If you wanted, this story has great potential to be continued. Kagome does not have to be the fool but neither does Sess. It can be turned around toward vengance or love after-all. "She cried out in pain"

Wow, you have done an amazing job here. So many stories have Sesshoumaru claiming that he doesn't care that their children will be hanyou but very few ever have the "moment of truth" be anything other than WAFFy. I applaud you for writing this.

Wow, you have done an amazing job here. So many stories have Sesshoumaru claiming that he doesn't care that their children will be hanyou but very few ever have the "moment of truth" be anything other than WAFFy. I applaud you for writing this.

Oh my god! That has got to be one of the most painful things I have ever read! I felt her pain and the detail was perfect. And I know this is a one shot but please do one more chapter saying what happened later.PLZ!!

oh... wow.... that vwas utterly sad! but the detail was aamzixing, an dnow i feel like i'm gonna cry! gosh.... really puts some persepctive huh? it was a good story! i really liked the deatil, and I could really feel Kagome's emotions, you are a very talented author

You inferred that there was still bleeding going on after the birth - a follow up chapter explaining what happens with that and if she does/doesn't die from it would be nifty. Loved the story, fyi!

Okay...it's me again. *smacks self and blushes* I meant hanyou daughter not son. Daughter you baka, baka kitsune! *smacks self again*

Anyway, I love the idea and - I hope you don't mind my asking this and I hope I'm not upsetting you - but if you don't wish to continue it, might I? It has spurred my imagination and now won't leave me alone *pokes plot bunnies with a long stick*

You all stay away from me! Back, back I say!

WOW> What made you write such a story? It was so good. I literally felt her heartacke. I thought it was heartburn. LOL!!

i love this, and i see potential ofr it to be longer for a one shot

WOW! Is Kag gonna make a run for the well?? ya know go to the people who ACTUALLY CARE about her!?!?!?
Sessy'll feel like the arse he is in 500 years from now I bet...and Kag should be very protective...
PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY!!!!!!

Dude..

I cried man, I cried..

=(

Awesome *sniffle* story. *tear*

Oh...come on now...you can't stop it here. You must go on. Tell us the full story from beginning to end. You have tickled my interest. Please continue. :) *LOL* I liked it.

That is sad sess leaving poor kags and the baby.

That is sad sess leaving poor kags and the baby.

This is so good!!! I have never seen a story that was started this way. Please add more chapters! Its great as it is, but there is so much more that you can do with it. Come on its simply too good to let go!!!

Hey that was really good you should write more dont leave it as a one shot I really liked it

....okay...are we going to continue, or is this truly a one shot deal? I refuse to hate The Fluffinator...

Dude. This needs at least one more chapter. I'm not even kidding.

Ooooooh! Can I convince you to make it a multi-chaptered story? To develop the plot, write about Kagome and Sesshoumaru's relatinship and how it ended deteriorating like this. Why she is forced to leave him and the castle. If she'll hate Sesshoumaru for banishing her and hating his hanyou son!

I want to know! Please? Continue this!?