Tyler Marie- Fri 23 May 2008
LOVED IT. You can't find many good and steamy one-shots with something other than the srcewing in them these days.

I loved the part where Inu walked in. CLASSIC.

tir3dgurl- Tue 18 Mar 2008
how cute and sweet! very nice one-shot!!! :) =)

TheMikoShivae- Wed 30 Jan 2008
yummy!

Nikki- Mon 21 Jan 2008
OMG your comments are just great. I loved your one shot. But then again I love all of your writing. But it is really great. You might have to help give me tips on how to do lemons LOL. Well I hope you update your other stories soon. Can't wait.

LordSesshomaruLover16- Wed 09 Jan 2008
loved it its amazing great job lol

Jestergirl- Wed 09 Jan 2008
LOL. I Loved it, nice little twist..yes the shower is a great time to think !!!!

MissTeak- Tue 08 Jan 2008
What can I say? This is absolutely brilliant!! LOL. I've never ever thought of this, and despite the excellently written lemon, I was having this nagging thought in me, like 'Crap. Is Inuyasha going to create a din when he opens the door? Is it going to escalate into some crying fest?' But no, what you gave me instead was a great one shot which would be in my mind for a long time to come. Overall, a job well done!:)

Violetcarson- Tue 08 Jan 2008
Hee Hee Hee. That was greaaaat. Loved it, and it was quite hilarious. Marvelous job.

ElegantPaws- Tue 08 Jan 2008
*CHUCKLE*

Nice one (wink).

EP

Vicious Grin- Tue 08 Jan 2008
Hehehe.
:]
I totally agree with you. Theres something about showers that just slap the plot bunnies upside the head and get 'em moving.

al- Tue 08 Jan 2008
Quite nice.
It's really refreshing to read fan fic that
requires neither party to cheat on another.
Other than go at it on perhaps what was the rehearsal wedding dinner.
But all in all,very good reading.

Kagome357- Tue 08 Jan 2008
THAT WAS AWESOME!!

What a nice little freak nasty before the wedding! How creative and original!

piratequeen0405- Tue 08 Jan 2008
What a fun little break from house cleaning! So glad I decided to read it. Thanks!

Sunset Miko- Tue 08 Jan 2008
Love it, but then you knew tht already now didn't you?

Diane- Tue 08 Jan 2008
You may want to fix the wedding part, you have the official saying you will which sounds off it would be better as will you a question instead of an order which it could be taken as as is. Hope this makes sense & is helpful.

Ava 365- Tue 08 Jan 2008
Gosh!!! I just loved it!!!! I could picture everything Sesshomaru was doing to Kagome.

Priestess Skye- Tue 08 Jan 2008
woo! hot and fabulous! Nice little twist on the ending too *g*

“What this Sesshoumaru does in, or out, of his pants is his own business,”

now this line had me ROTFLMAO absolutely hilarious...that part anyway

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