Your writing is nice and it very interesting. It just seems to me Kagome gave in a little too easy and if she gives in so easily what actually causes Sesshoumaru to change? So I guess with that said, when are you going to update?

I like this story alot! It's different, away fromt he normal plotline. Very nice.
I normally like stories that express the lemon scenes, but your's went on quite nicely without it.

Well, I think I would hate this type of life. Isn't Kagome getting used to it too easily? I would feel like a monogamic whore if I ever was involved in an arranged marriage. So, are you planning on making it hard on Sesshomaru or will Kagome be a pleasant wife till the end? Will he ever fall in love with her? Will he succed in turnig her into a youkai? And finally, will you update soon?

the story is great i really can't wait to see(read) what happens next. so please update soon :)

This looks like an awesome fic! I think I'm gonna love it!! Just one little thing, I'm assuming Miroku isn't going to be in this one, right? Or do you just prefer the InuXSan pairing?
Anyway, neat fic!

Me likey, update soon!

~zen

Uh, I'm afraid that you're going to have to look through all eight pages for the mistakes. I found too many to simply list them all here.

Also, and this is simply what I've observed, but the best stories are the ones where the author's opinions on issues (like stay-at-home moms and conservatism) are best left at the fanfiction door. It tends to alienate the audience and make the characters seem off, or otherwise OOC.

Just a few suggestions.

KEEP GOING WITH THIS!!!! IT'S SO GOOD!!!

hello love your story. im so happy your a good writer iv read alot of storys where they have the right idea but they arnt very good writer but im not going to mention any names but any way please continue and update soon

ohhhhhh i can see i'm gonna like this very much.

*claps hands* This sounds really interesting. With Sesshoumaru being so cold and indifferent and Kagome so hard-headed and stubborn...this should make a very interesting marriage!

Lots of arguments that are bound to end up in bed - at least I hope so! *grins* Update soon!