Wow, that was really dark and strangely compelling... well done, I don't really like horror but i enjoyed reading your story

That was dark alright. Well written and dark. I would say I liked it, but that just doesn't sound appropriate (I did though).

omg. well, who wants to sleep anyway.

you're right HORROR is definately a more befitting description. That was rather....gruesome, very well written, but still gruesome, definately not your bedtime fairytale.

cooool

Well, when I began reading this, I actually didn't expect it to end that way but.. you said it and now I believe. That was amazing and I enjoyed reading it. I know this will be one of my favorite stories I have read ever. Thank you and great job.

-KB