FANTASTIC!! Your story was completely enthralling. Well told, well written, and left me wondering each moment how the chapter was going to shape out. You did a superb job of keeping it realistic and beautiful, as well as outlining the nuances of the family Kagome neglects. Everyone was realistic and in-character.

I am so glad I got the chance to read this! Spectacular!!

aaww..!! *sniffsniff* sweet yet sad. poor kagome. man, she quite literally has the weight of the world on her shoulders. i liked the story tho. very good.

FL

And here I thought I was the only one who cringed every time she laid hand on the bow.
Well any who I like the story quite a bit.

And here I thought I was the only one who cringed every time she laid hand on the bow.
Well any who I like the story quite a bit.

I think this is the best fanfiction I've ever read (and I've readen a lot). My heart still aches after reading your epilogue and that dialogue between pooh and piglet made me cry...I'm at a total loss of words, I would like to tell you what I felt reading your story, what I liked most and all but I don't know how to express myself...one thing I know for sure, you have no troble expressing feelings and emotions through your writing and I felt it while reading. I admire you writing style I really think you are talented (I can't tell you if there were grammar mistake or else since english isn't my native language, but I didn't have any problem reading so it must be ok) . You took my breath away...
I hope you don't mind all my complimenting you (I know that some authors prefer to receive constructing and useful reviews) but I really needed to express my gratitude for writing something this beautiful.
Thank you again.
sincerely

Ylenia

this was a great story. i love how it showed their relationship. it was very realistic in that sense that alot of fanfics are not. very good job!

I know you don't like it, but I am glad when you edit this story, and it reappears on the New page. Because in the mean time I forget about this story, so when it goes to the top I read it again as if I hadn't read it before.

In this world of 30 second escapes it is wonderful to find a lasting pleasure.
Thank you for all you hard work.

That was great, quite a compelling read. I could not stop reading until I finished the story (hence one review). No matter which Sesshoumaru, past, present, human or demon you were able to convey his personality with subtle differences to distinguish between each persona.

Impressive piece; eloquently written and well developed. Your depictions of the characters are precise in capturing their personalities. Their actions are highly probable and fluent. I love the bits and pieces of humor. Great story.

This story is wonderful and delicate and it never fails to make me cry, no matter how many times I've read it. I'm proud to have inspired a work of this quality -- truly, I think it's better than anything I've come up with.

I remember reading this on FF.net. I won't spoil it for anyone who hasn't, yet, but it's definitely worth another read, especially if there have been edits.

Looking forward to future chapters!
-Jupe