Thanks for the update! It is so hard to wait when the story is at such a suspensful and exciting point. Makes me want to wait and not read again until several new chapters are up so I won't have to go into withdrawal. :-)

I LOVE this story.PL up date. Matilda

oman, oman!!!
the suspense is driving me up the wall! I'm going to look for you on Dokuga for sure.
:]

this chp was really good! Please do update asap! Love it n keep up the good work!

ooohhhh please update.... how will kag going to escape.. will sessh able to save her.... and how about the kids.... will miroku be okay.... so many questions and no answers... please update soon and let us know please..... thanks

i like it. its good. i hope you update it soon, and i am glad that you took your time in getting Sesshomaru and Kagome together, for me thats the hardest part, but you did it beautifully. so good job.

Of course I'll {we'll?} hang around. Another awesome chapter!
..Also another cliffie. What're we going to do with you, One Winged?
An interesting bit of knowledge, I think, and perhaps a gratifying one at that- it was your fic that led me to this website. I am forever in your debt. -Bows deeply- Domo arigatou gozaimasu~!
And fudgesicles for all!

Gosh So Much Was Happening In This Chapter! It Was An Awesome Chapter Even With Ur Mild Case Of Writers Block! Update Soon!

okay, okay, you win, THAT chapter was WORTH waiting for. i'm sorry you're being tortured with boring textbooks and writer's block. if i had a solution i would surely give it to you. However, you are brilliant and creative, at this point the story should be easy: Sesshoumaru goes to Naraku's fortress, blows through the doors, finds Naraku, castrates him and then kills him dead...finally...never again to be alive...no matter what! Kagome throws herself in his arms and they kiss the perfect kiss. I really don't like Naraku.

Bless Shippou's heart. He always tries to be so brave. It looks like so far he's doing a pretty good job. I hope they manage to get away if nothing else to find a good, safe place to hide, throwing a big delay in Naraku's plans. Sesshoumaru might need to go get Miroku out of the hospital to help him since he would be the one to know Naraku better than anyone else. And, of course, Inuyasha would want to tag along. Even poor Hachi while being terrifed at the same time. Like he said, he and Miroku owe Sesshoumaru.

Cliffie! Rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr..
Good chapter. But.. Miroku.. and Sango.. and Naraku?! Oh, bother.
Is Miroku DEAD?! And Kagome.. But Inuyasha.. and Sesshoumaru! BOTHER.
This is gonna have a happy ending, right?
Update soon please. PLEASE!!!

Love The Update I Got A Little Behind On Mi Reading But I'm Catching Up Anyways Naraku Tricked Kagome Too Easily And Miroku Better Be Okay!!! Update Soon!!!

arrrrrggggghhhhh!!! bad author, bad! wicked cliffhanger! bad author, bad! naughty, naughty creative genius! damn girl, i'm gonna go blue in the face from holding my breath until the next posting! please have something reeeeally bad happen to naraku. i'm sick of him and his wicked ways.

oh this is so exciting whats going to happen next please hurry with the next chapter

;-) This is a really amazing story, it's one of the first ones i ever started reading, i just want to say i really love your writing style and everything. :)

nice i really enjoyed that fic you should have broken his nose though lol

Aww, how cute! I never would have pegged him for the warm cuddly type!

i'm glad you had a lovely trip. thank you for the wonderful chapter. i am so into this story, you have no idea! i cackle when i see each new update!

I know chapter 23 is not up on this site yet, but it is on your other site. Just a note to let you know my review (long one) is on the other site. Thank you.

love it! please update soon!

Bravo, bravo!!! That get-even punch was beautiful! I laughed and clapped my hands while bouncing in delight in my chair. I love the yumminess beginning to develope between them. Also, in their own way, they seem to becoming closer as friends without realizing it. He might just make his lies become truth. You think? I can just picture a pregnant hormonal Kagome running Sesshoumau ragged. hahahehe (evil laugh) Twas a very good chapter.

The punch was fine. LOL. Another great chapter. When does the drama begin?

Wonderfull story. The characters are done well, and the plot is moving along. Can't wait to see how living together works out. Update soon.

The scenes of Kagome in the elevator and then with the receptionist were hilarious. I just wish she could have gotten some satisfaction before he blackmailed her. That was so MEAN of him. I hope you plan for her to someway get even with him. One small comfort, all his employees will now think he's engaged and his fiance is pregnant. How about tarnishing his pride and his reputation by having some people snigger behind his back by gossiping that he's having to get married because he "knocked up" some female. I can just imagine his outrage at the insult to his dignity. hehehe And I'll be one of your readers laughing at him because he would deserve every minute of humiliation. I'm mean, aren't I? Just don't get a fiery female cornered and pissed off. They always find a way to get even. Poor Sango. She's going to feel hurt thinking she did something wrong to cause Miroku to drop her. Somehow, though, I have a feeling he's not going to be able to avoid her like he plans to.

Aww That Was A Cute Chapter! Poor Miroku And Sango They Can't Be Together Because Of The Crazi Man!!! What Sesshomaru Did Was A Dirty Trick! Using The Kids As An Out!!! Updat Soon

Great job, can't wait for the new chapter.

woot woot !! fight fight fight !!!

Lol Sesshomaru Is Rather Sneaky!!! Miroku Has Found Sango And I Can't Wait To See Whats Going To Happen Next!

omg i missed a chapter!!! so sorry but i read the last to and as always
fantastic!!!!!! really i can't wait for more but i will!!!!!!!! and sorry again=)

Oo Sesshou is in big trouble. Big big trouble.

I loved the ending of that last chapter! I never thought Sesshoumaru would take that angle to get to Kagome. Very good story so far! Can't wait to read more!

I loved this chapter. It was so funny. During their standoff against each other, I kept saying, go Kag go. And to make it worse, Inuyasha laughing and rubbing it in. I can't wait for Kag's next encounter with Sess. I think she's mad enough to physically attack him and damn the consequences! I'll just have to bite my nails and patiently wait for your finals to be over for the next update. I wish you the best of luck on everything. Remember - think positive!

wonderful chapter, its a shame kagome must now kill sesshoumaru, but very understandable. LOL don't worry about including lemons, especially if your younger sister is reading your work. they are not a necessary part of the story; and this story is so good it doesn't need them. i love miroku's character, he is such a hoot! i look forward to the next installment!

that last chapter had me laughing out loud. Mid november?! :(

HAHAHAHA!!!!
sesshoumaru's so going to get it now.
XDDD

HAPPY BDAY to U! oink oink :p may the numbers be with you always n provide you with a bright future as it is claimed to accomplish ;)

don't spend all of your time writing fanfic n neglect your preparation for exams yea !!

Ohhhhhhhhh. That was so mean of Sess to ask her to stay and in a sexy voice only to want a babysitter. I'd be tempted to give him a black eye and then reluctantly babysit Rin. And I'd be doing for her, not him. He'd be on my shit list for a while. When are you going to update? I miss reading one of my favorites.

i love it!

loved it can't wait to read more

This is getting so exciting!

Aww Sesshomaru Is All Worried About Kagome! Ha Miroku Won't Be Evil! Whooo!!! Well I Like The New Chapter Update Soon!!!

I can't wait for u to add more to this story! I loved it! Please continue to write and add your stories!!

awww this is so cute. id love it if you posted it on my website www.justexpressing.com

the last line had me giggling.
haha
dunno why...
:P

What do you mean, "didn't turn out very nicely?" I thought it was HILARIOUS!! "Rin needs a babysitter?" HAHAHAHA.... I can hardly wait to see what you do with THAT line in the next chapter!

This story has evolved into one of those I LOVE reading... mystery, danger, FEELINGS, humor, FEELINGS, Sesshy, more humor... and quite nicely done thus far. I sincerely hope you conquer your evil writer's block and continue to provide us with more!!
:D
~~Wiccan~~

Lol ... No I Dont Think U Evil If Miroku Does Turn Out To Be A Bad Guy ... But This Chapter Does Clear The Air And Sango And Miroku Had Some Alone Time Its Cute Update Soon!

ok so this is just kinda amazing. just a little bit. no, who am i kidding, i love it with a burning passion! you have to write more and soon. pleeeeeeaaaaaaasssssssseeeeee!

Me, I like long chapters. I just knew Miroku would not be a bad guy. I had a gut feeling. Thank you.

if you want i can give you two reviews per chapter.. it did answer my ? about miroku by the way.. i knew he couldn't be bad.. he's too cute. =)... love it.. and can wiat to read more.. your story makes me happy.. =)

Hooray! Hentai monk! Lovely chapter. Very informative.

Hm, I wonder what Miroku is up to in all of this. Update soon, I want to know what that hentai monk is up to!

Like The New Chapter ... Miroku Couldn't Possibly Be A Bad Guy This Whole Story Now Could He??? Well Update Soon!

darn you! it's 1:05 am, i have work tomorrow and i can't stop reading this story!!! IT'S ALL YOUR FAULT FOR WRITING SUCH A GOOD STORY!

in response to your wandering musings on the plot at the end of chapter 6: i thought the plot was for S&K to get together and have hot, wild, monkey sex. please forgive if i am wrong in this assumption. it matters not, i am enjoying the story and so will follow wherever you lead...i just don't want to end up under arrest, my family would take on so.

one more question...is miroku immortal or some thing?..more chapters please!!

Loved this chapter!
I found the part where Miroku meets Kagome so funny. So like him to ask her to bear his child. XD
And I really like Hatchi (sp?). So I really liked the part where he tell Inuyasha why Naraku is after Rin. Which really gets me thinking in that maybe Miroku really isn't a bad guy. Maybe he's like only pretending. I hope so, 'cause I would like to see him end up with Sango, and I don't think Sango would stay with him if he really was a bad guy. lol
And I knew Sesshy would get mad once he found out what Kagome did! XD Well, I can't wait to read what happens in the next chapter of your wonderful fic.
Oh, and I totally understand if it takes you a while. Just please don't forget about it completely. ^-^

the plat thickens as they say. i love it .. the more i read the more i love . =) ok that's all have a good one..

poor sango!!!...so miroku is evil?..confused..

what would miroku want w/ kagome?? he won't jurt her? ..who will take care of shippou??
=) i can't wait to read more.. your stroy gives me hope !!!!! =)

Like The New Chapter ... Miroku Is Such A Perv ... Hmmm I Seems Like He Has Taken An Interest In Our Dear Sango ... Well Lets Hope Kagome Can Be Super Woman And Save The Day!

What I wouldn't give to do more than just stare at Sesshy like that! lol
I can't believe Kagome went to meet him like that. I'm think it will be a very dumb move on her part. She probably should have called Sesshy first. But anyways, only you know what will happen next so far. XD So, I can't wait to read your next update. I really enjoy reading your fic. Very good!

this is freak en awesome!!..more chapters please!!..poor Shippo!!!....

Liking The Chapter Is Nice ... Update Soon ... Hmmm I Hope Nothing Has Happen To Sango ...

wow.. i love the rin moments.. you have captured the true nature of a child.. and she so much fun to read about.. i love the whole story.. and i hope the sango is ok.. great chapter!!!! love it!!!!! =)

Such a sad chapter. And also gonna be wondering about what could have happened to Sango until your next update.
Oh, and totally was smiling like crazy when Kagome was staring at Sesshy's body. Lucky girl!
Like always, can't wait for more!

Oh wow! No way was this chapter bland. To me it was full of emotion. Heck, I even cried. I call that good writing. Chapters like this are needed to let your readers get to know the characters personal sides. To me, this was an important chapter. And yes, you little devil, you just had to add a cliffie at the end. Now I'll be wondering about Sango until the next update. If anyone had to grab her, let it be Miroku but not after a good fight between them. Hehehe. By the way, you see, those "positive waves" do work. I'm an old "hippie" from the "peace" days, that's where the "waves" come from.

hahahahahaha this line had me cracking up:

Br>
Who knew that humans, and female ones at that, could look so predatory? What do they take this Sesshoumaru for? A piece of meat?

Br>
priceless :)


keep up the good work!

It is in no way bland, keep going. Transitional chapters never blow the house down but they are ooooooh so necessary. Great job!

ElegantPaws

Me Likes Me Likes Alot ... Awww Poor Shippo. Cant Wait To Read The Next Update!!!

Wow! Now this was an amazing chapter! So detailed. I was smiling like crazy when Sesshy killed all those demons. lol Like they could ever beat him. XD
I cannot wait to read the next chapter. I definitely love reading your fic.
Oh, and good luck with all those tests and stuff!

CLAP CLAP CLAP! More please and soon.

omg!!!!! your story is one of the best ive read in a long time!!! you rock and i can't wait for more!!!! awsome!!!=)

Hell yeah. Sesshoumaru kicks some ass in this chapter. The discription of the scene where InuYasha found Shippo's dad was great. I could practically see it w/ the gorry details of SAW movies. Poor Shippo. Good luck on ur tests though. We'll look forward to ur next chatper.

I love the twists and turns in your story. You're keeping your fans on the edge of their chairs (as the old saying goes). So far I like how you're portraying Miroku. Good luck with your tests. Keep thinking positive for a good grade. No negative waves allowed!

Wow. This is definitely keeping me interested. Can't wait to see what happens next.

: p just dropping by to remind you NOT to make miroku a bad guy !!! It just wouldn't be miroku if he's evil ...

whoo!
LOVED that last little bit. :D
and poor little Shippous gonna be crushed... ::sniff::

awesome fic. I can't wait to read the rest of it.

I like the chapter. And the twist on
Shippo's father is interesting. Looking forward to the next chapter.

That Was a Nice Chapter!!!! Please Update Soon!!

Ciao Darling!

Kagome-Chan ♥

oh, the suspense!
kinda funny how fillers always tend to be the longer chapters.
:P

more please....

HAI!!!! I'LL STAY TUNED!! lol I LOVED This Chapter! I Honestly Thought Miroku Was Gonna Jump Out and Grab Sango or Something, or 1 of Naraku's Minions or Something. Woa....Suspence Man, Suspence....Well Anyway, Please Update As Soon As U Can!!!!

Peace, Luv, and Little Foxes,

Kagome-Chan ♥

We Cant Have Miroku Being All Evil On Us ... We Like Him!!! Well I Cant Wait Until The Next Chapter This Is A Really Good Story!

wait?..hold on..so miroku is bad?..or is he good?...he works for hakudoshi and sesshomaru?..huh?..cunfused much?..more chapters please!!

Gee, I Wonder Y That Sounds SO MUCH Like Sango? Hmmmm.... lol and Kagome Is Living w. Sango Now!!!! Reincarnation? She didnt Actually Die? Great Great Great Great Grandaughter? Hmmmm I Wonder If THey'll Meet? *Grins* I Hope So!! Please Update As Soon As U Can!

Peace, Luv, and Boar Demons,

Kagome-Chan ♥

I Luv Sesshomaru's Dreams!! I Hope He Can Protect Kagome From w.e Danger She's In! Please Update As Soon As U Can!!!!

Peace, Luv, and Dreams,

Kagome-Chan

WOW!!! THis is a quiet little stunner. It is low-key and rather intense. I was ready to yell at Sesshomaru for not answering his phone. I would have beheaded my assistant.

Your characters are strong (I hate a weepy Kagome) and the story has a subtle, sensual feel to it. I love mystery and adventure. You've got it going on girl.

Great story, good job. Til next time, Deb

OMG I JUST LOVE YOUR STORY!!!! PLEASE Update Soon!! U R SUCH a Gr8 Writer! ^_^

Peace, Luv, and Horses,

Kagome-Chan

sesshy is scary!!!...more chapters please!!!

Your tenses are all over the place. One minute in the present then in the past. It makes for distracted reading. You should reread your work and change the tense to be uniform, past would be best.

I love the way your mind is going with this story. Finally, poor little Rin is more than just a human child tagging along after Sess.

Wow. I really like this fic. It pretty much stayed upbeat since the beginning. The twist and characters are great. I look forward to the upcoming chatpers.

Why oh why oh why. That name is a curse upon me. I just can't seem to get the correct spelling. Here's my final try. MIROKU!!!!! This time it had better be right. I REFUSE to spell it again. I guess i"m just getting old and the old grey cells don't work so good anymore.

Maruko is a misspelling. I meant to type Miruko (the monk with roving hands). I didn't notice until after I sent the review. Sorry.

I enjoyed the new chapter. It was cute.

Interesting concept, demons & humans in modern time. You asked for ideas. Try this. Sess learns that a powerful crime lord (Naraku) was behind the attempted kidnapping. Sess has InuYasha become spy in his organization. Kikyo is Naraku's unhappy wife. That's how they meet & fall in love. Sess & Kag join forces to protect Rin & to find out why Naraku keeps trying to claim her. Also Maruko is a trusted employee to Sess & of course a ladies man.
Just a rough sketch of an idea. Thought it might help.

Sesshomaru was pretty rude lol Well I love the story so keep up the great work because I be reading lol

Aww cliffy!! Whyyyyyyyyyyy!!! lol update soon

oh god! y did u leave me hanging like that, just when i started 2 love ur stories!!! Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

so far I love this story! Good Luck with the next chapter! ;)

Wow this is a great story done by a great author. Your story has flow , ceativity , and minimum errors. You now have my undivided attention and trust that is hard for most author to get so Congratulations. Please keep writting you have me hooked . Looking forward to an update SOON!!!!

continue as soon as you can please and thank you

You know, in a matter of a few well written chapters, you have my undivided attention :)

Well done!

oh! It's good, I like it! Haha, no, really, it's well thought out and interesting (even though I'm crying cause Sesshomaru and Kagome haven't met yet, but that's okay cause your pacing is good). I can't wait to read more, please update soon!

Really great story and it promises to get even better! I love the twists and turns, and you writing style is great! Can't wait for more!

This is a wonderful little gem and so far, so very good. Thank god something happened, I would hate to think poor little Rin was left hanging for no really good reason. So far so very good dear lady. Oh and I fainted....re Sesshy at my disposal. I am a hentai...you have on idea where my mind would go...all dessert hehehehehe...him being dessert that is. Now, keep writing and I hope your week improves.

First, as for Sesshoumaru, making me dinner, can he first fix me a bath, then give me a massage THEN prepare dinner? Cause, I'm liking that theory a HELL of a LOT?

As for this new work, I think it lovely and am dying to know, what exactly is the reason RIN cannot get a hold of her father? Inquiring readers wish to know...hn.

Oh, your other works merit praise. Your style is pleasurable, quite and sensual. Not everything has to be in your face 24/7 credit should ALSO, not excluding, be given to romance. Have a great night, looking forward to the next chapter.

Wow! Action packed and well written, and a great start. Please continue.