wahahahaha you used sugarcult's "pretty girl"!!!! nice touch to the story!!!! keep it up....!!!!
sakurachan_1- Mon 20 Nov 2006
oh!!! i loved the beginning ... i wonder what would happen next ...
Tokyo- Fri 10 Nov 2006
Before i get on your case about The Book Of Shadows, I will say that you are a good writer. However, you need to get you facts straight. The Book Of Shadows, BOS, is in no way related to Lucifer or any deity of evil. It is like a Wiccans bible. Yes, some hold curses and hexes in thiers, but our BOS id a very sacred iteam in a Wiccans life. So please next time you write something, do some background research.
Nekkia- Tue 07 Nov 2006
that was great first chap. please write more!
Maritza- Tue 07 Nov 2006
I'm not a member of the site, not yet anyway, but I just have to tell you that you must, i repeat, you must continue this fanfiction. It's so good, and it's only the first chapter. It is a very interesting take on the relationship between kagome and sesshomaru (and to make him The Devil-what a stroke of genius). Please update soon! Thank you
Nitta Sayuri- Fri 03 Nov 2006
Like wow! I loved it! you need to write more cause it was a really good first chapter! please write another chapter!
Wenala- Thu 02 Nov 2006
I absoluely loved your fanfic! PLEASE write another chapter or two or maybe even 15! pretty please! I'm begging you!
AnimeFanime18- Mon 30 Oct 2006
Leave me hanging...you're a bad author/authoress...you're so evil...you stopped at the first chapter! T-T
zackire- Mon 30 Oct 2006
i knew it! i knew it was Akuma no Eros (Virgin Crisis) the moment i read it.. hahaha..
a nice way to implement the plot in
Sesshy's angel18- Sun 29 Oct 2006
This is a good beginning.Update soon.
Sesshoumaru's Fiend and Demonic Nightmare- Sun 29 Oct 2006
OMG that was so friggin good! please please please please update again really soon
Sango- Sun 29 Oct 2006
Wow. I love it xD Please update as soon as you can or I'll die of suspense. *dramatic pause* Ok, not really, but you'll make me sad if you don't update as soon as you can =(
localsamurai- Sun 29 Oct 2006
Sounds like you're off to a good start. Update soon.
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