I thought I left a review the first time... guess not. Well here it is. Loved your fic... when are you going to update? I really really really want to know what's happened, what's gonna happen, and stuff. so please please please update soon.
kuma- Thu 12 Apr 2007
ah i love it update sooon
Noacat- Sun 18 Mar 2007
OMIGOD! *pokes* You have to update this! I can't believe I missed your story. This is so good.
Crescent Dreams- Tue 06 Feb 2007
I like it so far. The plot line seems different for the others, and I'm glad that in the first chapter you've made a point to let the reader know that Sesshoumaru isn't just ice, he only likes being that way.
When the thoughts are over, however, you need to remember to add the , that ends the itallics so the rest of the chapter isn't in them.
Other than that, I think you did really well. Kanna seems to have a decent role, and Kagura isn't the evil woman whom Sesshoumaru was previously having a 'thing' with.
Keep up the good work.
Crescent Dreams
TripleR- Tue 06 Feb 2007
Fantastic. Truly. I usually won't even open up a FF unless its completed or at least 16 chapters and i see it update often lol, but I'm glad I did. Keep it up.
-TripleR-
swtdrm01- Tue 06 Feb 2007
Okay, I'm hooked. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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