i couldn't help to notice u have made everyones poor darely loved sesshy-kun OOC other then that i like the story
Bone of the father- Mon 19 Feb 2007
this is a very well written fanfiction.You have an extended vocabulary which I love because most people don't have good vocabulary. And it flows together smoothly and basically I love it. Please update soon. I'm looking foward to reading some more. :)
Mord-Sith Cara- Mon 09 Oct 2006
Wonderful story! Keep updating it! I lool forward to seeing it finished!
Siamh- Sun 17 Sep 2006
Oh my god... this is by far one the best fan fictions on this site that I have read! And I can honestly say that I've been on this site a long time. Anyway I hope to see more chapters soon. This is such an original plot line that its hard not to like.
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