec 2006
make him understanding!!!oh and have him show her just how much he loves her. perhaps the words in the diary had won her heart over? mabey when she explains how she found it, he'd like ponce on her, and demand that she tell him how much she read, and kagome would be all like "I started reading it, it was beutiful, i coulden't stop, even after i found out who was writing it and what it was about, it was... " then mabey a smootch later they'll come back to camp holding hands, and sesshoumaru will sleep beside kagome, and wrap the fluffy thing around her... surly you can take it from there. just somthing to help you get over your writers block!! i get it all the time!!


~Sesshys_girl06~

Sicilia- Tue 26 Dec 2006
Kagome in Wonderland sounds great. When are you going to update in Shiinto no Saishuuheiki? I really want to read the next chapter

coquettish-zala- Thu 21 Dec 2006
i prefer: Kagome in the Wonderland ...good luck writing!

Sicilia- Wed 20 Dec 2006
Come on you have to update soon!!!! This is the best story I had ever read and you are making us wait!!! please update soon

Sidhe- Mon 18 Dec 2006
this is for the story choice at the end of the last chaper...the second one looks great ::grins::

?- Sun 17 Dec 2006
hey wen are you gonna update?!?!

Saki- Wed 13 Dec 2006
Please update soon! You are a very talented writer, and I deeply wish that I will one day have a shred of your talent. ;_l

Chicken Noodle Soup- Wed 13 Dec 2006
I love this story. You're sucha a good author. Please write more. I'm litterly dying to read the ending of this story and the other ones you wrote. Anyway times up, and I gotta go. Bye.

Dawn- Tue 12 Dec 2006
i really like the idea of kagome in wonderland.

keep up the good work!

Kat- Sat 09 Dec 2006
hey great fic you have to update soon PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!

andi- Thu 07 Dec 2006
Well... Seeing that Kagome read the book... and she isn't avoiding Sesshomaru, i would think that he would be happy that she knows his feelings, and will still go by him and is showing some affection... So maybe anger is a bit too much..?

Black Sakura- Mon 04 Dec 2006
great chapter loved the cliffy at the end.
Please put the next chapter up soon.

as for the stories you asked about i like the first one the best but they are both good.

Darkness- Mon 04 Dec 2006

2. Kagome in the Wonderland pick this one please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

someonr- Mon 04 Dec 2006
plez udate and i go with it sounds good!

Curry Chicken- Mon 04 Dec 2006
Good chappie...I hope Sess isn't too mad at her.

My vote is for Kagome in Wonderland!

Curry Chicken- Mon 04 Dec 2006
Good chappie...I hope Sess isn't too mad at her.

My vote is for Kagome in Wonderland!

Shinju- Mon 04 Dec 2006
I like this story. As for your one-shot I pick #2 Kagome in the Wonderland.

Tally Mark- Mon 04 Dec 2006
YES! He's finally learned about the diary! I've been dying waiting for this moment (evil you, making it a cliffhanger though). Great stuff. I think he ought to be extremely nervous/panicked, over whether she's read the diary, and worried about what she thinks. Maybe a little embaressed too, that she knows all his thoughts and feelings before he was ready to tell her, but mostly I feel like in the current situation he'd be worried and nervous. I don't think he should be angry; aside from that he already promised he wouldn't be angry, I just don't think it would fit the situation.

And I vote for Kagome in Wonderland. ^__^

elsy- Sun 03 Dec 2006
AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You had to leave it like that????????? I hate you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ghhhhhhhrrrrrrrrrrr update as oon as possible.

Seli- Sun 03 Dec 2006
OMFG #2 #2!!! That one looks hot oo; And, btw, you need to die for that cliff hanger. xD jk

luyi- Sun 03 Dec 2006
1. Closer to Heaven
that one sounds good

Demetria- Sun 03 Dec 2006
Kagome in Wonderland!
^Sounds like fun!

I flipped when I see a new chapter up! Keep up dating, I'm going nutso here! :)

Sicilia- Sun 03 Dec 2006
I think he should be nervous, either wake Kagome up or wait till she wakes up by her self. Then ask her if she read it, and then she can blush, but please don't make him be angry at her!!!

kuma- Sun 03 Dec 2006
ha she got caught slipping

Inu_Twins- Sun 03 Dec 2006
YAY! I love that chapter plz update soon!

slm_candle- Sun 03 Dec 2006
Good job okay here we go i want the second one please the one with kags running away.

Sesshy's angel18- Sun 03 Dec 2006
I pick the second one Kagome in the Wonderland.The chapters were excellant.Update soon.

Sesshoumaru's Fiend and Demonic Nightmare- Sun 03 Dec 2006
im so sorry i haven't replied lately!!! i feel horrible!! but i'm relpying now!! *smiles*...

great chapter!! and why the heck would Kagome show him the book?! Does she WANT to die and get her heart broken...uhh..OBVIOUSLY!!! DuH!!!

Anywho...i think should go with option: ...

...wait for it....

....wait for it....

....WAIT FOR IT, DAMNIT!!.....

#2!! Kagome In Wonderland!! ... i like humor of tradegy ANY DAY!!....

please update again when u can!!

Ja!

-[Ashley]

Shadow's Angel- Sun 03 Dec 2006
if i gave a suggestion about how he should react it probably wouldn't help thestory any but i will say i think u r doing a good job

Shadow's Angel- Sun 03 Dec 2006
if i gave a suggestion about how he should react it probably wouldn't help thestory any but i will say i think u r

DeadlyTeardrops- Sun 03 Dec 2006
2. Kagome in the Wonderland

I'm voting for that one!!

Anyway, I must say that I have enjoyed this fanfiction so far very much and hope that you'll keep the good work up! ^_^ I really love your fic and the way you portaled Sesshomaru! So kawaii!

Sicilia- Tue 28 Nov 2006
Hi I was hoping to find chapter 15 , please update soon!

Sicilia- Sun 26 Nov 2006
hey this is great, when will the next one be out???

sesshys_girl06- Sat 25 Nov 2006
wow!! i can't wait till the next chapter, and if you need any ideas for this story i can help just email me, and i hope you like my story, it's only got 2 chapies, not 4. please tell me what you think, it's my first one. oh and i use word pad, i don't have corell word perfect site 8. but anyways do continue with your story, it's compleatly awesome, and i support everything so far, yay sesshy's gonna fight for kagome!!!

Yenni- Tue 21 Nov 2006
-=shakes fist at your sister=-S'ok no worry


I love how you're making the story move along...i cant wait for your next update

jay- Mon 20 Nov 2006
i have never sent a review but i have to just say that this is one of the best put together stories i have ever read. Thank you for not being a idiot like so many other paople. hope to read more chapters in the future

stephanie- Mon 20 Nov 2006
really good story but you have some spelling errors that you need to fix and make sure they dont show up again later. Like in the story when you said Sesshomaru was "MAIL" i think you ment to say he was "MALE"

Sicilia- Mon 20 Nov 2006
Hey it is a great story is the 5 time I read Chapter 14. And it is not boring at all, I love the fact that they are both virgins!! it's going to be a great lemon when it comes to it hehehe. Is Kagome going to ever tell him that she read his diary and that she knows what he feels for her?????

Tally Mark- Mon 20 Nov 2006
Still loving this. ^___^ I really like the character development you've got going--how throughout the story, he was so hopeless and desolate that he could only watch from afar, but now he's been given the will and the hope to fight for her! And I'm glad you didn't rush things and have them confess their love yet; after all, it's only been a few days for Kagome.

Yuki Asao- Sun 19 Nov 2006
Oh geez that last chapter made me laugh so hard! LOL PLEASE update as soon as you can! And make longer chapters!!! PLEASE make longer chapters. This is a great story!

Sicilia- Sun 19 Nov 2006
Hey it is great!!! When will you post the next chapter???

Kat- Sun 19 Nov 2006
Hey

I totally love your story!! anyway hope you update soon
later and how many more chapters are in the story ? do you know yet?

me- Sun 19 Nov 2006
Please, Please spell check and grammar check! Sounds good so far, but you really need to work on the things listed above. Thanks.

Debra Talkington- Sun 19 Nov 2006
hey good job. Update oh and just to further confuse you OMFG WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

Pontas-Metallika- Sun 19 Nov 2006
Eek! Pontas-Metallika here, annoyed with FF.Net updates so coming to check your Single Spark updates XD; Update soon! 33 So cute this chappie, can't wait for more ^^ UPDATE! *praises your muse so she'll give you more inspiration* =D

FluffyFox- Sat 18 Nov 2006
This story rocks! Please update soon!

Yuki Asao- Sat 18 Nov 2006
This is very good, but you keep spelling things wrong, and you sometimes make mistakes with your grammar. Try getting a beta reader, they really help lots! :)

Sesshy's angel18- Sat 18 Nov 2006
This is both a sweet and funny chapter hope Sango doesn't catch Inu.Update soon.

black sakura- Sat 18 Nov 2006
great chapter, keep it up.

i really like sesshoumarus character
PLEASE KEEP GOING!!!

butterflychan- Sat 18 Nov 2006
Oh my gosh...I squealed like the girl I am when I saw the new chapter! -lol- It was great! And then, of course, I squealed even more when I read that I was your new beta. I feel so lucky, I just hope no one kills ME for getting the position..hehehe

Yes, but WONDERFUL chapter!

Shadow's Angel- Sat 18 Nov 2006
rofl rofl rofl rofl rofl rofl rofl rofl rofl

lmao lmao lmao lmao lmao lmao lmao

ok im better its funny i luv it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

luyi- Sat 18 Nov 2006
please write more me and my friend loves this story. are you going to stop writing?! please dont stop writng WAAAAA! i'm gonna cry!

AW555- Thu 16 Nov 2006
WOO! An update! XD Loved it as always! Update soon!

Miyuki- Wed 15 Nov 2006
The next chapter's gotta be a lemon!!!!!!!!!!

sakurachan_1- Wed 15 Nov 2006
woooow.... that was intense :P
poor yasha jajajaja

Inu_Twins- Tue 14 Nov 2006
You make me cry! Plz Updaet ASAP or I will drown in my tears becuase I want more of that chapter that you killed

Midnight Kagome- Tue 14 Nov 2006
oh my god that was so cool no that was so well i dount now what to say about that one but it was rilly good I loved it so much oh I loved it ^_^ ohhhh how I loved it lol ya iam funny or werdo whatever but it was good I like it you are doing a good job on the story well I well be whating for more ok ^_^

Demetria- Tue 14 Nov 2006
Oh that was a cruel cruel cliffy... ~growls.~ Ebil person...

Nonetheless, great as always. I wish your chapters were a bit longer, but for the most part its all great.

Vaneles-sama- Tue 14 Nov 2006
That was soooo cute! ^_^ That makes smile. Update again soon!

Sicilia- Tue 14 Nov 2006
When is the next one out????? Hehhe I love it, is so well done it's just like Kagome will react !!!

Bridget- Tue 14 Nov 2006
I haven't been on in a couple days and was happy to find not one but 2 chapters! And don't worry about grammar, no one is perfect. It all made perfect sense to me!

Annabelle- Tue 14 Nov 2006
I just love this story! The character of Sesshoumaru is so adoring in love it makes me wish there was such a man in this world. Please keep up the excellent work.

Aurora Antheia Raine- Tue 14 Nov 2006
Oh wow... That was... hot. xD Bad Aurora! Gettin' bad thoughts of Sesshoumaru! *Smacks self* lol. That was a reeeeally good chapter! Sort of a cliffhanger on what's going to happen between Kagome and Sesshoumaru. ;) Update soon, nee? ^___^

Yenni- Tue 14 Nov 2006
-=squee=-...more wonderful storyness.....-=waves hand in face=- I can beta for you

Catofhope- Mon 13 Nov 2006
=^.^= cool ...... hope Inuyasha doesnt find them like that though :D

Sicilia- Mon 13 Nov 2006
Great story when do you have the next one out????

butterflychan- Mon 13 Nov 2006
Wonderful chapter with a cliffy that makes me want to strangle you!!! >. -lol-

I offer up my services to beta for you, if you are still looking at this point, I can't stand the thought of a poor author out there being beta-less!

Black Sakura- Mon 13 Nov 2006
this story is really great you have to keep going and i really liked the last chapter posted!!!!

Katie- Mon 13 Nov 2006
OOOOH is it getting hot or what?! Hehe... im sorry i just had to hehe great story so far update soon so I dont go crazy and erm....plz?

google- Mon 13 Nov 2006
:D nice... poor sesshomaru.lol

Sesshy's angel18- Mon 13 Nov 2006
This is a good but it had some spelling errors.Update soon.

Yenni- Mon 13 Nov 2006
OOOO I'll beta!!!.....oh...and idea for shippo....i know its quite done...but what bout rin...she needs someone too yanno

-=curses you for not continuing=- Damn you and your chapter needs to end thoughts.....just keep going...its amazing

Brianna- Sun 12 Nov 2006
that was so funny! kags is all like, 'that girl is so stupid for not loving this guy,' and, surprise suprise, its her! hahaha! i laughed so hard! that was great, good job :)

Nishi- Fri 10 Nov 2006
I love your story!!!! Please update!!
I think it would be cute to have Shippo pair up with Souten !!!!

Odango- Fri 10 Nov 2006
;.; OMG such a good chapter

luyi ren- Thu 09 Nov 2006
please write soon me and my friend completley fell in love with this story!

Shadow15*- Thu 09 Nov 2006
It would be cute to see Shippo paired with Rin. This is getting more interesting with all of the cliffhangers... T.T

~Shadow

Sesshy's angel18- Thu 09 Nov 2006
This was a good chapter .update soon.

Black Sakura- Thu 09 Nov 2006
great job please keep going!!!!!!

i love how you do Sesshoumarus thoughts, really well done.

althea- Thu 09 Nov 2006
i get this twitch in my right i every time a chapter ends..... update before it becomes permanent ... i want more more

slm_candle- Thu 09 Nov 2006
hey sorry again but i hadnt expexted THIS much homework but still good job.

koyru- Thu 09 Nov 2006
omg that chapter was sooo cute! please no more cliffies *cries* your killing me with the suspense!

Sesshy's angel18- Wed 08 Nov 2006
This is agood chapter but you got the swords names mixed up.

kuma- Wed 08 Nov 2006
oh that was cold...stupid cliffy...update soon please

Odango- Wed 08 Nov 2006
NO FAIRRRRR!!!! OMG YOOU NEED TO UPDATE LIKE TOMMROW BEFORe NOON!!!! btw great fic XD

slm_candle- Wed 08 Nov 2006
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMFG
that was soooooooooooooooooooooooooooo cute. update nad sorry i can't beta cuz i got too much homework now that i started my advanced classes sorry.

Yenni- Wed 08 Nov 2006
MORE MORE MORE no cliffies....just one looooooooong chapter leading to another looooooooooong chapter.....-=glomps=- teh awsomeness must not be stopped

sakurachan_1- Wed 08 Nov 2006
ooohhhhh i love cliffies jajajaja!!! i hope that you update soon because i love this story of yours ... keep up the good writing

Aurora Antheia Raine- Wed 08 Nov 2006
I think you meant to say Tenseiga, not Tetsuisaiga. >.> Tenseiga is the sword that brings life. Other than that, great job!

elsy- Wed 08 Nov 2006
HHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTEEEEEEEEERRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! RGHHHHHHHR I LOVED THE CHAPTER. UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE.

butterflychan- Wed 08 Nov 2006
Nuuuuuuuuuuuuu!!!!!!!!!!!

Horrible cliffy-leaver!!! Now I'm going to have to check the site constantly tomorrow...lol.

I think I'm addicted to your story. Blast! Well, I'm looking forward to more, bring on more of the good stuff!

~Chrissy

mine- Wed 08 Nov 2006
i like it can't wait for another

dawn- Wed 08 Nov 2006
^^ i adore this story! adore adore adore!!!! ive been following it on ffnet for only a little while. but ive no account there and therefore could not inform u of ur wonderfulness! *is that a word...?* so yes! love love adore adore!

dawn- Wed 08 Nov 2006
^^ i adore this story! adore adore adore!!!! ive been following it on ffnet for only a little while. but ive no account there and therefore could not inform u of ur wonderfulness! *is that a word...?* so yes! love love adore adore!

Bridget- Mon 06 Nov 2006
I'm loving it so far! Keep going.

son- Sun 05 Nov 2006
i lov it i hope that Sesshomaru realizes that kagome doesn't love inu any more and i hope after the little thing part is ove that i hope there is a hot spring with them togeteer and might hav sex!!!

google- Sun 05 Nov 2006
SQUEEEEEE!!!1 UPDAAAAAAAAAAATEEEEE!!!!!!!!! -throws caffiene products- :D

Sesshy's angel18- Sun 05 Nov 2006
This was a good chapter.Update soon.

swtdrm01- Sat 04 Nov 2006
Oh how sweeeeet! I loved it. Please update to see what happens next.

Seli- Sat 04 Nov 2006
EEEEE *beats away bad grammar and spelling mistakes with a wooden stick* Sorry bout that.... me= grammar nut. Yeah, but asides from that, I love your story. It has a wonderfuly sad plot, but fix those grammar mistakes! It throws off the mood of the story. This is not ment to be a flame, and if it sounds like one my deepest apologies, but bad grammar drives me crazy. Keep the goodness comming!

Raceen- Sat 04 Nov 2006
It's so beautifully written (even with it's grammer mistakes) ! I love Sesshomaru, Shinto no Saishuuheiki. His feelings are so sweet yet they burn my heart with a warth and a small bit of saddness. He is so poetic and you don't see that side of Seeshomaru a lot. nice chapter.

Kohana- Sat 04 Nov 2006
This story is really coming along!! I really love how you have mad Sesshoumaru in to this passionate person, hidden beneth it all. The only thing wrong I noticed was a few spelling errors through out it but other than that its really great story. I like how Sesshoumaru is strugling with himself about her. Keep it up! Your doing GREAT!!

Catofhope- Sat 04 Nov 2006
yay u updated *happy dance* this story rox

Koishii- Fri 03 Nov 2006
Well, you could still use a beta reader (or if you have one, a better one). But you are getting better :D The story really is coming along and I am enjoying it :D

Tally Mark- Fri 03 Nov 2006
Aww, I love how she came running to him. Poor Sesshoumaru, beating himself up all the time (but I love it because that just makes it all the better whenever Kag does a little nice thing!).

And don't write for ratings; write because you have a story you want to tell! You can't please everyone. Besides, I think a lot of your not-as-good ratings just come from grammar/spelling issues. Now, normally I'm like the grammar police and won't read a fic thats full of errors--but I love this story so much that I just don't care. ^__^ so that tells you something!

brittany- Fri 03 Nov 2006
The story is good but the grammer and spelling needs a little work. Now you need to update so we can find out what's up with Kikyou! Please and Thank you!

DemonChild526- Fri 03 Nov 2006
My only complant is that the dream thing is kinda a cliche; I see it in so many stories, I'm really tired of hearing about it.

Other than that, keep up the good work, I'll keep reviewing if you keep your posting up. Its highly appreciated.

~Demetria

Sesshy's angel18- Fri 03 Nov 2006
This was a great chapter.sess needs to tell his feelings before they kill him. Update soon.

slm_candle- Fri 03 Nov 2006
hey cool let me know if you want me to beta that chappie ok.

Keres- Fri 03 Nov 2006
one word.. SWOOON! it makes me feel a warm and fuzzy (like my Sesshomaru blanket lol) ^__^ PLEASE keep up the good work!!!!

Sesshy's angel18- Thu 02 Nov 2006
This was a good chapter they have a chance to be alone how sweet.Update soon.

DemonChild526- Thu 02 Nov 2006
I am loving this story. It is so cute! and I love the way you portray Sesshoumaru in this, I always seen him to have a "softer" side, and this is just perfect. Update quickly before I go insane! I can't stand waiting for the next chapter! You torture this poor girl!!!

Odango- Thu 02 Nov 2006
;.; gods I LOVE your story please update soon

Tally Mark- Thu 02 Nov 2006
*swoons with happiness* Beautiful as ever, I just loved it. That was just touching. I love how you write poor, lovesick Sesshoumaru andthe way he reacts to every little thing she does.

And that kiss totally made my day!

Angel of the Fallen- Thu 02 Nov 2006
aww its sooo cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

amy- Wed 01 Nov 2006
Update NOW!! plz and thankz you!!

elsy- Mon 30 Oct 2006
Hey love the story Pleaseeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! update as soon as you can and i hope to read from you soon.!!!! ^__^

someone- Sun 29 Oct 2006
i like it so keep it up and i love those poemes so plez keep it all up! i hope they can be come mates. here i hav an idea maybe she startes to take a bath and he ask to join and she says yes... the rest is up to u!

Michiyo- Sun 29 Oct 2006
OMG so cute!!!! gah i luv it!! he's joining the group and he got a smile! please update soon i absolutely adore this story!

Angel of the Fallen- Sun 29 Oct 2006
oh my gosh I FLIPPIN LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

sesshsmate101- Sun 29 Oct 2006
oh wow! i wasn't expecting him to join their group! Now im REALLY ecxited! lol can't wai ttill the next update!

Black Sakura- Sun 29 Oct 2006
really good story so far, you should keep going i really want to know what happens next

odango- Sun 29 Oct 2006
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWw what a great chapter

Sesshy's angel18- Sun 29 Oct 2006
This was a great chapter and sweet sess gets to be around kag. Please update soon.

Tally Mark- Sun 29 Oct 2006
He got his smile! YES! *swoons* Oh, that made my day.I'm enjoying the peek into Sessh's head. Very cute at the end, I loved the 'friends but just didn't know it' bit.

My Sess/Kag arts not so good yet, but I'd check out Youkai Yumes art on deviantart ( http://youkaiyume.deviantart.com/ ). I'd also check out the Sess/Kag deviantart club ( http://sesskag.deviantart.com/ ). Lots of good stuff!

FallenGoddessoftheMoon- Sat 28 Oct 2006
Hello! I am truly enjoying your fic! ^^ It is very interesting! I cannot wait for the next chapter! I think it is fairly original! ^^ Great job!
I'll be watching for the next update! Ja ne!

Sincerly,
-Fallen-

Cochrann- Sat 28 Oct 2006
please don't neglect this story too much...I adore the plot so much!

slm_candle- Sat 28 Oct 2006
okay and good job i like it. redacting.....now

Midnight kagome- Fri 27 Oct 2006
OH MY GOD!! THAT WAS SO COOL YOU HAVE TO HAVE THE OTHER CHAPTER SOON IAM DANCING ALL OVER THE PLACE IN MY ROOM ^_^ BECOUSE IT WAS SO GOOD WHAT WELL SESSHOMARU-SAMA DO HE HE HE WELL I HOPE YOU PUT UP A NOTHER ONE SOON ^_~

lorienfaerie- Fri 27 Oct 2006
Good story, it's so cute that Sesshoumaru fell for Kagome first. Please update soon!

swtdrm01- Thu 26 Oct 2006
I love it. Please update soon. I can't wait to find out what happens next.

FAL- Thu 26 Oct 2006
Noooo!! U stopped the Chapter there...How could U? It was getting so good and U kill it. Plz Update ASAP!!!

kuma- Thu 26 Oct 2006
i love it update soon its getting good

Cochrann- Thu 26 Oct 2006
that was a horrible cliffie...but at least the two are showing their true feelings. I can't wait to read the next chapter!

butterflychan- Thu 26 Oct 2006
Yay! ^-^ Sesshy to the rescue!!!!

I can't wait for more!!! You rock!

Sesshy's angel18- Thu 26 Oct 2006
This was a great chapter. Hope you update soon.

sesshsmate101- Thu 26 Oct 2006
Hi! Awesome chapter! I loved it! And it's just awesome! And the plot is just so kewl! can't wait till you update!

Also, for Sessh and Kag pic.. i draw them , but they're not that good, but go to www.deviantart.com and loko up Sesshoumaru Kagome and you should get TONS!

slm_candle- Thu 26 Oct 2006
kk night night miss irena have fun.

Catofhope- Thu 26 Oct 2006
wow this has 2 be one of my fave storys ever please update soon

sesshsmate101- Thu 26 Oct 2006
OMG! this story is so awesome! I love it when Sessh loves Kags first! I'm so glad I read this story too 'cuz I'm watching the second to last episode and im in a pretty depressed mood! this really helped! lol awesoe story plz update again soon!

Tally Mark- Thu 26 Oct 2006
I love the symbolism you use, and the whole thing with the blue flower...its so beautiful it makes me swoon. I can't WAIT for when she and Sess encounter each other (and to see his reaction when he finds out shes got his diary :D ).

Kayla- Wed 25 Oct 2006
... Oh my... This is such a beautiful story. It makes me wish I had something like that. It... It's just pure genius! Keep it up!!!!

judzea- Wed 25 Oct 2006
I like your storyline. Keep up the good work and hope to see more chapters added soon. I will add this story to my favourites list.

Cochrann- Wed 25 Oct 2006
Yay...a new chapter....I look forward to reading this story every day I check a single spark!

Matia- Wed 25 Oct 2006
wow this is an amazing story. I have read many storied on this site and i really enjoyed this one, i cannot wait to read what happends next, it is romantic and stirring of the emotional sides. I hope you update soon bc with this story you have made a fan out of me ^_^
Ja Ne

Matia

Sesshy's angel18- Wed 25 Oct 2006
Thos is a great chapter can't wait for the next chapter. So update soon Please.

Sesshomaru12262- Wed 25 Oct 2006
Ireally like your story keep writing and I will be your beta if you let me and I will work really hard I promise.

Save me!- Wed 25 Oct 2006
so good plez add more!

Sesshys_girl06- Wed 25 Oct 2006
wow!!! i love it soo much, i never knew sessh coud be sensitive and feel so much. i wonder how he keeps his facacade on...?

slm_candle- Wed 25 Oct 2006
Hey it's not letting me review oh no i sent it to your messages on here check messages good job and this was just the begining????!!!!!! i thought it was like the actual real story body of it but it is just the begining cool.

slm_candle- Wed 25 Oct 2006
Hello i am here sorry i am so trying to send it to you it is in your umm messages on a single spark. kk love ya byebye ps working on other chappies

odango- Wed 25 Oct 2006
once again WOW what a great fan fic please update soon

Midnight kagome- Wed 25 Oct 2006
ok I like this one to but I think it time for more sesshomaru in there but it is still good I LOVE IT ALOUT SO MORE SESSHOMARU IN THERE OK ^_^

slm_candle- Wed 25 Oct 2006
hey yo i sent it the 5th chappie and it's sent through here so just simply check your messages on a single spark kk oh and your doing a very good job kk

Midnight kagome- Wed 25 Oct 2006
I LOVE THIS CHAPTER ^_^ but it is sad for sessho-sama but I love every thing about this one your good at doing all of this story so I well see if you put more up ok ^_^

~MIdnight Kagome~- Wed 25 Oct 2006
I like the song its very nice and sweet but it is so sad that he can not tell kagome how he fells for her I hope they get to gether soon i dount like seeing sesshomaru sad but I think it rilly good the sorty is comming rilly good well I well see ya I have to go to school but I might read one more chapter ^_~

Cochrann- Tue 24 Oct 2006
OMG, I love this chapter - even with all the spelling errors screaming at me!! Seriously I love sessho's journal...it's fantastic and it would be neat to have a present-time sesshou pov!

Tally Mark- Tue 24 Oct 2006
If Sesshoumaru doesn't get his one smile soon I think I'll cry. That was so beautiful...I love the way he pours out his emotions, you can feel the longing and hope and despair. Truly lovely!

Hm, as for an all Sess chapter, I'd definately be interested in seeing one, though it doesn't necessarily have to be soon--whenever its appropriate I guess. You haven't let me down yet, so just do whatever you think is best!

helikesitheymikey!- Tue 24 Oct 2006
I WANT SESSY AND KAGOME TO MEET IN THE WOODS, GET TOGETHER VERY SOON, AND HAVE THE KID THAT WAS IN THE DREAM/PREMONITION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AkaiKurai- Tue 24 Oct 2006
Oh my gosh, this chapter almost made me cry! Um...not much ot say without screaming how awesome this fic is and I figure you like your sense of hearing so...Update soon!

slm_candle- Tue 24 Oct 2006
Hey i tried to send you the updated version but yahoo decided it didnt like the name so i am sending it from my other email and if that fails then i shall give it to you in a review kk byebye

FAL- Tue 24 Oct 2006
U will update!!! I luv it so much

Sesshy's angel18- Tue 24 Oct 2006
This was so sweet.But Rin's family was killed by bandits and the village she was at was killed by Kouga's demons.And yeah to having a short chapter of Sess POV. Update soon.

dei-dreamer.- Tue 24 Oct 2006
Wow. . .I have to say, this is probably one of the best fanfictions I've read...ever!~
You have good english! (not the best/ But I know you'll work on it!>.)
But regardless, you have beautiful writing skills, ne! I just love how you made Sesshoumaru have this type of melo-dramatic poetic side 8D
Keep on updating! I'm really really REALLY anxious to see what happens next! ^-^

Kimonno Rose- Mon 23 Oct 2006
Awwwwww
This story is so so so so so so so CUTE!!
What Sesshoumaru writes is so romantic. I am way jelaous of Kagome. Sesshoumaru is such a poet. I love this story.
UPDATE SOON!!!!!
PLEASE!!!!!!

Andi- Mon 23 Oct 2006
I thought your story was awesome! I really liked it, And i think you should keep going with it, Just go with the flow! I Hope you write again soon!

Tally Mark- Mon 23 Oct 2006
Oh, this is beautiful--Sesshoumarus writing is so lovely and poetic. Especially the bit with the sun and the melted wings, and the blue flower. I love it! ^_^

Cochrann- Sun 22 Oct 2006
Awesome...I absolutely love this story - especially what sesshy writes in his journal...it's just so beautiful and wonderful!! please update asap...I deffinietly want to see what happens between the star-crossed lovers!!

Kanela- Sun 22 Oct 2006
Hey!! This is sweet!! Makes me wanna keep writing! go on, please, I wanna read more!

-Kanz

Koishii- Sun 22 Oct 2006
Another great chapter! Again though there are a few gramatical and spelling errors. But I have faith that you will fix them when you get the time, as I can tell from your A.N's that you like to write well for your fans :D

I really like where this story is headed and I'm really enjoying it. :D

Benazir- Sun 22 Oct 2006
oooo i love your story!!!! It's sooo good and romantic. It'd be so awesome if I could be your beta reader :D I love your idea of Kagome getting Sesshomaru's diary usualy it's the other way around.

Sesshoumaru's Fiend- Sun 22 Oct 2006
OMG! That was amazing! i totally love it!
i hope u get over ur bout of writers block, those things always such!
please update as soon as you can and keep up the great work!
Ja Ne!

///From The Desk Of Sesshoumaru's Fiend///

-[Ashley]

slm_candle- Sun 22 Oct 2006
YES YES YES! So good okay i shall be your beta reader and shall email you now. and give you help. and again good job on the story.

Sesshy's angel18- Sun 22 Oct 2006
This a good chapter and very sweet but whats wrong with Sango.Please update soon.

orchid- Sun 22 Oct 2006
love it... update soon...

Koishii- Sun 22 Oct 2006
The story is really good so far! You should however check into a beta reader or proof read your work aloud to yourself as there are many small gramatical and spelling errors. They are not enough to ruin the flow of the story, but it will make the story easier to read for your readers.

Again, it's still a really great story :D

Shigure-chan- Sun 22 Oct 2006
I believe that this would be a wonderful story if you got a beta and slowed the plot line down... I enjoy reading this fanfic though it has alot of good stuff in it... please keep writing.

Wood- Sun 22 Oct 2006
Oh my god.. You have to keep writing. This is so good, I gotta see how this works out. And it better work out. I am a huge Kag\\Sess fan but cant write my own. But I love reading them. And you already have me very eager for more, and after only two chapters thats saying something. So please, please continue.

felicia- Sun 22 Oct 2006
i've onli read a few chappiea of uur stry but i'm impresed with the way uu rite.. i kno it will be a nice story and i hope tuh read more of uur stories in the future.. go!

Cochrann- Sun 22 Oct 2006
OMG I love this story!! update asap!!

Sesshoumaru's Fiend- Sat 21 Oct 2006
O....My...God!
That...That...That was so Beautiful!
Totally Poetic!
Personally, i think that should would write that way...it totally suits him!...
this story is so sweet!
whats gonna happen next, me wonders..
please please please update soon!
this story kicks monkey ass!
Ja Ne!

...From The Desk Of Sesshoumaru's Fiend...

-[Ashley]

Sesshy's angel18- Sat 21 Oct 2006
This is so good I hope you update soon.

Odango- Sat 21 Oct 2006
WOW!!!! GOOD FIC PLEASE UP DATE SOON WOW!!!I LIKE IT

slm_candle- Sat 21 Oct 2006
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG I cant believe it this is soooooooooooo good please update like now fast be ye's hands as ye writes this tragic love story for the poor western lord and if you ever need a beta reader.... i'm here i saw no mistakes but i would like to offer my sevices to you only thing i ask in return is nothing if you want my yahoo it is debra_loves_sesshomaru@yahoo.com thx again please update and i am always on

DemonicTamai- Sat 21 Oct 2006
Aside from some minor spelling, and grammitical errors. This proves to be a very interesting story. ^_^ It kinda reminds me of one where it was Kagome's Diary; and Sesshoumaru found it. But I truly do believe that this concept it a much better plot. I love the ones where Sesshou secretly admires her, it's soo romantic...n_n. Well I really do hope you take the time to update soon.
Ja ne.
~tamai.

Momo- Sat 21 Oct 2006
hehe, you should continue it!! I can't wait for the second chapter of your first fanfic =] Keep on rocking ;)

AkaiKurai- Fri 20 Oct 2006
Heck yes you should continue! You do not leave us at practically a cliffie and then decide you don't want to continue anymore! Finish what you started dang it! >

I took me a while to figure out what Shiinto no Saishuuheiki meant until I looked up at the top and saw it underneath the title. Don't I feel special now?

sea- Fri 20 Oct 2006
its so intresting more please

Midnight kagome- Fri 20 Oct 2006
hey I love it but you have to finsh it its rilly good I like how you have the book and how its sesshomarus book I like it but what I thout it was funny wen kagome gout so mad and sat Inuyasha lol ^_^ well hope you finsh it it good ok I well be whating ^_~

Sesshoumaru's Fiend- Fri 20 Oct 2006
hey!
great story! i love it completely!

what does Shiinto no Saishuuheiki mean?...

'One look was able to bring him to his knees, one word and he would be her willing slave, one tear and he would revenge for even the simplest insult, one request and he would happily end his life. He lived for this moments, when he was able to be near her, his love, his desire, his sun and moon, his night sky, his Kagome...
…his Kagome, that was never his. '

that is my all time favourite part! so sentimental! i don't know why, but it affected my a lot...

please keep up the wicked awesome kick ass work and please update as soon as possible!

...From The Desk Of Sesshoumaru's Fiend...

-[Ashley]

slm_candle- Fri 20 Oct 2006
great job continue on

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