wow ....
this is just one of those stories that makes you cry but always smile at the end
its beliveable, no doubt about it which is the many things that makes it a really incredible story
please keep writing
for readers like me this is most definitely a great find and one of my few favourites
keep smiling....
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
ah, Muncaster X3 my most favorite haunted 'house', can't wait to read more :D
binab88- Mon 29 Jan 2007
WOW!! i love this story it really brought out sesshoumaru character lovely, and also the romance was terrific. you made the vampire seem realistic, cause from all the stories i read on vampire that is most how they are,, but yours had a little something extra on the side. well i wish i can say update but the story is over. but i look forward to the next story you write, cause your style has captured me. thanxs for update when you could and keept the story going..
binab88- Mon 29 Jan 2007
WOW!! i love this story it really brought out sesshoumaru character lovely, and also the romance was terrific. you made the vampire seem realistic, cause from all the stories i read on vampire that is most how they are,, but yours had a little something extra on the side. well i wish i can say update but the story is over. but i look forward to the next story you write, cause your style has captured me. thanxs for update when you could and keept the story going..
GEESH! I gotta give Kags some credit! I would have told Sesshoumaru to F**K off by now and woud have just taken the punishment. She got courage! lol but yeah I liove your story! It's been awhile since I found a really great vampire fic and when I found yours an started reading I knew it would be great!
swtdrm01- Thu 25 Jan 2007
I loved the story and how it ended. You did wonderful on this story and I hope to get a chance at reading the next one. BTW - it states that it's incomplete, will there be another chapter after this one.
awwwww such a nice ending! =) i really enjoyed reading this story, hope you'll up with more soon =D
sweetkijo- Wed 24 Jan 2007
This story just gets better and better. I have never read yoai like this...it is heartbreaking and touching. You write so well...keep up the great work...ja ne!
swtdrm01- Wed 24 Jan 2007
Wooooooow. That was awesome. Very unexpected, but awesome.
great chapter! i hope you'll update soon =)
binab88- Tue 23 Jan 2007
man i love this story and i cant wait for the next update.
swtdrm01- Tue 23 Jan 2007
Please do update soon. I can't wait to find out what Alexis' reaction will be 'cause I know he will find out sooner or later.
Steph- Tue 23 Jan 2007
I really loved your fanfic. It is cool how you tied in sess being a vampire. It is also cool how you tied in certain parts of the inuyasha tv series, like when kagome was in the weapons room you talked about the boomerang. I thought that was cool. I cant wait to see if the love between kagome and sess will triumph or if another will interfer. I give your fanfic 5 stars, one of the best I have read in a long time.
Clock-winder- Sun 21 Jan 2007
happy....so happy!
This is a great story....it gives me goosebumps!
hate the alexis guy.....
blue_angel36(not signed in)- Sun 21 Jan 2007
nooooo...cliffhangers are evil >. i actually yelled "nooo!!!" lol! i just read all of this today and i'm hooked!!!! please update soon! this only the second "sess as a vamp" story i've liked!!!!
Siruka- Sat 20 Jan 2007
update..update..lol u can't leave me hangin..lol
liyahna- Sat 20 Jan 2007
I have read Unliving since the first chapter came out. You are a very talented writer. I am so anxious to see what happens. Please update! I would be very sad if you don't soon!
AIdeen- Sat 20 Jan 2007
Soooo good!!! I love this story sooo much!!! Please up-date again!! I have to know what happens next!! They are so cute being in love together!!! I love your story!!
sweetkijo- Sat 20 Jan 2007
First off....you are quite welcome..and I have no doubts you will stun us all. lol. This chapter opens a lot of gates...war...death..love..and betrayal. I am excited to see where you take it. Ja ne my friend.
althea- Fri 19 Jan 2007
so alexis is gonna use kagome? wasn't that the third kiss so shouldn't sess be under alexis control? is the hanyou and sess going to have a relationship? is kagome gonna go w/ sess up north?
hey, great story so far - i love vampire stories XD plz continue to update =)
sweetkijo- Fri 19 Jan 2007
Personally, I think the chapter was beautifully written. Even the kiss was nicely done. The story is very passionate and dark...just as any great vampire story should be. So from me to you...Bravo
swtdrm01- Fri 19 Jan 2007
I think your story is wonderful and exciting. I love it and I can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon.
sweetkijo- Mon 15 Jan 2007
So deep. Very well written. I wonder if she will have no choice in going back....will Alexis go after her?? Will she be forced back to punish Sess?? This story has me so captivated....every turn takes me somewhere I didnt expect...such a great talent you own. Thanks for the update!
sweetkijo- Sun 14 Jan 2007
I stumbled across your story and let me say...Wow! I am really impressed. It is far different than anything I have ever read. Sesshomaru is still in character and very well written. Kagome at first was a little harder than usual but then she warmed right up. I am so impressed and am now a fan of yours. Thank you for taking the time to share your story with us and I wll await your updates. Take care!
Susanne Winslow- Sun 14 Jan 2007
Please hurry your driving me nuts. And thank god for someone to finally have long chapters. few. I thought i was going to be able to read every story in here. Well thanks your doing a good job. talk to ya latter. ta ta
Kathlene Winslow
AIdeen- Sun 14 Jan 2007
I love this story sooo much!! It is amazing...I had just started reading stories from single spark and I love it!!! This is amazing and I can barely wait to read what happens next!! You have a new fan!! Please let me know when you up-date!! I have to know what happens next!!! Great Story!!
Wow! Im really loving this story! I was wondering, is Koga going to come into the picture with the werewolf crew? Any who, keep up the good work!
swtdrm01- Fri 12 Jan 2007
Thank you, thank you, thank you for updating. It was wonderful. I hope you update again very soon because this story has me hooked.
lynne- Thu 11 Jan 2007
wow, gotta say, i'm not usually in for the whole vampire thing, unlike my sister, sada... but this one is definitely cool.
but- you haven't updated in forever! i swear, i've been checking like every week or so! granted, it's only been about two or three weeks, but still! i like this one so much, i am willing to skim over other vamp fics...because your sesshoumaru vampire is hot... and... yea. so, pretty please? update soon?
i love this fic. it's so dark and more sensual in the manner that they haven't actually had sex- though that sounds like fun... it's more in the undertones, and i love it! go you!
VicT-Chan- Wed 03 Jan 2007
I like the way you incorporated the vampire and werewolve world with that of demons and humans. Your fic is the best I've read concerning the topic, keep goin' !
faerie007- Tue 02 Jan 2007
wow.... May I say that I am in love with your story.... At first, I thought it was just going to be a cliche story line, but as I read on, it got soooooooooo much cooler!!!! Just as a curiosity, are you going to put the rest of the Inu gang in, or is Sesshoumaru, Kagome, RIn, and Kikyo it? Ohh!!! You can make Inu-Yasha the reincarnation of the former love of Kikyo.... or something.... oh well... Update soon!!
Eternity of Tears- Tue 02 Jan 2007
Amazing chapter. I love Alexis by the way, even if he's a bad guy, he's got a interesting personality.
=)
So this chapter was quite enjotable and i loved the arguing and the drama. very nice! ^_^
Please update soon! ^_^
Jenna- Mon 01 Jan 2007
This fanfic is awesome and written very well. Keep up the good work. Update soon...I'll be waiting to find out what happens :]
AnimeFan69- Sun 31 Dec 2006
OMG YOU HAVE TO UPDATE THIS STORY!! I know you prabably dont get a lot of reviews on A Single Spark but on Fanfiction.Net you'd receive a lot of reviews. This story is too good to pass up. I have been reading this story all day and i cant stop. I wanted to destroy the computer when there wasn't anymore chapters for me to read. Did i mention update soon? Well its one in the morning and im VERY TIRED. WTF WHERE DID THE TIME GO? It was just nine o'clock. g2g ja ne
Skye- Sat 30 Dec 2006
I love your story. When I was listening to some music while reading your story it went so good with it. But i can't wait for the next chapter please email me when you have finished
it was sad and growse but good can you write more please
Trice- Sat 30 Dec 2006
I am so addicted to your story now. At first I didn't think I was going to like the direction you were going with this story but now I find myself can't stop reading it and wanting more. So I really do appreciate the quick updates since I have become a junky! ") Keep up the good work.
Trice- Sat 30 Dec 2006
I am so addicted to this story. At first I didn't think I was going to like where you were going with this story but I find myself wanting to read more and more of this story. I really appreciate how fast you update as well since I have turned into a junky! ")
Brandi- Sat 30 Dec 2006
omg...i was reading this story, and im not usually one to read A/U but this is FANTASTIC!!!! im in love with this story and i cant wait for the next chapter...i was actually finishing chapter 11 when i updated the list of stories page only to see u updated while i had been reading!!!!!! i was SOOO EXCITED!!!! u have no idea!!! anyway, i love this story and i REALLY hope to see another instalment of it out soon, PLEASE!
-brandi
raven griffin- Sat 30 Dec 2006
i really love this story and i would be eteranally gratefull if you could send me an e-mail when you update with new chapters.
thank you-raven
nada- Fri 29 Dec 2006
this is the best fic i have ever read!!
i mean itt
plz update it soon
I love your story! I can't wait to read more of what you have in mind!
Eternity of Tears- Fri 29 Dec 2006
Great job! I think i am falling in love with theis story, it is simply amazing. ^_^
So this applies from chapters seven to eleven.
I can't even say how rockin awesome this story is.OH! thank you for emailing me when you updated!
=)
Please update soon!
CAN YOU PLEASE WRITE MORE i really like the story
Em- Fri 29 Dec 2006
hey, this is really good. you're an awesome writer. just thought that you should know that it's resentment, not resent. resent is the verb. sorry, that was bothering me. anyway, i love vampire stories and this one is soooo good!
Koofy- Fri 29 Dec 2006
I absolutely fell in love with your work. This is quite an original fic and you have written so much detail in the background of Vampires. Love it! I have to say this is one of the best Vampire Sess/Kag fics I have ever read. Keep it up! You have me on the edge of my seat! Happy New Year! ;D
i love it.
you know it was funny, while i was reading chapter 8, i came across the section about Kagome pacing while waiting for Sesshomaru. during that small part she looks at the time. 3:36 or something like that in the morning. well that got me curious for the time, being that it is incredibly late, and lo-n-behold, it is 3:36!
i had one hell of a laugh.
ooo. and the descriptions of Sesshomarus' wounds are not too graphic. they are bloody perfect. and i love the whole intimacy part.
what i hated the most is the fact that you cut this last chapter on a cliff hanger. we don't know what he thinks of her in that *ahem* revealing dress.
well. to the point i absolutly love it. please notify me when you update, i would very much like to continue reading.
Ninja Rikku- Fri 29 Dec 2006
Awesome. You totally RP huh?
well either way update soon or this malch is gonna shoot something.
janice- Thu 28 Dec 2006
not to grosed out but i did picture it in my head so maybe a little grosed out... but besides that awsome chapters you just wrote can't wait to find out aho the guest is! how come kagome cant just help him right away wouldnt it work cus the sword was calling to her?
Eternity of Tears- Thu 28 Dec 2006
I absolutely love this.
I have been waiting for a fanfiction like this.
=)
very well written, and highly enjoyable!
Please, if it isn't a burden could you please email me when you update?
Please and thank you!!
Once again, awesome chapter!
^_^
little_wierd- Wed 27 Dec 2006
AWSOME love the fic its quite origional too.... wen will the next chapter be out
swtdrm01- Tue 26 Dec 2006
I love the story. Please update soon. I can't wait to find out what happens next. How will she find out the truth? Will she save him or will he turn her?
Hey!! you moved over to A-Single-Spark. Awesome! I love this fic! I look forward to reading it again!!
ahhhhhhhhhh!!!! please please continue
Megan Consoer- Fri 22 Dec 2006
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
Shaedow- Fri 22 Dec 2006
Wonderful! I simply loved the way you introduced the characters and the settings. Especially the way you described the places, it established the atmosphere very effectively. Keep up the great work and please update soon!
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