That was unexpected but truly interestingly good! Update soon; I want to know what else happens, or was that just a one shot?
strange.. funny though... i think i like it.. but you'll have to write more for me to be sure... so update soon...
Seli- Tue 17 Apr 2007
I giggled like a mad woman xP
poppet- Tue 17 Apr 2007
sorry gesserit, i thought it was 5/5 not 10/10 so i rated 10/10
poppet
poppet- Tue 17 Apr 2007
i found this a very intriguing beginning, yes, beginning to a fanfic. you can't possibly stop it here. you have to continue this. i give this 5 stars just for getting my attention and making me wonder what happens next.....
If they didn't smile or laugh then they have a bigger stick then sesshoumaru.LOL. Great story.
hugs and puppies
mortefille- Tue 17 Apr 2007
that was cute! It was so random and the conversation was strange. But overall very amusing. 6.^
rowdygirl- Tue 17 Apr 2007
i outright laughed!
DarkAngel495- Mon 16 Apr 2007
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HeHe Yep I SmilEd, a LitTle cUtie
sMile, I Like It, Can You Make a
SequenCe? Or aNothEr cHapPy
FoR tHis GooDy sHit?? PleaSe???
ThankS!!!
^^
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Violetcarson- Mon 16 Apr 2007
LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL(do you get the picture?)OLOLOLOLOLOLOL! :-)
luna- Mon 16 Apr 2007
I LOVED it it was hilarious so keep writing.
Unseen Watcher- Mon 16 Apr 2007
She's been around 'Yasha waaay too much. I hope her mother washes her mouth out. Hah! Sugar high anyone?
swtdrm01- Mon 16 Apr 2007
That was cute. I loved it.
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