Hey this is a good start. Can't wait for more.

More more more!! I'm hooked! Update soon!!

Loved it! Please continue and update soon!!

that was awsome i hope u update soon

Wow Great. I'm glad you decided to keep going w/ it! Lol. You go girl, and ignore the fact that I'm on your accout ok kima? You wouldn't kill your own man.... *wimpers* Would you?

I like it! Looking forward to more:-)

so far the story is pretty good. it has good potential. i hope that the transformation and some more of the history will be explained in the coming up chapters. the first chapter was kinda vague about what happened between them. i got the gist of it, but some of it should have been more clearly defined, the transformation in particular. but i will definately read to see

Please could you continued, maybe it's a hot steamy lemon in the next chapter? Please continue

I'm glad you decided to do more. I can't wait for it!