yay, another chapter. I really am enjoying this fic, i don't care how long it takes you to finish it, i'm gonna read it.

WOW! This fic is so amazing. Very interesting and so well written. I was completely hooked after the first chapter. I definitely am looking forward to reading more of your wonderful story. Can't wait!

I'll beta for you. Just to tell you now, tho, you keep spelling Taiyoukai wrong. With a D where the T should be. That was the biggest mistake. Oh, and you spelled domain wrong in there somewhere.

Perfect.

I am amazed. This story is shaping up wonderfully unique. I'm hooked it on now :)

I saw little to no spelling or grammartical errors. You write beautifully.

I am intrigued by it and I hope to see more updates. I will check everyday, so please if your time allows it...please update soon and as often as you can.

Great job :)

Oh wow. This fic is lovely so far~!

Your descriptions and your characterizations are wonderful, and the plot so far is intriguing. I look forward to future updates!

And, if you want a beta-reader, I'm a fairly competent one, with lots of free time. xD

Great story!! I can't wait to see what's next, this is looking to be a very interesting story!! Please update soon!!!!

Well, what can I say. After reading about 500 fics I didn't think anyone can surprise me, but you did. Amazingly intriguing start, the characters are well...in-character to the last breath. Good grammar too ^_^ I rate it a strong 10 so far.
Umm you do plan to continue, don't you? You wouldn't be so cruel to drop off the face of the earth leaving us in limbo here?

Wow. This is so good I'm speechless.

Gah! You evil TEASE!!! How can you just stop like that????????

I NEED TO KNOW WHAT THAT MARK MEANS AND NOW I HAVE TO WAIT!!! ---that aside, that was a very interesting fic! I look forward to reading the next chappie!

btw; that line. about the silence and sound. i wuz gonna sayy something before but Chaos-and-Serenity got to it before meeh (i really think she'sz amazing). i loved it.

i've never read such...perfect descriptions of sesshoumaru. that is his voice isn't it?? an deep baritone that'sz like an echo in the silence craving to be heard but just to divine for human ears. hmm.

I really am begging yooh to write soon. i need this fic. it just. idk. i read few authors and love few stories. there'sz onlee two chaptersz `&nd i'm craving.

i don't thirst for stories or carry on `n such a wayy `n reviews if i do give them (especially two `n a row). but i noe a great storie when i read wun. `&nd i noe a great author. i pride myself on taste. `&nd yooh. yooh are somewun i believe i could look up to greatly.


i'm really counting on yooh.
i get enough dissappointments
`n the outside world. `&nd...um...oh goshh i feel like such a loserr. but heyy i'm fifteen i've got enough reason to be a loserr, ne?? would...read wun of my stories??

never mind. don't do that.

just update.

that'sz satisfaction enough.

so.

i check the last time yooh updated.

your reviews `&nd such.
i'm extremly pissed off. if yooh
have writers block then yooh better get over it soon because i won't stand for it. i'll hound yooh `til yooh're back on point. i'm serious.

stories i like i don't joke about `&nd i like the direction this wun is going `n.

wonderfully well written! What avid description! I can't wait to see how everything ties together.

Cool. I liked it. It was different and- well- cool. I can't wait until the next chapter comes out. I will definetly read and review. Keep going!

Though I have only read the first chapter, I enjoyed it thuroughly. It is a lot like the first episode, and very- oh, what's the word?- accurate. I can't wait to continue. Great job.

One more thing - I know, I'm breaching stalker territory - I forgot to add this little tid bit. You wrote: "Silence would have envied him, but Sound would have strangled Silence to possess him." I thought this line was pure genius; one of the most beautiful I've read in fan fiction.

Keep up the awesome work and I hope to hear from you soon! Happy New Year!

I am thoroughly intrigued. Hell, that doesn't even sound strong enough to describe what I'm feeling. This story is overflowing with creativity and the characters are wonderfully portrayed. The narrative is addictive and the descriptions are perfectly balanced. Basically, you write beautifully and this is a well-rounded story that has the makings of greatness. I'm already hooked.

This is my new crack. So don't keep my inner junkie waiting to long. Withdrawl sucks bad. ;)

Also, if you have a mailing list, then please add acparks83@yahoo.com. The world needs more good stories like this, and naturally, I'm no exception.

Your story is amazing! I simply can't wait to read more of what you have planned!

This is wonderfully well written. Please update ASAP!

Awesome fanfic! OMG hurry up and write more pretty please! I will be good forever if you do!
N e ways, Merry Christmas! Can't wait to read what happens next.

Amazing. . .a really fantastic fanfic. Beautifully constructed. Please, please finish the next chapter soon. This is wonderful. You have captured another fan.

I like this and I hope you willcontinue to update copiouslyQ

I was looking for a new fic to read that was different than many of the other poorly written smut-mobiles...lol. I like what you have here so far. It flows nicely and changing the canon universe is an intriguing twist... I really look forward to your next chapter!!!!

This is great! I especially like the style and flow of the 2cd chapter. It seemed appropriate that you should use an uncanny approach to describe waking up from a strange situation. I also loved the S/K reactions to each other. You leave good cliff hangers (I hope they won't become nail biters) and I hope you update soon.

This seems to be really good! ;D
I like it very much, and can't wait to know what'll happen next
Hope see you soon
Ja Ne

Luv it!!!

Luv it!!!

whhhoooahaa, this is very very intriguing. i must say, you've got me hooked. crescent moon on kagome's forehead?? oi, what all that about?!?!?! your writing is very good also, mmhmmm. can't wait to read more so please continue soon!

cool i like it plz update soon

please update ASAP!! ^_^ great story so far!!!

wow pretty intresting please update soon