I enjoyed what you have so far. I hope you are going to finish it someday as it has been a long time since you updated.

this fanfic is really good you should continue it.

that was nothing short of amazing...........

Keep up the great work......

I love the story
I can't to read what happens next.
Does Sesshomaru get to meet Kagome's mom. That may be interesting. Hope to read more can't wait.

YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!! You FINALLY updated!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Haha Kagome's mom hit him on the head with a pan that was so funny!!! Heheehehe update soon

i love this fanfic it's so origional!!! i've never read one like this it's AWSOME!!!!! ^_^

WOW!!!!!!!!!!! poor Kagome

WOW!!!!!!!!!!! poor Kagome

Can she plz be a REALLY rare inu.....?

OH Wow! I love this! awesome chapter!! I MUST READ MORE!

OH Wow! I love this! awesome chapter!! I MUST READ MORE!

keep the chapters coming. you are doing a great job!!!

Wow...I notice changes in the flow of your story and little to nothing of spelling/grammar errors. Good job.
Chapter nine was very interesting and I was enthralled.

Please update soon because I am so hooked on this story now...and 'props' to 'Sara' for helping you.

Well done :)

This was a very good chapter. I was sad to see it end. That was cold how you ended the chapter though! "P I can't wait to read the next chpater.

ooo, the mating ceremony!! which means a lemon will b e coming up!! HOPEFULLY!! PWEEEEZ CONTINUE N THNK U!!=)

P.S. more lemons pweez

Update!!!!!

NOOOO! You can't stop there, I need to know what is going to happen. Please, update soon. I love this fic.

kagome should get something like a tail of ears like sesshomaru and have all the same markings but in diff color and diff places like the moon on his forehead should be on her neck!! and she can have a three day ceremony !! ^_^ (my hand hurts a little) -_-"

Mmm.. I love this story. The only gripes I have is too wimpy Kagome. She seems to be crying an awful lot. I see her more as a very strong young woman. Aside from that... the changing ceremony... please don't make her have silver hair. Please please please!!! I hate silver-haired Kagome.

I believe something in the hotsprings connected to Sesshomaru's room, will be nice, make him go into his beast form, to loose control, but when he sees Kagome he doesn't want to hurt her so he goes back and regains control!

I believe something in the hotsprings connected to Sesshomaru's room, will be nice, make him go into his beast form, to loose control, but when he sees Kagome he doesn't want to hurt her so he goes back and regains control!

Huh ummmmmmmmmmm, how about they have to wear some anicent clothes, and that's all I have right now, cause I'm doing my homework. -_->.

WOW! Awesome story. I wasn't too sure about reading this at first because of the warning of the OCness but after reading the first chappy, I became hooked! I just adore it! as for the changing ceremony, what if a ball is held or something and the aruars are accepted during a ritual (a fast maybe is held before hand) and then for the blood exchange why not afterwards in like a goblet or something...? just an idea

Any way is fine as long as in the end of the ceromony or a little after Sessomaru falls in love with her he just doesn't know it till even later

luv it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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I WilL wAiT For YouR nExT ChAp

I'm for her looking the same only with claws and fangs and elf ears as the product. Got no idea how the actuall process should go

hmm, this is a good story, although choppy and in need of some beta-ing, but with a little consturction guidance, this would be a very top notch story! i like it, but i feel it has been moving too fast and i am quick to question how kagome could so easily accept sesshoumaru after he had raped her, and how inuyasha did not attack sesshoumaru despite his promises once he learned of him forcing kagome, but despite a few holes and minor errors, this story has some promise! please continue writing and practicing, i would love to see some of your works later down the road once you get more stories under your belt... because with your imagination and creativity, they will surely be worth the read and wait!

I don't know what to think Poor Kagome or Lucky Kagome???

I don't know what to think Poor Kagome or Lucky Kagome???

how ironic is that. wow, thats what you get when yo have unprotected sex among other things i hope sess has had all his shots done.

This story I find very entertaining. I am really am enjoying reading this story. It looks like our story has gotten better with all the twist and turns. I look forward to seeing what Kagome decides. Until your next chapter.

I vote........... CHANGING CERIMONY!!!!!!!!

She can stop crying now...on the other hand;

Sesshy is so sweet! ^^_^

Update.!!! That was a short chapter.!!!

This story is getting better and better with each chapter. Please update soon.

That was GREAT!

Hi! That was another nice chapter - I like the way Sesshoumaru popped out of nowhere and said they had already been intimate for awhile. Absolutely cool, nothing less than what you can expect from him.

Please update!:)

Update soon ok?? Like now.!!

I like your story and would like to see where this goes. However,
just some advice, you could double space between paragraphs to make it easy on the eyes and check for spelling/grammar errors.

I was confused as to the motivation behind Sess' obsession to "teach" Kags lessons in such perverted ways of sex...not that I'm complaining mind you...*grinning*.

Other than that, you're off to a good start and hope to see more updates soon. Just remember, I do not 'flame' any writers; I only read for enjoyment and review to offer constructive criticism and encouragement.

Happy writing and great job :)

WOOT WOOT!

-Dani.

me like

oh boy now everyone knows

OMG it the best ever update soon plz plz!!!! update

I love your story I am so glad you updated

Mkae him accidentally MARK her........ AND not know that she's in heat until it's too late!!!!

omg that was so good plz write more

I vote that next time........ he take's her................................... AND unintentionally MARK'S HER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh yeah..................... and all this..... WHILE she's in heat!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I enjoyed reading the chapter. I hope you update soon!

oo shit leave it to shippo to put kagames personal life out into the open like that.

Done really exellent! :>

This fic is SOOOOOOOO GOOD! I luv it keep the chapterrs coming

WOW that was a HOT chapter!!!!!!!!!!1, by the way what does "mai aijin" means???

WOW that was a HOT chapter!!!!!!!!!!1, by the way what does "mai aijin" means???

WOW...please countine this has gotten good intrest in me.

Ya know....................... I think that she should BITE him.................................................... ya know? TEACH him a leason he'll NEVER forget!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Mmm...I want to reprimanded by Sesshy!

-Dani.


update soon

Welcome back! can't wait to see what else you have up your sleeve. I mean this plot is getting hotter by the moment. Hey could you possible have longer chapters? I mean whot! it was great, but the cliffy is just as good cause I get to see what else and wait, and have the passion build up to unatiable levels. XD good work now.

first of all don't listen to Robb Tripp the story is fine being a romance then angst/drama and i like it the way u have it going update soon be-cuz i'm dieing to know what will happen to her since she doesn't have anything on

update soon

story is very hot wow

It's an interesting start to your story. If you need help editing, I'll be happy to oblige.

this story is getting even better now. please hurry and post the next chapter.

hehehe that was fun!

hehehe that was fun!

This is so good please update soon

No offense, but this is not a Romance. Sesshoumaru, even as a demon and Kagome as a human cannot have a healthy relationship. I believe it would be best that this one turn to an angst/ drama.

I like your story though i would maybe recomend that you let someone look at your work before you submit. You've missed a few of letters at the end of a word or you are using the wrong word, to instead of too or threw instad of through. Other than that i can't wait to see where you go with this.

PLEASE don't blast me for saying these, I'm not writing this to be mean just helpful.

great start for a fic! Man Sesshy can be so mean sometimes!! Can't wait till you update

Silk_worm

Great at school can't say more!

nice beginning!!! i cant wait to see where this leads to

Man, Sesshy is such a butt face sometimes! lol

saunds very interesting!

Oh my god this is a great start, I truly can't wait to see you what the plot unfolds. TRuly it is very well done, however could I suggest paraghraphs? There really helpfull cause you can go back and forth between them and you can have more space to write more. However for the most part I love what you have done, good thanks now.

omg what dose sesshoumaru want her for please do not tell me hes gonna sexualy abuse her.... but its your story you can do watever ou want and if its good ill continue to read obviosly

Ok I love where this is going, I like the idea and the plot has a point of beginning. I have a suggestion maybe structureing the story into paragraphs, however it is great and I like the idea of him teaching her lessons * hehe she needs it she's so bad to inu.*