Do please write a sequel and/or and epilogue that tells what happens afterwords. This is such an awesome story, it diserves to be continued.

*Screaming while running in circles* AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!
THat was such a friggin good story, i hope you do write a sequal about Kaiya it would be soooooooo kewl. umm yeah, ummmmmmm, JA NE!

I love your stories, they are very well done!

Aw! That was a really kawaii ending. [Please, excuse my Japanese usage as I can't help but use that word when I think cute". I automatically think "kawaii" instead of the American equivalnt.] I look forward to reading your other stories! ^.^

I, simply, in one word, was truly impressed. one question though, what happened to Shesshomaru's child with his first mate? you said that she died in child birth but said nothing of the baby.
just a question.
Otherwise it was truly a wonderful story.
love
Mari

All four parts of this story were amazing! I would have reviewed the other three as well, but I was in too much of a hurry to figure out what happened next! I wish you a long life with lots of happiness and good health and more awesome stories for me to read :) Keep up the great work!