that was soooooooooo freakin cute!!! :)

this was a great story that you did i am in the process of reading one of your other stories a one-shot when i get the time. I was wondering though why all the stories are pg-13 or g? whey not highter?

A perfect ending...

Like a fine wine that has a wondrously aromatic bouquet that leaves you feeling fulfilled, pleasantly surprised and cherished.

Thank you.

Nice..

One could feel the palpable emotions in the room.

Chapter 7
Your prose were wonderful. I love the private moment between Kagome and her father and the revelations there. Your setting, the feel of the day, the moment, all blissfully quiet and fragrant peppered with sadness, and yet understanding and acceptance.
Equally magnificent, what a truly magnificent study of a mind in turmoil. I speak of Sesshoumaru.
Unlike other works pertaining to the dormant and impending love of these two, you allowed both sufficient maturity, or more accurately, you allowed Kagome, the strength of character to answer his question of “why?” without the sometimes unnecessary banter just truth. This is sometimes far more poignant.
What resonates with me as a reader in this wonderful piece is the growth of their intertwined coils of love, though not spoken in the previous chapters, from his sneeze to her burnt tongue, to his gorging on her cookies, the taste of love indeed. There paths are intertwining whether they recognize it or not. We as readers are privileged to watch them falling in love, even sharing the same sleepless moments and mirroring their own internal dialogues attempting to sort out their emotions. The difference between the two being, Kagome is that much more able, or yes, lets say strong to call it what it is. Sesshoumaru, being crushed, is having that much more difficulty with it.
Anyway, enough of my drivel, such a wonderful read, on a pleasingly quiet and rainy Saturday. Thank you. Time for dinner and then polishing off this delectable piece of fiction. Well done…one winged indeed …*chuckle*..not handicapped in the least *wink*.

Chapter 6 was wonderfully emotive and gave a wonderful overall of Sesshoumaru's emotional state. Just amazingly well written and poignant. Two loses, two great loves and enter number three.

I have reached the aromatic chapter number five and about to start savoury number 6. This is lovely,really and truly. It has many flavours, pardon the pun. Delicate, light, pleasurable and just a hint of something else. Well done.

Funny, but I find Sesshoumaru - Sama very much in character here, a very nice second chapter I might add.

Wonderful, just began reading this as I was impressed with your current new work "Listening and Hearing". Off to chapter two. Sesshoumaru cast as a Cordon Blu chef? Most excellent and Jaken and Rin as Sous Chefs hilarious!

I had to read your whole story before reviewing. It reminded me a little bit like the movie 'Soul Food' and I believe "Woman On Top". Both movies centered on food and it's relation to peoples emotions and feelings.

I was a good story and I loved it. Will there be a sequel?

Very well done :-)

I loved it! I love how you made the make up between them a simple dish. very original and AMAZING! ^_^ Great job!

loved it... update soon...

bravo !! well you should thank me for giving you the courage to write this ... and don't even think that i haven't notice the part where you liken sesshoumaru to a giant squirrel :p for this, you'll not be given this year's b'day present hehehehe .. *evil smirk*

That was absolutely amazing. I've been on a single spark for a while now, but I never leave a mention to any stories I read. I usually forget to, actually. But this story was amazingly...wonderful. It was so unique that it left me speechless. I love unique fics like this. It warms my heart to see things like this!

I applaud your writing, and I hope you create something else. To you, the first writer I have ever reviewed on! Cheers to your story.

PLease don't make this the last chapter. There should at least be an epilouge or something.
PLease do an epilouge.
The story would be so much better that way. PLease , please, please, please.

Beautiful... Simply beautiful. I loved the story! It was soo touching the way you ended it. I truely hope you are writing other fanfics right now. I want to read them. (Please write more... Pretty Please) Anyways. Keep up the great work! Hope I'll be reading your other works soon. XD

You so need to finish this story soon. It's so good. PLEASE!!!!???

Wow. I can feel the emotion live! It's so.. Wow. It's amazing. :D LOVING IT.

I love this story it reminds me of my own life right now. It's very insightful you must understand what the characters are going through yourself or you would not be able to write about something like this with such passion. Please continue I am eager to read more.

Boy that was heart-wrenching. But I believe in Kagome and if she just hangs in there he will get so tired of fighting himself, he will just give up.

Are you a chef as well.? Your descriptions of meals and philosophy on cooking feels like it comes from the soul.

I really like this story because it is a unique idea and you are a very good writer. You explain things with just enough detail to keep the story moving forward but not so much it lags. I think what I am trying to say it that you spark the imagination and do not tell us everything to think about a situation or the characters. You credit us with enough intelligence to bring the story to life in our minds and hearts.

I hope you keep the ball rolling with this and will see you soon. I look forward to the next chapter.

Deb.

Man! I lovd the chapter alot! Please update soon! Can't wait!!

Love the story so far! Sorry but i will try to read the rest of the chapters tomorrow or soon. Please try and update soon!! Ja Ne!!

Yay! Good job on this one, got to hand it to ya very good indeed.

sorry for the confusion... i was wondering after kag went to the restaurant, wasn't she suppose to write up what she thinks of the the food and the restaurant that sessh works at..... she is a food critic.... it wasn't mention... hope i clarify my question, if not... sorry for being so confusing.... still, this is a great fic... keep up the good work...

aww i love this fic so far! please continue to update =)

I liked it, I really did, but (ah, always a but, no?) most of the story...was dialouge, don't you think? You hardly described anything. Its a good story, and a very original idea, but it was still mostly dialouge. Gomen

great job... just one question... did miss kag's column on sessh's cooking and restaurant.... just wondering.... very good fic... until next time...

Once again, good job! ^_^ very well written chapter, and i enjoyed it! ^_^

This is a facinating story. I would never have believed Sesshomaru as a chef but it works really well. You still retain alot of his characteristics, his aloofness and arrogance while adding a little something extra that I can't quite put my finger on.

I love it when the sparks fly between the characters and you are certainly on the mark with these two. The fact that her father was also a great chef gives her that edge she needs to level the playing field with Sesshomaru. It seems that they will be showing each other a thing or two.

You made a comment about Sesshomaru's character in a certain chapter and just let me say that you shouldn't worry about things like that. If the story is good the people will read.

The really good stories come from the spirit and the heart. You have imagination and originality going for you plus some really good reviews. People who criticize your characters need to write their own stories and just let yours unfold and enjoy. Suggestions are good but if you let someone change your style or ideas then it becomes their story and I like yours much better.

Good Job.

This story is so sweet! I hope Kagome teaches Sesshoumaru a thing or two!

I read the new chapter and I really like the story so far and can't wait to read the rest.

if i was sesshomaru id be like, "well then, go buy some" 'nooooo!! my flour' -nods- yup yup. my mind would be crying ....
lol.
anywho, that was great. update soon. Ja-ne. XD

Awesome chapter. very short ansd sweet.
=)

thank you for emailing me when you updated!

hehe - out of flour... I should have guessed. rin would have continued until the end of dawn if she could have :D
anyway, update soon

Aww, poor Rin.. you can only hope (or hope not!) that she gets her hands on some flour..
...and the ultimate question. Will Sesshoumaru finally see the error of his culinary ways?! *giggle*
Next chapter, please!!

Please update soon, fluffy & kags need 2 butt heads.

very interesting!!!=) i love it!!!! and cna't wait for more!!!!=)

you know who am I
Anyway, I just drop by to congrats you with such nice fan fic... keep up
will tell you whenever I write one.
fanfic I mean.

I really like what you're doing here!!!
Plus, I love the way Rin and Shippou are incorporated. Too much kneading and even the most well-chilled butter can turn into dough too heavy to digest. Nice and light makes my day! La-la la!!
Ignore my babbling, it isn't worth a whit, but just know that there's one more reader out there who checks ASS every day to see your fic!

wow. this is so awesome and very original.
i have never heard of anything likeit. i mean, in the food world, yes, but nothing where kagome was a critic and sesshoumaru a chef.
=) great job with the chapters!

oh, if it isn't a bother or anything, could you please email me when you update?

thanks!
and once again, great job!

I like this story. It was very cute. Please up date really soon. I want to know how it ends. ja ne.

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!

i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

well, I like it. and how Sess behaves and... well... IS; is entirely up to you - it's your story afterall!

Um... in stead of "critique", which is like "your boss filled out a critique", I think you mean "critic", as in "the movie critic".

Oh well though. Just trying to help.

I read your fan fic and can't wait to read the rest

Interesting idea! Keep up the good work and please update soon! XD

Wow...Sesshoumaru a cook? That's just....so CREATIVE and original! This is really good so far! Update soon plz!