Wow that's got a lot of potential BUT I hate to say this but you seriously need a beta I don't mean to offend you but the way it looks and all those spelling mistakes is going to give you a VERY low score and even lower amounts of reviews. I know. I will happily help you. just email me with the subject of beta and the body of tyhe message saying you do want me to help. kk? thx

not to be mean or anything because whats writen is good but I think you need to add a little bit more to this chap. but post more soon.

hugs and puppies

Cool. i like it. NOw i demand and ask for an update. HEHE