plss update....

Great story. Please update soon. I'll be checking every day until you do.

too short too short..... please update soon.......

Wowza: fast update Matsu~ I couldn't be more thrilled. I went and even reread the first chapter to prolong the suspence...yes, I am that hooked....

i love it please update soon cya

This is definitely not for kids of any age lower than 17.Maybe as low as 16,but no kids.
And so far,you're doing alright.
So,take your time and take care of yourself.
Good luck.
I await the next chapter with much anticipation.

Don't put yourself down, that was a great start!~ It pulled me in nicely, and I can't wait to read more. I did think that this was a one-shot though, because it's marked 'complete' on the summary page. While that did put me off a bit- I don't mind it too much because now I have a new fic to stalk! YEAH!

But to be serious this is a great first chapter, and I really will keep looking back on it in hopes for an update. Thanks for posting,
Kyuthe