I loved this fic! One of the best lemons I've read and I loved your use of second person! Fabulous!

i really loved how you wrote this fic. it puts the reader right into the action, making them feel like they were the actual characters. plus, you did it flawlessly! grats on finishing this great piece!

Heyyz, i really enjoyed reading your story, i must say it was... hot. -laughz- I will be honest to say that i didn't figure out sesshomaru's fantasy before it was uhh, expained. Guess that is just my virgin mind and what not... wait. did i just tell you i was a virgin? heh heh, ignore that.
Anyways, loved your story. you are awesome ~! 3
P.S- dun you think they'll get wrinkled? lol. jay kay.

You wonder if we liked it? I Loved it.

Oh, no no no no no no no no!!! It can't end!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I loved it, I absolutely loved this story I want you to write a sequel..please *puppy dog eyes* no but i really loved the style of this story and your writing in general, not too much but not lacking in details. Brava Diva!

that was so...... beautiful. the ending was incredible and it almost mad me cry. bravo bravo! (sniff, sniff) :')

Awesome fic. really like the twist you put in there.

THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL!
a wonderful fic with a wonderful ending!
I dont know what else to say. It was THAT amazing.

Nope, I wasn't able to guess. But I absoultely love that you went for the twist, I was never expecting that!! :D

It was a great story and no...did not guess the ending....however would love to see this story in the flip side....what possible fantasy could Kagome have?

Ok, I got the virgin lover thing but I missed the escort fantasy.

Mhmm! I thought this was the case!

Very very well written! Bravo~~~ 3

man! i knew it! the virgin thing was obvious... but i wasn't sure about the escort thing.. it was like in the back of my head. darnn... at least there wasn't a prize or i would have hit myself over the head for not going with my gut feelings. that was a wonderful story :D

I had a suspicion but second guessed myself thinking Nahh, it couldn't be that easy.
Just goes to show one should go with ones first impressions.
LadySafire

I kinda guessed it, but then totally second guessed myself and thought something else completely off the wall. It was so out there I can't even remember what it was;)

Oh lord, I do love this story. Which is weird because I normally can't stand reading AU stories, which is kudos to you. I'm not clear on the fantasy other than he wants to sample something pure, someone who pretends to be something their not but under the surface they are just scared.

i think... his fantasy was to deflower a virgin.... am i right? i had a feeling... but wasn't sure...

i think... his fantasy was to deflower a virgin.... am i right? i had a feeling... but wasn't sure...

Wellll.. If the other's are on the right track.. Maybe.. And I think I'm wrong, but maybe, he wants to see what sex might be like after commitment? To decide if he really wants to be committed at all? See, I knew it was stupid..
Aaaanyway, another excellent chapter! Please update soon! Love and fudgesicles~ Tainted

Ok I love this chapter my bf is going all horny on me with this chapter which I may add THANK YOU!! Also I would think this fantasy is being with a virgin and loving a person one night!!! Well or else he's just a guy that wants to fuck without regret!!!

I'm going to guess (and I'm probably wrong) his fantasy is just to have someone who gives a damn. For one night have someone he can pretend with to be the love of his life.
Either that or his fantasy is to totally dominate a innocent "working girl".
You are doing a wonderful job on this. Update soon!
LadySafire

I think he it try to give himself an illusion of love with out being hurt. He wants to know why guys are giving up to be single and being able to have who ever they want just so they could be with one person. To open himself to an intimate phyicaly to the softer side of sex. To tase the forbiden fruit persay.

Well you have done very well with this story and I love what you are doing with it. I can't wait to see where it goes. Please update soon.

my guess is that his fantasy is with a virgin, someone pure who he can love

Pleeeeaaassseeee update soon! I will die if you don't! And then you'll feel bad! Ok maybe not but please update soon!

I absolutely love this story - very unique in the POV & overall portray of the characters. 3

Is Sesshoumaru trying to make her fall for him? Does he want her complete surrender? Can't wait to find out! You're doing a great job so far.

I have no idea what his fantasy is that is why I keep reading, I have been hooked!

:)

-FangedBeasty

I'm STILL trying to figure out what it is!
popping virgins??? LOL!

"tall, handsomely dark hair, temptingly full lips, a well-toned physique, and smooth caramel skin." doesn't sound youkai but human. Other than that, I like your writing style. Update.

What's his fantasy... Well, as Sessoumaru himself thought, the possibilities are near endless. Honestly, I haven't a clue. Give us a teeny hint? Or are there hints threaded through the story...?
But... I really hope that at the end they stay together...
I love that she's OCD, though. Dunno why, but I do. Update soon, pleasy~!
Love and fudgesicles~ Tainted

ur fic is really, terribly hot! but why do u keep changing sess from havin' brown eyes to gold n back again. there's a part where u mentioned his hair being black then it magically changes into silver. what gives? u did d same w/kag's eyes 2, brown 2 blue.

lol Actually the idea of a virginal prostitute is kinda funny! Can't wait for more keep up the good work!

:)

-FangedBeasty

Oh, damn. I'm hooked. As far as lemons go, though, I think this one's turning out awesome. Splendifirous is the term that comes to mind, actually. Update {very} soon, please!
Love and fudgesicles~ Tainted
Do you have any other stories, I wonder... Must go check immediately! Though, it is a bit odd, I think, that Kagome's still technically a virgin. Oh well. No complaints here. Just makes it all the more interesting.

pant pant way hot!!! drooling on my keyboard, this is too good. please update soon

this story is sizzling keep it up . man update quick cuz I am at the edge of my seat .

I love it so far!! Such a tease!!! Please post again soon. I cant wait to see where this is going. Update soon please!!!!!

Can't wait for more!

:)

-FangedBeasty