i loved it...i am such a sucker for happy endings keep writing

i loved it...i am such a sucker for happy endings keep writing

Ok this story just just plain sick and I mean sick. The rape the abuse god what kind of mind made you write this? IT SICK JUST SICK!!!

YES!!!! great story... i'm currently reading/read yur other ones... i think yur the best aurther on here... i'm not styin to suck up to u, or anything... but still!

YES!!!! great story... i'm currently reading/read yur other ones... i think yur the best aurther on here... i'm not styin to suck up to u, or anything... but still!

Thank u so much for finishing the story it was excellent! I hope that u continue to write more stories bc u r so talented\blessed with writing please keep up the good wrk!

I finally read it and it was cool. I look forward to the next chapter.

love the story and can not wait for the next chapter of the story and will kagome get her members of sesshamura up date soon.

That chapter was so awesome! I was so into it too! LOL

-KB

wow! Thats all i can say. This story is so gooood! U got me hooked! Please do continue n keep up the good work. Love it!

I just read the last 2 chapters you wrote and was amazed. Those were really good and I realized I didn't read those 2 chapters yet until now lol. I'm glad I went here and looked.

-KB

oooooh great chappy :)

I really enjoyed this chapter! :]

-KB

OH OH! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! lol I love this story. =] Hehe. And it's killing me to see how it's going to end! >.

that sick twisted son of a - sorry. i'm never gonna be done with calling Naraku names.

anyway, i absolutely love your stories!! i can't believe he killed her mother.

can't wait for your next update!

sick, twisted and dark. i love stories like this.
tilayha

Now Kagome has officially made room for herself in the nut house lol!

Please hurry and update real soon okay!!

Ja Ne!

thats evil.........poor Kagome

Wow O__O...K-Kagome's mom died! That's so awful. -sniffle-

-KB

what's going to happen? this is such a great fanfic it even makes me scared

-looks around silently-

And Kagome's mother is going to die in the next chapter right?

-sighs-

That poor woman... Okay well do me a favor!

Update more and soon!!

Ja Ne!

Awesome chappy as usual. I can't wait to see how it all plays out. I like how you have not softened Naraku knowing anything nice he does suits his own reasoning.

All i can say is wow! Just wow i love the story. ? For u is kagome actualy going to die or is sess. Goin to save her in the nick of time it would make things more interesting if she did or was close to. Anywho i love it n please update a.s.a.p. K thank

-drops the mouse letting it land upon the floor beside the desk while starring at the computer screen like an idiot with a lack of words-



-remains silent for quite some time-



-still silent while trying to form some kind of words-



-slams fist down on to the table making the keyboard jump in response-


How could you write such a thing?! That is so mean and cruel!!

Kagome dying! OMFG!!

You will sit back down at your desk and type that next chapter now! That's an order from your's truly!


-picks up the fallen mouse only to slam it down knocking the ball out from the mouse-


I'm so mad that you could do something like that!


-calms down some while placing the little rubber ball back into the mouse-



-shudders quietly before the sound of her voice becomes deathly cold and monotone-


You will type the next chapter soon and have it up.


-looks at the keyboard to find water drops on the surface then laughs about it-

Uh heh heh heh!


Ja Ne!

OMG!! Kags is going to die!! Which can only mean one thing...the story is coming to an end!! NO!!!! It was an awesome story!! Don't stop now!!

PLEEEEEEASE CONTINUE AND THANK YOU!! ^_^

Please update a.s.a.p. I am completely in love with this story. Its excellent! N keep up the good work.;-)

Aww kohaku made it to sesshy! now one is safe for now yay! poor Kagome though but we all know she'll survive it all!! Please hurry and update more real soon okay!

Ja Ne!!

That was awesome!! Update soon please thank you!! ^__^

-River

Oh my god!!! What a cliffhanger!!!!!! I am on the very edge of my set wanting to no wats going to happen and its driving me INSANE!!!!

PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE CONTINUE AND THANK YOU!!!!!! ^_^

aww poor Sesshomaru so close and yet so far. I hope Kohaku can sneak out safely and make it to Sess! okay well I hope you can update soon so tell your beta Ashley to work faster lol.

Ja Ne!!

this story just gets better and better!! You hit Naraku's character DEAD ON!!! i mean, with the whole needles, sounds like something a modern Naraku would do.

I can not WAIT to read more!!!
PWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZ CONTINUE N THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!^_^

-does a classic faint-

..........

-an hour later-

......... NOT ANOTHER CLIFF HANGER!!!..... god blast it you have to update soon I must know what happens!! you and your cliff hangers will kill me one day and this is the reason why!!! GHA!!

Ja Ne!!!

Everything always seem to go wrong for Kagome lol. Nice chapter. Update soon!

-River

man, i wonder how he's going to do dat? PWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZ CONTINUE N THANK YOU!!! ^_^

P.S. lemons pweeez

YEAH a new chapter!!! I love getting updates so I can read them when they are still "fresh off the presses." Loved the new chapter! can not wait for more to see how everything unfolds!

Thank you for the update!
Inuprincess
"Amanda"

Poor Kagome, when is Sesshoumaru going to save her? Guess we'll have to wait for an update to find out ha ha ^_^

That was a great chapter! Man that is so depressing, poor Kagome. Her life sucks huh? I hope you update as soon as you can. ^_^

-River

way to go good job

NO! NO! NO! NO!!!!!!!!!!

Naraku has to die now!!!!!

(BTW loved it)

that was harsh! he broke her bone n then pulled it straight....OUCH! the little lemon was hot though....Naraku marked Kagome, wonder how Sesshomaru is going to take that? PWEEEEEEEEEEZ PWEEEEEEEEEZ PWEEEEEEEZ CONTINUE N THNK U!!!!! =)

P.S. more lemons pweeeez.....e-mail wen u have updated it!

Wow this story is awesome! It keeps you on the edge of your seat! Hurry Sesshoumaru and save Kagome!!!

Go! master! go!
I'll never disobery you!

O.O .... update quickly i have to know what's next!!

wow :) wow!!!! OMG!!! in the next chapter you could have Sesshomaru see Kagome banging on the limousine window and run after it but loose it in the traffic cause there were a lot of limousines driving round... :) i love this story :)

good chapter!

great i loved the first on e and the second one how mean to bring naraku bakc but in my mind he is going to die so i may once again do my happy dance

I was enthralled with both of the stories in this series. Your literary talents are amazing. I really liked the twist, it was entirely shocking when Naraku took out those contacts. I will never forget the way you betrayed his character in these stories. You did a wonderful job with his character. You also did a wonderful job with Sesshomaru's character as well. You have really brought Inuyasha to the 21st Century with these fics.
I know this is a lot to ask, but can you keep me updated with your story. Please it would be very much appreciated.
Thank you...

OO hurry......... update SOON!!!! AND QUICKLY!!! *raging fan wanting to read soon*

wow you did the sequel and so fast to ;)
i like it :) well i can't wait to see what happens to Kagome and Sesshomaru and Naraku i hope she escapes :) and that she doesn't get pregnant again ... i wonder if you could make Kagome crack.... go mad and do crazy things..... lol you never know what might happen :)

YES!!!! Sessho is coming after Kagome!! I knew it!! Now we can kill Naraku. In this chapter he seemed almost nice though. Not like the disgusting bastard we all know and hate. Good chapter.

lets go fluffy lets go!!!

awesome 4 thumbs up and if i had more thumbs i'd use them lol

omg.. what a sad story.. poor kagome.. and sesshoumaru need to get off his butt and go safe her.. lo.l please update soon.

aww, now she's stuck with Naraku again. I hope that she does NOT ever have another baby because of him. That would just suck.

ohh boy do I like where this is going.

cant wait for more chapters

pmg!!! no sesshy isnt there... poor kagome. update soon plz

Oh My God! I LOVE YOU! Within Temptation! Loves Loves Loves! I LOVE YOU!!! I WILL HAVE YOUR BABIES!
Okay ahem,^^ You left me hangin man D:
Angel save Kagome! ^_^

OMG, OMG, OMG, OMG!!!!! This is like totally scaring me and making me want to seriously read the rest. I'm in total suspense. Jeez!!!

I love the way the last chapter ended. I am reallly looking forward to the next chapter!

I have read all your other works and this is right up there with all the others. I am on the edge of my seat waiting to see where you take the story.

i really love this story...it's really good so far.

OMG! OMG! OMG Naraku is suck a sicko, that idiot needs to die and not quickly. Anyway before i offer to kill him again I'm gonne say nice job and end it now . Still that sicko needs to die.

wow.. so naraku is alive... and sesshoumaru is being dumb!!!! please update soon!

OMFG, I knew there was a huge eason i didn't like him besides being a twin, That damn Naraku. Can I use my earlier suggestion for Kagawji on naraku now? That would be cool. All i need is a non-stick cast-iron frying pan, a hammer and a knife. If you want to know what i have in mind, email me and I'll tell you. But the truth it that anything is too good for the idiot. Okay, done ranting. WTG!!!!

OMG, I was wondering could I like jump into the story and kill Kagawaki? That would so totally be fun and, extrememly unexpected. Then Kags and Sesshy get back together. I seriously want to kill him cuz I don't like him. But on a different yet the same note I figuratively speaking, cannot wait until the next update. lol (I'm so weird)

All I can save is LOVE IT!

Sometimes I think Kagome is a fool! I wish she would act normal, don't you??? Trust seems to come to her so easy and she seems to always trust the wrong persons (LOL)! Yep, she is nutty sometimes. I really am enjoying the story!

Okay, I loved the first one, Now I'm really liking this one. It's awesome. I get the feeling about both of the twins. It isn't good but, I'll wait. Any way good 2 chapters.

Great first two chapters!!! i'm so gald that you did a sequal!! But now i'm scared for Kagome, god you had to do that. leave it on a cliff! Udate ASAP!
Later,
Kambri_Jade

hey, loove it..
im going to guess Kagawaki is really naraku or something like that