its amazing finish it up soon lol

i hope u finish the story if not here atleast on dokuga im on chapter 20 and i am hooked its 5 30 am and i cant stop reading even though im dead tired keep up the good writing i look forward to more sesskaggy goodness

yaaaay i'm so glad you were able to write a new chapter i'll be looking for the story on the other sites, can't wait for the next installment :)

i love this fan fic please hurry

i love this fan fic please hurry

Just finished reading your story and I'm really enjoying it. I can't believe that's where you left it. Its killing me cause now I really need to know what is going to happen next.

humm your kikyo is kind of a bi**h.

Yay I Loved it the mini lime again and the pure cutenness of this chappie was too adorable. I hope you update soon hon I love sooo much and our strong Kags! hehehe

loves Arry

once again you stun me with your brilliant chapter!!!! i dont think those big dudes that took Kagome will be liking life much when Sesshy finds them (hehehehe) i cant imagine our dear little miko will be too happy about her current position either. also, im soooo frustrated with Sess and Kags getting interupted all the time! can they not get a moment alone?! every time someone inturupts them i end up cursing that persons existence. *sigh* but on a different note, i will DEFINENTLY be checking you out when you can no longer post on A Single Spark. its sad that this site is going down but what can ya do? *sad sigh* but i really liked this chappie!
your loyal fan,
Holysinner

*gasp* what's kikyo going to do?! she better not hurt poor kags! ^_^ can't wait for the next chapter! ^.^

i figured i would send my encouragements! because i know you like them (hehehe) i cant wait for the next chapter! LUV YA!!!
your loyal fan,
Holysinner

Lol just got done reviewing on AFF as well just forgot that you respond only on ASS. Yes the shakes are gone for now lol they may come back *shivers* haha but Biterness was really really great intense make-out sessions gave me a very nice fix hehe now I want an another lol

I'm glad your Grandma getting better now and she up and about!

UWUC my fav fic fix supplier Jenna! lol hey we all have our addictions your fic happens to one of mine lol

Loves Arry

sorry i haven't reviewed till now. i had to go through a little chaos including the start of spring break, a sick aunt, and an injured leg
(my injured leg to be exact). but enuff ramboling. ah, you've done it again. created a chapter that made me love this fic all over again. im happy that Sesshy and Kags made up. (it was sweet!!!!) and the part where that new incarnation (Hukio?...yeah...maybe.) killed Naraku im wondering if Naraku is really dead. i dont think he is because if he was that easy to kill he'd be dead already. and also i think kikyo should die. shes a BITCH!!!!! i loved Sesshy's opinion on her. i was like, "HA!!! everyone hates you! suck it kikyo!!! if thats not entirely your opinion then im sorry. well i've gots ta go now! LOVES YOUS!!!!!!!!
your loyal fan,
Holysinner

Man Inuyasha just doesn't know when to keep his mouth shut haha.... I wonder what Kikyo has planned, and somehow I have this feeling Naraku isn't dead, but then again is he ever? Great chapter can't wait for the next :)

That was really very good. I wish Inuyasha would stop getting in the way so that we could get some uninterrupted Sess/Kag action! Too much sexual tension between them! I want them to get to it already! :P I can't wait for your next update

love this entire story thus so far by far you are one of the most amazing and original authors out there im looking forward to more great stories and chapters from you great work please update soon im really interested to find out what happens next and what exactly inuyasha is going to do that he is so jelious hope you update soon ill keep checking well thats it

Sheena *hugs you*

MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE! Please?

I LUV YOU!!!! i loved this chappie. i loved how jealous Inuyasha got but i also liked that Sesshy got jealous too. i also liked it when Sesshoumaru was thinking that he may not want to be with her forever. i was like, "Yeah you are Sesshoumaru." oh and im sorry that i was hastling you so much when your grandma was sick. i sort of feel bad. but i love this chappie! its great! your great!!!! well ill talk to ya latter!
your loyal fan,
Holysinner

Keep going! I am also a writer on Fanfiction.net!

Please make Kagome realize her mistake in ignoring Sesshoumaru. He should have been who she thought of first, not the idiot Inuyasha. I was disappointed in her. Naturally, it's been her habit to tend to Inuyasha's wounds in the past, but did she have to be so vocally jealous in Kikyou taking over? Is she not the least bit concerned about Sesshoumaru's injuries and how he's reacting to her words and actions right after the fight? I want to call her blind and stupid right now because I'm aggravated with her for ignoring Sesshoumaru.

*suddenly the shakes stop* Yata! I'm cured from your awesome update! ^___^ Sooo Happy hehe.
I hope your Grandma gets well quickly and up and walking soon! I am very happy with this chappie update soo long and action-packed, with more plot twists and a touch of foreshadowing, hehe definitely made up for the wait Jenna. Can't wait for more you made a addict outta me. lol

Loves Arry

Ugh... I hate Kikyo now more than ever! Um... was the part about Naraku giving 'birth' really necassary? Oh well! Can't wait for the next chapter, and I love this story very much!^_^

aweee sooooomebody's jealous. haha cute loved it!

ya know what you should do?... UP DATE!!!! *ahem* sorry. i just really loves this fic. sooooo...pwease update soon. *puppy eyes*
your loyal fan,
Holysinner

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It's going on a month. I need my UC fix Jenna I'mma stick SM on you and badger you grrr:( lol well please really do update soon I'd be very happy and you won't be as mean since you left it at a cliffe! mou

Loves Arry
Ps. Attempt 1 to get you to update at attempt 2 in a week I shall call Sunset miko yup yup haha ^__^

HI!!!! I just figured id stop by and say...PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!! i really love this fic (in case you didnt notice) and im lacking on patients ^_^ i want another chappie alot. this is honestly one of the bestest fics ive read in a while! so please up date soon. 3
*hugs and kisses*
Holysinner

HI!!!!! i just figured id send my encouragements! i love your fic sooooooooo much! cant wait to see the next chappie and inuyashas reaction. (bet it funny. hehehe) i hope to see an update soon.
your loyal fan,
Holysinner

Oh me oh my now that was truly a great update but errrm seriously? are you really leaving your poor devoted readers on such a cliff hanger!?!?! Seriously? How cruel! :( Update soon please? I neeeedddd it like oxygen!

HI!!!! i was on the internet and i was looking threw fics, saw yours, and decided to send you my encouragements and love!!!! *kisses* llllllllllllllllllloooooooooooooooovvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeeeeee yyyyyyyyyyyyyoooooooouuuuuuuuuu!!!!!!!!!!!
your fan,
Holysinner

Ooohhh.... Kagome's in trouble! What's gonna happen next?! Can't wait for the next chapter cause I just luv dis fic!

Lovely story. The tension between the characters is believable and yet fun to watch at the same time. The latest development has be wondering about the outcome of the 'unmasking' of Sesshoumaru's interest in Kagome and vice versa.

I know I reviewed already yesterday. I just had to add something else that I thought of at work this morning. Instead of Sesshoumaru going his usual cool, emotionless self at the interruption, I say he'll probably go red-eyed to protect Kagome. In his passion induced haze, his beast thinks of her as his mate and I bet Sesshoumaru will go into the protect mate mind frame. I could be wrong but logically that would be more correct than him going all cool and emtionless.

HAHA I love this chapter minus the scary "I'm gonna find a way to kill kagome guy" The passion between sess and kag is great and to have the entire group come up on them while their in such an compromising position is fantastic. Can't wait for the update to see what sess is gonna do, this is gonna be great.

he he he he!!!!! that was funny! i cant wait to see what inuyashas gunna say...or, more specificly, yell. im sooooooooo happy you updated ^_^ its so beautiful! *hugs* *kisses*...*more hugs* i think its so cute how confused they are and i cant wait for the rest. cause doesnt Sesshy seem like the tipe to resist falling in love as hard as he can but once he does he excepts it? or maybe i just think that? OH WELL!!!!! anyways... i loved this chappie and ill be on the look out for your next chapter!!!
your loyal fan,
Holysinner

LOL! wonderful chapter... and the inu-tashi reaction...*grin* I can't wait o read more! :D
please please, I'm begging you, update really soon!!!

ah ha! That's great! >_ wow I can't wait to read the next chapter. ^___^

wow THIS GHAPTER IS HOT LOL
^_- I JUZ WISHED THEY DIDNT GET INTERRUPTED BUT HAAA THATS FOR U INUYASHA LOL I LOVE IT ILOVE IT BUT GOD U HAVE A PROBLEM WIT TEASING JUZ A BAD BAD PERSON BUT A AWESOME AUTHOR CANT WAIT FOR WAT HAPPEN NEXT UPDATE PLZ

KYAAA!!! I did got my wish that was so freaking hot and amazing sooo cool LOL

I hope Kagome will react like most people do in that situation besides being embrassed be PISSED! most writers make her all danity and scared in that situation and Sesshoumaru has to basically say 'shut the fuck up!' to Inuyasha in his words of course hehe.

I got the greatest little vision while reading your chappie Kagome Looks at Inuyasha and blushes bright Red but then see's his hand linked with Kikyo's and asks herself why the hell should she care about what he thinks? and Gets hellva angry and screams at him bloody murder with all kinds of profanites or something like that cos she knows that Sess is going to be distant again cos well this is new and just when they were letting go and just feeling Inuyasha ruins it and well she Blows up all the while Sess doesn't let her go and puts in his two sense ever so often hahaha that was my vision quite funny well it also had her beating him up but I think that's just me lol

Hope your next chap is her being strong in that situation and not the weak Kagome ppl make her she should be strong in and out of battle I think, It's one of the biggest reasons why I LOVE your story! UWUC hopefully soon lol hate to stick SM to you again lol. Thanks for the update.

Loves Arry

sorry I have not review in a while. I have been really busy and got a new job. Now about the story. OMG I loved that ending. that was beautiful. you captured it is such a way that I could not stop laughing. LMAO now. That was wonderful. i really think you are going great with this one.

I'm reading this on both sites haha and i love it. *la gasp* sesshomeru and Kagome caught in the moment again by inuyasha no less damn please update soooon i want to know what happens and all. Is Kagome going to actually show that she has a lot of power? just asking. Some time in the story you should have Kagome depend Sesshomeru and then go primal on somebody for doing something to him. He's always protecting her how about switching it a little bit?Keep it up i'm in love with this story. I'll be scanning the site for an update so do it soon haha.

OMG I laughed so hard at the end of that last chapter that if I didn't have such superb bladder control...well you get the point. Awwweee poor Kags n Sessh keep getting interrupted though that's a shame. I think this story (unlike my review) has a great "flow" to it. So many fanficts are choppy and difficult to follow, and there is definitely something to be said for good spelling and grammar. I can't stand having to decipher the meaning of something because people don't know how to use spellcheck. I can't wait for your next installment keep up the great work!

Hehe, haha, hoho. I had a real good laugh at the groups reactions at witnissing Kagome and Sesshoumaru. I was embarrased for Kagome and Sesshoumaru, too. Kagome will probably be red-faced and sputtering while Sesshoumaru will be his calm, cool self (on the outside). On the inside, I bet he'll be pissed at himself for letting himself get too distracted to scent the others approach, especially Inuyasha. Even though I enjoyed the hilarity of the scene, I wish they could have finished what they started with no interuptions. As for Takahiro, I've lost my sympathy for him. His heart and mind are now corupted completely.

I know that i promised myself i would only review when a new chapter was poster but i cant help myself. I LUV YYYYYYYYYYYYYOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *ahem* im sorry i just thought i would send my encouragements ^_^ hope you update soon!!!
your loyal fan,
Holysinner

I have been enjoying the heck out of this story from the start - sorry it has taken me so long to write a coherent review!!

I really enjoy the byplay between Sesshoumaru and Kagome, as well as the demon lord's confusion as to why he's letting her get away with so much guff. That's always fun to read!! I can hardly wait until the next chapter when Inu finds out that big brother has been hanging around our fave priestess... that, too, should be a really fun read.

Thanks for posting this delightful gem of a story. I'll be looking forward to your updates - eagerly!!!
:D
~~Wiccan~~

Ooohh! Sesshy is sooo hot! Ahem! Anyway love the fic and I suggest another Sesshy massage... Oh yeah no spelling or grammer errors and stuff I can see!

Awesome story. Update soon. Can't wait to read Inuyashas' reaction to Sesshomaru and Kagome and what Takahiro plans on doing to comply with Naraku.

YAY! lol I didn't realize you updated so I asked SM to bother you but you did and I got my fix! I love your story sooo much I often dream about it it's so good. I hope for a little Lime and Inuyasha runs in on it hehehe that would be great lol. UWUC (update when you can) hopefully sooner rather than later hehe
Thanks for the awesome update Jenna keep it up!

Loves Arry

The bush incident was absolutely hilarious! You are doing such a wonderful job of letting them slowly develop feelings for each other. When the time comes, I just hope they're honest with each other enough to admit their love for each other. I'm afraid Inuyasha is going to be a problem, though. He's not going to like what's happening. He'll probably do everything he can to stop their relationship. He may even decide to stay until she finishes her training just to keep them apart. I can almost feel sorry for Takahiru. He's going to end up being killed by either Sesshoumaru or Naraku. Either way, he's dead.

SWEET!!!!!!! I luved this chapter!! the head in the bush was hilarious! this fic makes me feel all fuzzy inside. i cant wait to see it when inuyasha finds out. Muah ha ha ha ^_^
please update soon >_ !!!
your loyal fan,
Holysinner

The "bush scene" was nothing less than hysterical! I have been following this fic from the beginning and I have to hand it to you- I like your style. Keep up the good work!

WOW!!! This fic is seriously great. I think your doing great portraying Sesshy and Kags. (And for the record i think your battle sceanes were great! When Sesshy and Kagome are together im always like, AWWWWW!!!! There are some really cute moments between them in this fic.
Hope to see an update soon,
Holysinner

This story is awesome. Please update regularly!!! I read it all in nearly non-stop. I love Sesh in it an love how you're letting Kags mature on her own. Keep up the great work!!!

this was a great chapter.....keep it up!

Dear iloveprettysilverhair,

I have to confess that I am a bad reader since although I am an avid follower of fanfiction, I am quite shy and tend not to review. However, when I read your recent author's note, I felt a guilty pang since given the quality of your writing, I am sure that your story is widely read and appreciated and that it is merely readers like me that give you a different impression by not expressing our appreciation. Please know that I think your story is wonderful. It is rare to find a story that flows naturally, has a good plot, is largely IC and has decent spelling and grammar. Yours is a gem. Thankyou for sharing :)

I thought you did a good job with the fight between her and the demons. You were right in not letting her defeat all five since she is still a beginner. It seemed more realistic this way. Now I eagerly await to see what else Sesshoumaru will say or do since he just had a little eye opener on his beginning of feelings for her. Nice little humorous touch with the Sango/Kikyou thing. As someone who has weight problems, I do not appreciate someone else's comments either.

What do you mean, nobody is following the story? I look forward to every chapter, and you're doing a good job keeping me interested. XD It's always a nice surprise to see an update.

i really like this story please keep up the good work!

Yay! Another chapter! I love this story. I can't wait for the next update! Keep em' coming!

I love this fic to peices! I can't wait for the next installment. It's just so...sexy! I can't think of a better word. Mmmmmm.... Sesshoumaru and back rubs... What more could a girl as for?! Nothing, I tell you! he he he This fic is so well written, I hope the next update is soon. I will be waiting on the edge of my seat.

Ja ne!

I'm really liking your story its quite good and the way you portray Sesshoumaru and kagome is perfect in my opinion. Oh I tried to rate your fic but I'm not a member so I figured I'd tell you that you get a 10 out of 10 from me minus a few spelling errors its great work.

This is way cool. Great orginal idea too!

Very well written. Keep it up:)

MidnightStar

Awesome story. It's written incredibly well and is actually one of the better stories I've read on this site.Really addicting; it's become another obsession of mine and I find myself checking every day for a new chapter. Please update soon.

Hmm what a truly lovely chapter! How smexy! It makes me want Kagome to train extra hard too XD. I really can't wait for the next update!

Takahiro was thoughtless and stupid to barge into her hut without being invited. That's uncouth and bad manners. I wonder how he plans to try to kill her with Sesshoumaru around all the time. I wouldn't mind having a massage like that one. Too bad it was interrupted. Are you going to let them be together completely before the group gets there? Because once Inuyasha gets there, his big mouth is going to protest loud and long. His mouth gets on my nerves sometimes, even in the anime. He can be so callous and singleminded. I fear the closeness and feelings developing between Sessoumaru and Kagome might receive some injury with the arrival of the group, especially from Inuyasha.

*grin* I really love your story and great chapter! Poor poor Kagome, embarassements are following her everywhere *lol*
please please update soon!

That was gtreat. OMG I am still laughing. Poor sesshomaru and Kagome. but I am still wondering about how Kikyo comes into all of this. Plus how is InuYasha going to react to sesshomsru being possive of Kagome. Well I hope you update soon. Bravo.

great job again! It was hot and sexy I love the heavy petting between sess and kag. I hope you make your story as big as Sunset Miko's cos it's that good can't wait for more! UWUC

Loves Arry

Hey this is not bad for your first fic. In the later chapters you can see that you are finally becomeing comfortable with your writing. I think you have a great plot going on here. I can't help but wonder what is InuYasha is going to say when he finds out about Kagome and Sesshomaru. That will be too funny. But keep going you are doing good and it is an easy read as welll. Good job.

I am really enjoying this story, please continue. Very nice.

EP

Aw shucks! Inuyasha let the others persuade him into changing directions. Just when things are beginning to ripen between Kagome and Sesshoumaru. They don't need the others, especially Inuyasha, interrupting them just when their feelings for each are at a tender, beginning stage. Hopefully the villagers learned something good from their mobbing of Kagome. If Takahiro attempts to kill her, he is going to be one dead human.

You know, it's been really really hard to find quality fics on this site as of late and I really don't care how anyone takes that because dammit it's the truth.

However, with a few exceptions, this story I accidentally found today is an absolute gem. I'm only on the second chapter and I can't wait to get to the last one. Keep up the good job.

AWWW it's cute! And I can't wait to see the face of inuyasha when he will see them interact! *grin*
please please update soon!

I hope you are well? I just wanted you to know that I am really enjoying this story and can't wait to read more!

I love it! Sesshoumaru is really beginning to let his emotions guide him where Kagome is concerned. He still wants to fight them but they're beginning to be stronger than him. Her feelings for him are getting stronger, too. A time will come when they will not back away from each other. Only you know when. I'll just have to patiently wait. I had a feeling she'd eventually have a confrontation with the villagers. I'm glad Sesshoumaru is going to oversee her training with the human warrior (his name just left my mind). I thought him despicable for taking Naraku's bait, but what he did while she was being beaten by the "good citizens" was beyond despicable. He'll get his just "rewards" when his "wife" turns on him.

I love this story, and now things are starting to heat up. I congradulate you on one of the best stories ever to grace a webpage. GOOD JOB! I'll be waitng for your next update ^-^

HEYA!! I love this story^.^Megumi makes me smile^.^ Just had to say that I love your story!! Keep up the great work.
WUV,
Jenna Lee

i like it very much!

I love the story! Can't wai to read more!!

I thought this last chapter was cute and funny. I'm glad you're going to make her strong. I hate it when too many stories leave her weakly using her powers. I like it when she's a powerful miko without being turned into a youkai or hanyou. That gets my goat. She's human. Leave her that way. One exception. I want her to have a long life so making her immortal while retaining her humanity is my ideal Kagome.
I've enjoyed your story so far. Keep it coming with the good updates.

plz post more chapiies
argotu,
B.W.

i love the story so far and can't wait for the next chapter to come out, can you send me an e-mail when you post it? if so thanks if not its ok. keep on writing!

Nice story