This is a great story that you have. You really should try and finish it. I am eager to see what happens.

holy cow wait what happend to songo and her tiger boy or what happend to kagome does she get to see the demon lord and his *cough cough* umm what about the blood demon prince surely he would not take kindly to haveing his thron taken

Wow, i haven't reviewed in a while sorry 'bout that, but i dare say this was an awesome chapter!

Hurry and update real soon okay!

Ja Ne!

oh you are a mean one! You make us wait for so long...and then you leave us with a cliffy! grrr....but hey, awesome chapter.....I really like Velenor...but Sesshomaru still has my heart,hehe

YOU are GOD lol i love the story PLEASE update SOON!!!1

That was a very mean way to end the chapter *pouts* But i still love this fic and i wish for you to continue your hard work and post the next chapter soon.

chaos

evil cliff hanger... just plain evil!

i love this fic!~ please update soon!~ my 21st birthday is coming up july 17th...maybe you could get me a present *wink* *wink* ^-~ love the fic keep up the great work!!!!

I vote that she takes him in one hit....

If I could I would so totally fav this!

I vote that they go ALL THE WAY next time!!!!!!!!!!!!

M'dear, this story now has me HOOKED!! Rest assured that, like Sesshy watching Kags, I will be watching CLOSELY for updates!! I love the fact that you didn't succumb to temptation (nor did you let THEM) and have them explore their feelings further at this point. Obviously, you've left yourself with a LOT more material to delve in coming chapters!

One small suggestion, not a biggie for me, as I will read the good stories regardless, but you might want to consider seeking beta assistance. A beta could take the niggling little gaffes in spelling and vocab and polish this story into something ENORMOUS, you know? Just a thought ... not meant as a put-down or harsh criticism ... OK?

As I said, regardless, I will keep reading and (when time permits) reviewing, so I hope this encourages you to give your muse free rein!!
:D
~~Wiccan~~

awesome chapter! it was really awe inspiring!! I hope you get the next chapter/installment up soon!!

Ja Ne!!

oh please write more....i'm going to start cring if you don't hehehe jk but pleaase write more this story is really good

hmm very interesting, nicely wrote too no spelling errors even with spell check i might have messed up a little lol i meant to give reviews for the other 2 chappies but it was late and i couldnt think of anything to type (a temporary brain shutdown) :) thanks for the update cant wait for your next installment of BfB

Continue when You have Time I really enjoye dhte part where She Shockedc both demons ( V and S ) With her power it was so Kagome good job

This was my favorite chapter yet. Not only was it the best written, but it exposed a lot of information that was very helpful in the story! Keep up the awesome work b/c I can't wait tyo read more!

Ooh , this story is simply captivating. All of the chapter are interesting, and you've managed to not throw Sesshomaru and Kagome together in a short period of time like so many other stories seem to do frequently. Everything is occurring at a good pace; the characterization is good; the various elements contain a flare of originality in this clichéd world of fanfiction. You really are a wonderful writer.

Awesome update, I loved this chapter, verrry interesting and you topped it off with a naked Sesshy, every girls dream and even some guys. Can't wait for your next update.

Continuw when you can bye bye

I'm finding this story more and more intriguing as it goes along ... the interaction between Kagome and Sesshoumaru looking VERY interesting indeed.

Thank you for sticking with this and not being too discouraged by a relative lack of reviews. I do believe, as Vyncent and others have pointed out, the advent of nicer weather and all may have made people a little more lax about taking the time. I, too, fall by the wayside when things heat up on the 'home front,' but I will do my best to let you know how I think things are going!! Again, thank you for some most entertaining reading!
:D
~~Wiccan~~

Can she SOMEHOW be a PURE vampire PLZ?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I like i that she is getting trained and that the training is complete. I also like Kikyou's explanation of what was happening to Kagome.
Sesshoumaru's interest is obvious. I look forward to seeing what will happen as things progress.

I think this was a great chapter. It was a transitional chapter, and was totally needed to get to the meat and potatoes of the story so to speak. Keep up the great work!

I like the new chapter! I think that it would be interesting to learn more about the side effects of Kagome being bitten by Velnor. I am loving the Kagome/ Sesshomaru conflicts! Hope you update soon!

nice chapter! i hope to read more updates from you soon, so please hurry and update quickly lol.

Ja Ne!!

I love this fic XD, and truly wish to reade more.


PS: btw ^_^ please please add a new chappy :3
and thank you for taking the time to creat such intertaining works ^_____^,

I love this fic XD, and truly wish to reade more hopefully soon ;3


PS: btw this is not this is not the first fic I have read by you and I love the you write out your storys. ^_^ please please add a new chappy :3
and thank you for thaking the time to creat such intertaining works ^_____^, yay vamps :]

Yay! Another chapter! I really like this story, but some of your writing seems well, detached. I just don't think thoughts are so clear cut like you make thwm seem...in the same sense, I don'k know what you could change to make this different, so all I can say is keep up the awesome work!

Can that Vampire come back and have her kill him after she remembers what he did to her?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLZ?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

that was a great new chapter!

that was a great new chapter!

I really like your story continue when you have time please and thank you

I really like this story, keep it up. I cant wait for update.

awesome chapter! please hurry and update more it was really good!!

Ja Ne!!

once again nice the fight with kag and sess i liked and i think im must be hyped off sugar or something cause i keep laughing at the weirdest things..lol im a strange one indeed

I Love your story continue soon please and thank you

One has to read carefully to fully understand the implications in the last paragraph of this chapter. Overall, I think the story and it's premise is intriguing and not one that has been done completely to death yet ... at least not quite yet.

It is hard to tell where you are headed with this, though (which can be a good or bad thing, depending). One can hope that it will continue along previously unexplored lines ... and I will continue to read to see if my supposition is correct!

Thank you for taking the plunge and posting the first couple of chapters. It must be quite difficult to put oneself and one's work on the line like that and I, for one, appreciate it!
:D
~~Wiccan~~

Ya so gotta e-mail me when ya UPDATE this fic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Definately a different story. Most Vampire stories are AU so it is interesting to see you work this into the canon.
It will be intersting to learn if Kagome is a Vampire or something different now.

Thanks for the e-mail! I loved this chapter and I can't wait to read more...I wonder where Sesshoumaru fits in?

I really like this story! I think that it is really interesting so far. I hope you will continue soon!

poor kags doesn't remember what happened to her. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next

damn that was really awesome! I hope you update more soon i really want to know what happens next!!

Ja Ne!!

can't wait for an update!

aaaa heres a review (smiles) its nice and i think its scary how kagome just filps out on her friends then goes bak to being nice again ^^ somethings are confusing and i dont know wat exactly but it just kinda is guess i just will have to read more to uncover the puzzle

You have to continue this story because it so interesting as well as entertaining. I have not read a story like yours which make it unique. I look forward to reading more and I hope inspite of the reviews you receive that you will continue with this story. It will be a shame if you lose interest and not finish this story. Until the next chapter.

Please continue, I want to know what happens. this is getting good and I like how you write. Please continue, I hated when peopple write something goo then stop writing. Please continue it.

Wah *cries* it ended! Haha, I like, although, the 'vision' part at the end was a little hard to follow at first, but it became clearer in the end ^_^ I can't wait for another chapter, thanks for the quick update!

its wonderful!

I like your story and it has interesting concept keep up the good work it really has the beginnings of something special.

So far so good!
We'll have to learn your rules for Vampires-will she be able to see the sun again etc.?
I can't wait to see how this story unfolds!

*drools* Man...you have a gift for descriptions...and writing in general but hell man, I wish I had half of your talent! Okay, so I'm completely hooked on this story and am now going to beg you to post the next chapter as soon as humanly possible so that the last vestiges of my sanity can die a very VERY happy death in the face of your writing and the ahem...sexy vampire! Okay, haha, man, for once in my life I'm depressed that this is a Sesshomaru/Kagome site ^_^ Okay, I'm done now. Sufice to say I love your story so far, please update soon!

I've read a lot of stories and only a handful of the thousands cdan be considered masterpieces. In my opinion this could easily be considered one of them. Another thing I have to say you did well was catch my attention on the first chapter, which is a good thing since my friends and I agree that a story should jump out and draw you in early on. So, congratulations! I hope you keep writing this because it is très fabuleux!

i realy like this story and hope you continue it good job so far

I absolutely love your story! It's so rare to find a well plotted vampire story, but this one just drew me in. I think you have something wonderul here! I hope you decide to continue!

Trust me it isn't just you low in the review department. Many agree with you including me. I however would love to read what else you've writen for this fic. If you deside to not post anymore email me the rest. I'd be quite happy with that. I find it quite unique so far and a pleasure to read.

woot first review it was awsome dude and Velenor sounds hawt =^^= cant wait for more of this story. if ya could plz send an email to me when you update it would be appriecated greatly its shoibhan318@hotmail.com

Okay, I love this story, so I'll make you a deal. I'll review if you'll send me an update e-mail when you update...awwww, who am I kiding, I'll review even if you don't...keep up the good work, I can't wait to read more...oh, and with the summer coming, if you decide to get a beta, I would love to beta for you...this story has a lot of potential and with a little more...not work...but rearranging, this story, I think, could completely skyrocket! Keep up the excellent work! Can't wait to read more...is this a long enough review? lol!