| i love this story!!
Pirate- Sun 02 Sep 2007
Hey! I kind of, sort of, LOVE this story. I haven't seen anything like this, and if I have, it wasn't worth remembering.
I don't mean this to be a flame, but the comments are here for a reason, right? (I'm not even sure what the whole 'flame' thing is.) But, it seemed like you jumped right into it, and me, being a fan of detail, felt like it was too predictable and unrealistic. Maybe it wasn't meant to be realistic (Hence the use of animated characters.) If anything, I would make the dialogue a little bit longer. I loved the song choice in the first chapter by the way, that's the first song on the CD I listen to in my car every morning on the way to school. Anyway, wicked story, keep it up, I'm gonna go finish readin' it now.
Cheers.
Sarah- Tue 31 Jul 2007
| i really like your story there were a couple of spelling misstake. The only part i didn't ike was the fact that kagome smoked. otherwise great job.(3 th goths)
Shippo-chan- Wed 25 Jul 2007
Ur story FUCKEN ROCKS AND AI THINK KIKYO SHOULD BE KIKHO SO U ROCK IN MY BOOK.
and p.s. HOT TOPIC FUCKEN RULES
Shippo-chan- Wed 25 Jul 2007
Ur story FUCKEN ROCKS AND AI THINK KIKYO SHOULD BE KIKHO SO U ROCK IN MY BOOK.
and p.s. HOT TOPIC FUCKEN RULES
cheese- Mon 23 Jul 2007
| wow...kinda blew up there...but whatever...just a random question that i ponder pretty much every day...why do people not like hot topic...ok...totaly got off the subject...i really like the story...and would appreciate a post soon
blackstar- Sun 22 Jul 2007
| I soooooooooooooooooooooooo totaly love your story and ta hell with the flamers DONT stop.
Michelle- Sun 22 Jul 2007
| this is pretty nice story. I like it a lot, keep posting it. A good way to rub it off on those preps we have to be around everyday. Keep up the good work!
Azmaira-hime- Sun 22 Jul 2007
| I like this story, so plz post up some more chapters soon.
WildFireAngel- Sun 22 Jul 2007
| i love ur story it is sooooooo kool
| Hey I love the story. I'm glad your not letting those idiots get the best of you. Hope to see mmore chapters. :)
Kali-Chan- Sun 22 Jul 2007
Love The Story
Cant Wait Till
U Post THe
Next
Chapter :]
| Sorry to hear that you were flamed...it sucks, but, unfortunately, it's part of the fanfic world. Good for you for standing up for yourself, though. I've seen some writers abandon their fic after getting a flame. Don't let them get to you, and please update soon...
Vicious Grin- Sun 22 Jul 2007
pft. ignore those idiots. this story is your own creation and i could care less as to whether you are goth or not. its an awesome story about a CHARACTER thats goth. i've had people message me on my stories as to whether or not I'm attracted to guys that are old enough to be my father just because my plots happen to go thay way. it got to the point where i decided it was enough and just ignored it all.
keep writing.
ignore the idiots.
dont let them discourage you!
| Oh my gosh how could anyone flame this ART WORK!!!!!
Kristyn- Sat 21 Jul 2007
| now don't say that the flamers are not special because they are.....special ed any way. I just wanted to say that i really admire you for not listening tho thier shit and still posting your story i happen to think that is one of the better stories that have been posted
Krystal- Thu 19 Jul 2007
| I love this story tey are goth people who are awesome. Hope u finish this story.
elvira- Thu 19 Jul 2007
| holy shit!!...whats going to happen!!!..more chapters please!!
Slm_candle- Wed 18 Jul 2007
| NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! NOT BITCHYKU lol that's bitch naraku to you he must be saying right now. WELL what are you waiting for stop reading and start typing an update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
elvira- Sun 15 Jul 2007
| more chapters please!!!
Sheena Kinsella- Mon 09 Jul 2007
| love you fic its awesome please upate soon love the whole goth thingi im a punk skater fucken awesome music also by the way please update
xXxEmo-YashaxXx- Sun 08 Jul 2007
| im only review in chapter 1 and read till the end so far i love it :D but i..detest/despise/hate kikyo grr...clay pot..
elvira- Sat 07 Jul 2007
| this was freaken awsome!!!...more chapters please!!1
Sexy- Fri 06 Jul 2007
| I loved it I'm a goth myself. Keep wright.
Mitsukai- Fri 06 Jul 2007
I WANNA GET THAT PIERCED TO
and yeee it wahz the right time mushy bah nah too mushy
goood work=]
the storiess got my complete interest
soooo kudos=]
elvira- Fri 06 Jul 2007
| wow...awsomeness!!...more chapters please!!!
elvira- Thu 05 Jul 2007
| this is freaken awsome!!!...what labrae?...more chapters please!!!
im liking this one. im a fan of manson but hadnt heard of cradle so popped to utube and listened to some. they F*&%in' rock!!! thanks. keep up the fic.
tilayha
Ken- Thu 05 Jul 2007
| You updated the second chapter twice.
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