Laberai- Mon 28 Jul 2008
OMG! I loved it! The ending was like a cliff hanger, but it was still awesome!

Nilee1- Thu 13 Mar 2008
Why am I crying? Great story, update soon.

Catherine- Wed 12 Mar 2008
That was a lovely story. I actually cried at the end. I'm a huge slacker and almost never review lol, but I figure if the story made me cry than I had to:)

Great job - that was beautiful and very original.

jo- Wed 12 Mar 2008
about halfway thru when Jaken is talking, you didn't close the italicies (i did not spell that right, i have no i dea how) thing right, you forgot the tag at the beginning ( , but you had /i>

Tajia- Tue 11 Mar 2008
You brought tears my eyes, such a sweet story! I hope you decide to continue!

LadySafire- Tue 11 Mar 2008
Oh it's lovely! Please continue it! You now have a lonely Miko and a lonely TaiYoukai. Their tale needs continued.

BeautifulDeception09- Tue 11 Mar 2008
Lovely Story ... Sesshomarus OOCness Cant Be Helped Even The Greatest Of Men Fall To Their Knees When The Death Of Their Love Ones Comes To Light

inumaru_rapture- Tue 11 Mar 2008
please add more? please?! PLEASE?!! lol i don't like to beg, but this makes me wanna beg for more. It seems like you can take it much further. This was really good either way. 33

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