i love the story line,love the charators, love the way it is set up, in all its good just how are you going to introduce our fav. miko to the mix? by the sound ofv t5he the suggestion her parebnts are demons not human. so does that make her a demon or a desendent of one? is she really a half demon like inu yasha and hiding the fact? is she really kikyo's incarnation or is that a ploy to hide the truth of her being? if thier is a mark to signify the moon than is their one on kagome to signify the sun?
you raise intresting questions and should write more to the story because i hate asking questions that have no determined answer. so in light of this informationi beg you writtttttttttte soooooooooooom mmmmmmoooooooooorrrreeeeeeee pppppllllllleasssseeeee!!!!!!......please T-T i loved itT-T

ok well i dont do consructive critisism(sp) but ido do.....encouragment(sp).
i luv ur story!!!!!!!hurry and write another chap!!!!i cant wait 2 c wut happens when sess and 'the sun'kagome*cough* meet!!!!!!!!will sess like her realy!?!will kagz actually not realy know he iz even there?!?this all brings us back 2 write another chap...plz?
ps:peac+luv+respect=happiness

Ahhh...metaphors. Lovely :) I liked this poem :) YAY! And I figured out who the sun and moon was before you even told me, so HA! :P Great poem :)

Wow...o.O that was really good! It kinda brings a whole new meaning to Kag/Sess and it inspires me!