Well written, an intelligent interesting story, very in-character!

I loved it! I like where you are going with the story. I really like how Kagome had to struggle against the jewel rather than just purify it. Can't wait for more!

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-FangedBeasty

Love the story so far. It seems to be well thought out. I can't wait to read some more so do keep up with the wonderful writing. Update asap. If you put a mailing list together I would like to be put on it.

I can't wait to see what happens next. I'm totally sucked in now. Please update soon! ^^()

What a wonderful story to make an introduction on! Your writing style is fantastic and the story draws in readers. From the first sentence I was hooked! I hope to see you update soon!

I love it!! I loved the first chapter. The characterizations are spot on. I just love to read fics that get the characters right. I always thought that people that go and purposely change the characters so much should just go and create thier own characters! I mean whats the point then? I just dont get it. Any way, dont want to rant, just to tell u how much I love it so far and can't wait to read the next installment!

I know.....it's because he's insanely h.o.t sizzle sizzle ! Haha, I really like this story so far please update soon :)

Fantastic, update soon please.

Nice. Hahaha, Kagome is really in a mess. Stupid hormones. ;P The whole premis behind this story is what has me caught. Great title, btw. I really like what you've got here. I'm equally interested to see how this story/ relationship will develope.

As a suggestion to get more readers, move your author's note to the end of the second chapter thingy- so the short intro to the story is focuses on just the story, and the chapter which sets up all of your action (and really grabs readers) is next- Then tell us about yourself. By then you've got your readers hooked- I know I am- and your author's notes aren't a turn off for potential readers.

Welcome to ASS *giggle*- You have a great story in the making.

Thanks for sharing,
Kyuthe

wow please update soon it is a very good storyy so far and i would like to know what happened