| wow can you please post the latest of chapters soon i'm biting of my arm here i'm really anxious and freakin' annoyed right now
angela yamazaki- Mon 14 Apr 2008
| wow can you please post the latest of chapters soon i'm biting of my arm here i'm really anxious and freakin' annoyed right now
Megan Consoer- Sat 15 Mar 2008
| I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
kags322794- Sun 02 Mar 2008
| i love this story please continue.
CrimsonRose- Tue 26 Feb 2008
| It was all good but you need more uh lemon inside.......hehe.
Hello! This is a wonderful story and it has an interesting plot. However, I couldn't help but notice that in the second chapter you switched from first person to second person in the same paragraphs, as well as back and forth between the few. This is somewhat distracting for the reader, so just a heads up. I also thought the plot is progressing at a mildly fast pace. You could try slowing down just a tad, maybe spending more time on descriptions.
I'm not being mean, I promise! You don't even have to take my advise. It's pretty much just out there if you're interested! Once again, this is a good story and keep working hard!
tina- Wed 23 Jan 2008
| please add to this fic i want to know how it ends cuz i really enjoy it.
a_big_fan_of_sesshomaru- Sun 07 Oct 2007
| goo story update soon
Sessygurl- Sat 15 Sep 2007
| Please update soon!
elvira- Fri 14 Sep 2007
| why would she get mad?...she did in fact want to sleep with him no?..more chapters please!!
elvira- Thu 06 Sep 2007
| loved this chapter!!..more pleasE!!
| Nice Story And Chapter Me Love ... Update Soon!!!
Slm_Candle- Mon 03 Sep 2007
| COOOLIO i love it so can you update. AGAIn and soon
Megan Consoer- Sun 02 Sep 2007
| I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
Sapphire- Thu 30 Aug 2007
| Ummm, there were no Kikyo bashings.
slm_candle- Wed 29 Aug 2007
| LONGER LONGER LONGER or even better yet finish it in this next chappie jk i want this story to go for a while. the next chasppie is 11
Katherine- Wed 29 Aug 2007
| Aww they were interupted(but inside I'm laughing at them) Lol Well any way great chapter cant wait to read more so update soon ^_^
elvira- Tue 28 Aug 2007
| damn you!!!..more chapters please!!
elvira- Tue 07 Aug 2007
| this is awsome!!!..more chapters please!!
Krystal- Thu 19 Jul 2007
| THis story is good so far I hope u keep writing this 1. later
elvira- Sun 15 Jul 2007
| this is awsome!!!....more please!!!...this is good!!
fluffylover- Sun 08 Jul 2007
| please update soon!!!!!!!
Katz- Sun 08 Jul 2007
| man you are evil making this ch so sort you mean but i love it can't whate till ch 2
| | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | 