| Lol nice review on my fic. Please don't put UPDATE UPDATE...ect. agian. It did make me laugh though.
Fluffy'sMate17- Sun 04 Mar 2007
| You spelled "merely" wrong in the title. Just so you know.
judzea- Sun 04 Mar 2007
I was some what confused about the ending of this story but it was interesting though. As I read through chapter 25, I think I see what you did. Kags had twins and both children are Sess' but somehow she made Yasha believe that the boy was his and still manage to give Sess' another child born of their love for each other.
So, I guess since Kags did not conceive with Yasha the first time out and she did'nt want to try again with him, she & Sess hatched a plan to deceive Yasha, yes?
It would be nice of you to explain in an epilogue of what really transpired. All in all...I must say this was a good stoy plot.
Well done... :))
hawkheart- Tue 27 Feb 2007
| Loved It. Just wish the last chapter was longer, mabe an epilogue thats ten to fifteen years later. You should really re-edit the story starting in chapter 18 till the end there are several lines of open code
Fluffy-kins- Tue 27 Feb 2007
| but there are two missing... The twins, who's are they? @.@
Le Tigre- Mon 26 Feb 2007
| Psst. It's MERELY Human. Mearly isn't a word.
Aurora Potter- Mon 26 Feb 2007
| I love your story!!!!
Thank you for the great story I hope to read more from you soon.
BYE BYE
K.M.- Mon 26 Feb 2007
Wow that was........ I don't even know what it was. The insight to yokai politics was amazing and the plot just wow.
Great job
Fluffy-kins- Mon 26 Feb 2007
I'm super confused. Are they actually Inu-Yasha's twins or are the Sesshoumaru's or were they magically hatched (cause while that would be really cool, I doubt it would have much credit...) Anyway, if you could please clear that up for me it would be very nice of you.
P.S Your little (understatement of the year) was awesome. I hope there's more!! :D
Wow!!! What an awesome story.. I enjoyed reading it.. I was not pleased with Inuyasha and what he did with Kagome.. But it was a good story...
Can't wait for the next chapter...
Hurry and update Plz..
Take Care
Mari
| very interesting. I will await more chapters. until the next time... ja ne! ^_^
Evern- Sun 25 Feb 2007
| This fanfiction is exceptional; I can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work:)
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