one question if Kagome granted their wishes and made Kikyou a normal woman how did she have miko powers? I thought miko's were special and not normal especially if Kikyou got a brand new soul it would not have known how to use miko power since she would have been untrain

That was a great story. I liked that is was so detailed about alot of things. I hope you write more stories.

That was a great story. I liked that is was so detailed about alot of things. I hope you write more stories.

Good for Kouga! I like how you've protrayed him so far. Such a gallant guy. As for Kikyo...well she can just fall into a pothole and die...or maybe Inuyasha could push her off a cliff? Either or...I'll be satisfied :)

So I just finished chapter 5. Very romantic :) I actually went "awe" when I read their love scene. I like how you've created your own character for Sesshomaru. He's finally the dreamboat we all wish he was hahaha I gotta say I feel really bad for Inuyasha. You write him and his emotions very well. I can't wait to read more. One thing I will suggest since you seem to be doing some tinkering with the story is to break up your chapters a bit. In chapter 5 there are a lot of large paragraphs and they are really hard on the eyes to get through. Just something to keep in mind :) Great work as always!

- Langus

Just had to say...I loved that scene between Inuyasha and Kikyo. He called her out good! I'm glad he's getting a backbone when it comes to her and I like the way you've portrayed Kikyo thus far. I dislike her - just the right amount.

Ivy I saw this story in the feed today and I had to take it for a spin. I've just finished with chapter one and I'm impressed so far. I like how you've given the characters your own spin. It's OC but not in a bad way by any means. I really like where you're taking Kagome's character as well. I love it when authors write her as a strong woman, self-sacrificing and pure. She becomes the standard I think we'd all like to live up to. I can't wait to read more. :)

this story was................ AWESOME i love it so muchhhh i cried and laughed and giggled and a bunch of other things too! any who the
story was soooo great i don't know why you wouldn't like it my favorite part was when kagome and sesshomaru came home..... damn this review is long...... oh well, write more superdiduper stories

Amazing story, it is hard to describe how much I loved reading this story and reading your reflection at the end. The story flowed together beautifully and the character pairings were perfect to me. I dont like many fanfics that use original characters or have offspring who continue with the story but this was a definite exception. Great work :)

loved it. awesome

Okay... the first thing I want to say is that... THIS IS YOUR FIRST WRITTEN FANFICTION!!!???!!! OMG I love it seriously. There were times when I laughed and cried... I think people are starting to give me weird looks *eyes dart around suspiciously* Oh well, doesn't matter to me cause this story rocks. I am filled with irony (is that how you use irony? nevermind) that Souta ended up with Kagome??? Um... Well it was funny the way you repeated the names of so many characters...LAST BUT NOT LEAST!!! Let me emphasize on how much I LOVE YOUR FANFICTION!!! You are a great author, I look forward to reading the rest of your stories

At the risk of sounding cliched...I too am quite happy where life has led you, otherwise, we would not be fortunate enough to share in your talent...rather enjoyed your last soft moment with yasha...have a great day.

Astounding work, but then you are gifted *smile*

Whoa, Rin's arc was so intense. Please finish re-writing soon.

Oh my goodness first of all i really love this fanfic am going to add this as my favorite , and second when are you going to finish with rest ????

Nicely done.

I LOVED the story!

this is one of the BEST fanfics i've read in a very long time. i really enjoyed reading it. it's very very good. don't take it down don't be insecure about it cause it's really good.

I really like how you've weaved in the words with tender love and care. I know I might not be a good writer but like to read. So trust me in the two years that I've started with FFN, yours is the best wordplay I've seen. And I look forward to seeing it yet again.

For your first fanfic, I think you did a great job. Even though I am not found of reading rape I can see how you incorporated without dark there cannot be light. It was very interesting story basically due to the story was not surrounded on defeating Naruku but direction the lives of all major characters. It was ha very heartfelt story and I enjoyed reading your first story. I think that you should have more faith in you abilities because you are a great writer. Take from people like me who cannot write a lick but appreciates a good story to read. I am currently reading To know a man and I am enjoying that story as well. I look forward to reading more of your stories.

I am so VERY grateful to you for posting this story and LEAVING it up despite your misgivings. It is an EPIC!!! You don't know me, but your story ... this story ... helped me get through a very tough time today. Because this lovely, well-written, moving story held my attention so completely, I was able to sit through a whole day worrying about my youngest child. THANK YOU SO MUCH!

My son is fine, despite having a slight accident on his way back home today - mother's intuition, I guess. Without something as riveting and engrossing as this story, I would have been beside myself by the time he called me. As it was, I was able to stay calm and help him out of the ditch he landed in without getting all 'weird' on him. I cannot thank you enough for leaving it posted this time. Really. And I cannot use enough superlatives to describe what I felt while reading this. Please DO NOT take it down again. I've bookmarked it and want to be able to re-read it again and again.
:)
~~Wiccan~~

VERY good story.
Nicely written for your first story.
I really enjoyed it.

i really liked your story.
rins rape had me in tears. but i have to say the other rapes where really overkill. i mean after kagomes(2. one) rape i could predict the next one. one rape per story is enouggh to throw the reader through all emotions, but if a second one occures, one gets frustrated by the pattern and can'T give the victom enough sympathy. which is obviously needed.
but other then that i enjoyed reading your story. i have read it all through the night. it is five in the morning. so there is only one thing for me to be left to say: Good Night

That was sucha beautifully sad chapter! Your writing is absolutely beautiful and realistic!

i just found this story last night and i love it dont change it i look forward to anythig else you write

i found this early this morning and i havent stopped reading it since.It was great, well written and descriptive, nothing to be ashamed of at all darlin, i loved it, i look forward to reading more of your work, in the future.

This story is so good that I couldn't stop reading it. Before I knew, I had read 5 chapters. This story is so good but so sad. I hope that things turn out well for Kagome and Sessy. and I hope that they have another child, however, I have not read the whole thing yet. Keep it and never delete it again. NEVER AGAIN.

In this story Kikyo is showing herself to be the true bitch that she is. Normally I read it all before I review; but seriously I could not resist this one. After all that she has been through; I hope she does not lose because of something stupid and petty. Keep up the good work; this is very enjoyable!

You took this story down while I was reading it and it freaked me out. I LOVE THIS STORY! You have no need to be insecure about, I think its one of the best fanctions that I've ever read, and that's saying alot considering I've been reading for at least three years. If you take this story down again I'll have to do something drastic, and the first time I nearly cried...

Never, ever, EVER take this story down!

Shame on you! I was reading this earlier - had just finished chapter 9 - and when I clicked the lovely little link to the next chapter, it wasn't there. I proceeded to weep, mourn and wail, because not knowing what happens next is always worse than reading an entire story and hating it afterwards.

Not that I hate your story. So far, I'm liking it very much. It's much fluffier than many fics I've read, and fluff makes me squee inside. Yeee.