that was a good beginin . please update soon

Wonderful

oh i like this. sounds alot like a poem i wrote except no demons or anything like that:

heres the link if you want to read it, it's short so i hope you do!:

http://fhaven.org/viewstory.php?sid=2345

I love it and I'm gonna tell EVERYBODY to read it, I love how your so detailed......I'm no saying this because your my friend...... I LOVE YOU.....

Liz

WOW!!!!!! COOL!!!!!!!!!!!
how'd she get a palace??
please update soon!!!!!!!!! I need to see what happens next!!!!!!!!!!!