Reviews for I Remember by Musouka
Gem_Fluffs- Sun 04 Nov 2007
OH I LOVE IT!! HOW sad!! mean ol Kagome.
I do believe you should continue with this one. It's quite interesting, and I think it'd make nice for a chapter story instead of a one-shot.
But hey it's your choice!
I LOVE IT ANYWAY!!
Hope to read more brilliant stories from Miss Beautiful Deception (my fav writer yet!!) teehee
shhhh it's a secret..
I do believe you should continue with this one. It's quite interesting, and I think it'd make nice for a chapter story instead of a one-shot.
But hey it's your choice!
I LOVE IT ANYWAY!!
Hope to read more brilliant stories from Miss Beautiful Deception (my fav writer yet!!) teehee
shhhh it's a secret..
al- Mon 29 Oct 2007
this needs a part two,for redemption.
but it's entirely up to you.
very bittersweet,and disheartening.
but it's entirely up to you.
very bittersweet,and disheartening.
Kagomes_Inner_Beast- Sun 28 Oct 2007
Cool! The stroy is just fine how it is if not a little sad but I guess A sequel to the story wouldn't do anything bad to it!^^
anyways awesome one-shot
K_I_B
anyways awesome one-shot
K_I_B
Noacat- Sun 28 Oct 2007
You need to continue this. Seriously. Because persistent Sesshoumaru is awesome.
Leather_Wings- Sun 28 Oct 2007
stage "freight"?
Just one example of the numerous spellling and grammatical mistakes, but overall, it was fine. It could probably use some restructuring; the majority of your sentences start with "I", and a breakdown of the longer paragraphs would be wise. If you want someone to run through it with you, contact me.
Overall, well done. 3
-LW
Just one example of the numerous spellling and grammatical mistakes, but overall, it was fine. It could probably use some restructuring; the majority of your sentences start with "I", and a breakdown of the longer paragraphs would be wise. If you want someone to run through it with you, contact me.
Overall, well done. 3
-LW
yamiyo tenshi- Sun 28 Oct 2007
NOOOOOOOOOOO you cant leave it like!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thats about half as mean as the one-shot where he killed kagome. PLEASE write another ch. or trun it into a roundrobin.