This is such a strong emotional peice so far....i love it...but i wanted to let you know that conflict yourself. when inu is pinned to the tree he says that naraku is dead. but when kagome is going downstairs to get some leftover food, she says that she owes it to her friends to help kill naraku.....good job though...im only half way through and i love it so far.

oh man... inuyasha... I do believe he is being controlled by someone... this is tragic-- first Kagome and Shippo then Kirara and Miroku... Inuyasha get back in line!

oh man... it should be interesting to see if you tackle said 'demons' later on in the fic... demons such as Sango and Miroku's pain at being left behind... Kouga's unrequited love... yep... it will definitely be interesting if Kagome meets up with those characters after having left the group.

oh... so sad... shippo is gone ;.; poor Kagome... but damm! She is sure going to kick some ass... sweet. It should be interesting to see how she deals with Inuyasha from here on out.

yeah Kags! you finish that jewel, but don't let Inuyasha get you down! Sweet... I can't wait to see how Kagome kicks ass later :)

oh ho! so the plot thickens... so Kagome supposedly sealed Inuyasha to a tree... and Kikyo betrayed Inuyasha... i can't wait to see where this goes!

sweet chapter... you capture Kagome's emotions with an ease and perfection that is not found in many other fics... well done! I don't think i have ever come across a fic that has captured so much raw emotion as well as you have... great job-- well, on to chapter 2!